[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2015 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
No judgement here. You wrote better than I do now at 17, lol, but where did you go with this story? ;(
Author's Response:
Thanks Brandy and I doubt it! I will post some more when I get the chance. Red helped me edit it a little cos it was so bloody awful lol. I'm really focused on "The Accused" atm. The other ones are kinda "in the past" stories :)
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Date: Aug 19, 2015 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Just read this. Hope your gonna post the rest of the chapters! :) Loved it!
Date: Aug 19, 2015 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Just read this. Hope your gonna post the rest of the chapters! :) Loved it!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2015 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4
damn jody needs to realize not all rich folk are asses loved this chapter cant wait to read more keep up the awesome writing
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2015 09:21 am Title: Chapter 4
What?! This is awesome writing especially for that age. I love this story so far!!! But ouch! That last part... I know Michael was still burnt from eavesdropping on her phone call but I think he reacted a little too harshly. I mean who wouldn't assume Michael Jackson had a chef!