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Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 19

My eyes are full of tears for this bittersweet ending! This story was EVERYTHING! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Stay tuned for an alternate ending. I'm going to want to know which one you like most.

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 19

Please make A sequel!!!!!! 



Author's Response: Lol I'm so glad that you want more. Unfortunately, I'm obligated to give the other story ideas in my head a chance at life. After I get a few of these other ideas out in the open, I may consider doing a sequel but I'm sure if one will be needed. In the meantime, be on the lookout for the alternate ending. I should have it up sometime this week. Thank you so much for following my story. It means the world to me :)

Reviewer: daridari14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

*round of applause*👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 this story was very cute and I loved it!!! Great ending too😉



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. It was an amazing adventure to write. :)

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 19

Omg I loved this book so much!!! So sad that it's done. You should make a sequel lol. Hey, can I make a request? You should do a story about The Titanic. Michael taking the place of Jack. Thank you!!!



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. Unfortunately, I have too many other story ideas in my head begging to be written. I have get these ideas out first before I can even consider a sequel. Truth be told, I'm not really sure if a sequel is needed but when the time is right, I'll definitely give it some thought. I'm flattered that you want more though lol. And thank you for your Titanic suggestion too. I won't throw that idea away but put it on my list of potential stories. Just from that suggestion I can tell that you are a hopeless romantic, like me lol.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:23 am Title: Chapter 19

AWWWW!! Oh my gosh, that was literally the perfect ending to this story! She chose to stay in Oz with her friends and her love, and on top of that, Glinda let her and everyone else go to see Dorothy! I absolutely loved this story!! I can't wait for the alternate ending!<3



Author's Response: Thank you so much! The alternate ending should be up sometime this week. I'll try to have it up soon so you can let me know which one you like the most. Thank you again for falling in love with my story :)

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 18

So Wickus is gone and the hard truths and decisions have to be made. It's incredibly brave of Scarecrow to let her go. "If you truly love something let it go and it will find its way back to you." That adage couldn't ring more true here. He will be an incredible leader and advisor and I hope that she decided to stay by his side. She has the love of her family but sooner or later she was going to have to venture out on her own to find her own love and make her own family so in a way this is her chance to do that. I'm sure there's a way for her to see her family again even if she can't be with them. 

Scarecrow is the best choice. Love should win!!

More soon! <333



Author's Response: Yeah, when it comes to love you can't be selfish so Scarecrow had to make sure he didn't pressure her into staying. This isn't an easy decision. Beatrice has to chose between the love of her family and true love with Scarecrow. Like you, I hope she makes the right decision.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 17

Gawd such a moving chapter!! And she's staying with him!!!! Yayyy. Nothing like pure love to defeat pure evil. She was made for him...well for Oz in general. It had to be their love to guide everyone to freedom. 

Verclempt!!!

reading on! <333

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2015 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 18

Oh thank the Lord! I thought she was about to make her final decision in this chapter. Thank goodness, I might die if she is too rash about her choices. 

I think they should've offed those skywatchers just incase as a little insurance. But lucky for them Beatrice isn't as vindictive as I am . However i do get the feeling Bea will stay. Please. Let. Her. Stay. Even Glinda is exercising her patience with Bea's decision so she has to choose the right one.

As usual, you always do a job on your chapters.Thank you.



Author's Response: A decision such as this one calls for special attention. Lol I'm afraid Beatrice has too big of a heart to take out the Skywatchers like that. I'm also hoping Beatrice will be smart with her decision making.

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2015 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 18

Oh please let her stay!!! She needs to stay with Scarecrow!!! And I'm pretty sure Glinda can make Dorothy and her husband go to Oz to live there too. They will age very well also. So please let her stay with Scarecrow!!!!

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2015 08:11 am Title: Chapter 17

Wow.....I don't even feel like I'm allowed to say anything right now. Because anything I probably have to say is just uncalled for.I'm just sitting here soaking it all in; silently basking, relishing in what has come to be Oz's new reality and honestly I'm upset Wickus chose a lonely death rather than a chance of redemption......

But guess what you sad,sick, cold-blooded(literally),Black magic wielding, peppermint, Warlock,bastard?!

ME: 

 

 

On another note I'm happy that Beatrice finally made a decision that everyone is happy with for the exception of her family back home, but happiness sometimes calls for bittersweetness. This chapter was definitively A major development.



Author's Response: LMBO That Wickus was so stubborn and hubris. Oz doesn't need beings like him. I'm going to try my best to make the next chapter worthwhile too. As always, I love your reviews and deep passion for the story.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2015 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 17

WOOHOO!! GO TEAM BEACROW!! That was awesomesauce! I really, really love this story! Don't make me wait too much longer for the next chapter, PLEASE!!



Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing out this chapter. I promise to update ASAP.

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2015 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 17

Yas she's staying!!! Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response: I promise to have the next chapter up before this week is out. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2015 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 17

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!! Love ALWAYS wins. Beautiful chapter!



Author's Response: Love Rules!!!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2015 06:18 am Title: Chapter 16

He has to make it. Bea has to save him!!!!!!! I guess this is kind of like the dream playing out but what's stopping her from screaming she loves him? She's screaming everything else. I just hope she gets to him in time.

Glinda!!

more soon. <333



Author's Response: Apparently, that dream must mean something after all, huh? Yeah, maybe if she shouted out "I love you, Scarecrow" instead of just "Don't listen to him, Scarecrow!" then perhaps the spell wouldn't have worked but it doesn't look like Beatrice realized that. Seems like she was just panicking at the moment. But hopefully it's still not too late. Lol Thank God for Glinda!

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2015 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

YES BEATRICE. YES GIRL. SAVE YOUR MAN AND YOURSELF BOO. YES. I am so proud of her!!!! and Glenda finally showed up! I wonder when she will be back to tell Bea what her purpose for Scarecrow will be. Time to defeat Wickus once and for all!!



Author's Response: That Glinda is so mysterious so no telling when she might show up again. Beatrice is more than ready to find out her purpose but first needs to save the one she loves and finally get rid of that dark warlock.

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