[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2015 12:11 am Title: Chapter 3
LMAO.I'm thinking The Michael Jackson effect was the main theme for this chapter. But I can see it spares no one, not even Tina who thought she was Invincible.
This was a good chapter. I adored her nonchalant attitude towards the K.O.P's arrival and hype that accompanied it. That didn't sway her curiosity or spark enough interest in meeting and seeing what's the big hubbub about this Brown skinny guy.
And MJ's reference to room 33?, I believe.''Oh, THAT room.'' Lol.
Thank you and update.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2015 12:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Man, I know I probably shouldn't but I pity Tina. The struggle, pain, confusion and overwhelming experience of regathering the fragments of a life you once grasped. Like the doctor said she's a rare case. She is strong, she'll manage, she has to.
But I do sorta wish she would be more tolerant of her parents and family members that actually do care about her and try to encourage her. A little patience.Man.
Thank you and update.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2015 11:43 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
This was just,AMAZING. Crap you can exclude Mike cause I forgot this story was even about him, untilll I read ur end of the chapter notes, Lol.
I loved the entire concept of the voices. I don't know, it's just so individual and practical. That charming conceptualization is what actually really got me attached to this story and I just.don't.know! I guess it's what made me know you're differen.
This story is nice, I love it.
Thank you and update. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you SOOO MUCH!! I'm so glad you like it!
Yeah, it was a hard part figuring out how I would play her when she was still in a coma, therefore the voices.
And to answer your other review too: I've really put alot of time in describing Tina and her situation so you really get to know her, since we all already know Mike pretty well. That's why theres two whole chapters without him, and I thought it was a good idea. There's a whole lot more waiting though!!
Once again, THANK YOU!!!
Thanks for the review and keep 'em coming!
:)
Date: Apr 06, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Seems like a great story! It wasn't Tina's time to go.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Well, no, there's A LOT more waiting more her.
:)
Date: Apr 01, 2015 04:27 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
This is very interesting.
I can't wait to read more.