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Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 08:52 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Sleepover - Farewell, My Sweet Love

Tahila ritornerà Michael dovrà dirle in modo deciso di andarsene perché non la ama perché ama Jordy.



Author's Response:

Sì, Tahlia sembra avere difficoltà a capire che Michael è preso! Lei è così disperata e Michael non avrà niente di tutto ciò. Non gli interessa, Tahlia !!!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 06:50 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Sleepover - Farewell, My Sweet Love

Well, someone forgot to pull out........oh, boy! I think Kylie noticed something. Like I said before, sometimes moms just know shit. lol! Tahlia better not show up again, or she'll be askin' for trouble. 



Author's Response:

He pulled out once! .... ......... ............ Yeah, okay. One out of how many times? Kylie, being Jordyn's mother, probably did notice something and, being a rational person, will let them do as they do until they go too far.... If only she knew what they'd done..

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 05:35 am Title: Chapter 19 - The Sleepover - Farewell, My Sweet Love

Yup she's definitely pregnant now 

Now hoping daddy won't find out or he'll be send to jail for a double murder,  or one anyways,  his ex best friend who fell in love with his daughter 

Im sure they'll find a way to see each other soon, they can't be long without each other 

 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah! Robbie won't be happy! But... Who knows... Some couples spend years trying to get pregnant. I know my cousin did. They might be lucky! I agree, they'll find an excuse soon!

Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2015 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 18 - I Promise

Sentiranno molto la lontanzanza, non può finire dovranno trovare un modo per vedersi.



Author's Response:

e certamente lo farà! Michael farà fare un piano, in un modo o nell'altro.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2015 05:30 am Title: Chapter 18 - I Promise

Girl, you know that I'll always be your number one supporter! <3 

 

Wow. Tahlia, though. I'm glad Michael stopped her before she did anything reckless......she might be gunning for revenge with the way he treated her, though. Well, we shall see. And poor Jordy, having to watch that. I wouldn't have frozen, though. I would've went into attack mode and snatched her off of him! lol



Author's Response:

I think most of us would've beat her ass too, but we gotta remember, Jordy's just a baby still (Mike's baby!) and she's, like, tiny! As in hobbit sized! This is her first ever relationship. Put it all together and I would've frozen too in her situation! When is that hoe gonna learn the meaning of TAKEN!!!!!! Fuck, can she get it through her thick, blonde skull?!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2015 05:17 am Title: Chapter 18 - I Promise

That ring is beautiful 

Uggh why did she have u to show up? Does she not know the word not interested?

Cant  wait to see when she has to go home and how they going to continue their relationship, 

And really they are asking for trouble if she wasn't pregnant before she definitely is now, do want to get in trouble?  Like real trouble?  



Author's Response:

I think when Le sex happens, Le brains go bye bye and all thoughts of caution are thrown to the wind! Let's just hope nothing really bad comes of it...

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 06:47 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Day On The Town

she gonna end up pregnant before to long and than her daddy gonna kill michael lol cute touch that michael bought the ring it is beautiful maybe its a engagement ring great chapter so worth the wait cant wait to read the next great chapter of this amazing story 



Author's Response:

I've got my last exam this morning, then I have the rest of today and all of tomorrow off, so you'll definitely see an update!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 06:46 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Day On The Town

Hopefully, Mike pulled out in time. I think the ring is a promise ring. It's just the type of sweet thing that he would do.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he has a thing for doing sweet things doesn't he?

Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 05:58 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Day On The Town

L'anello significa  vuole chiederle di diventare la sua fidanzata. 



Author's Response:

Forse, forse no 😜 è una possibilità, ma sarete tutti resta che aspettare e vedere!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2015 05:02 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Day On The Town

Pregnant or not the outcome is the same once Rob finds out 

Let's hope so this time it was in time or they asking for trouble, they ask for trouble anyways but still 

Probably that ring is a way of letting the world know she's taken or engagement ring? Kinda soon but who knows? 



Author's Response:

Everything you just said, I totally agree. Just have to wait and see with the ring!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2015 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Fuck... - Solution! or... Yeah...

Oh yeah I remember how he said that smiling lol that smile soon disappears when he has to face Rob 



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah! I think he regrets giving Robert that idea now! Wonder when Lia will turn up again...

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2015 07:52 am Title: Chapter 16 - Fuck... - Solution! or... Yeah...

well looks like jordyn may still get pregnsnt lol oops great short chapter cant wait to read more of this story 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I've got the day off today, so I'm gonna try and post a few longer chapters. I was fucking exhausted last night and could barely keep my eyes open. Even now, I'm just gonna go back to sleep.. Definitely an oops though... Looks like they've got a difficult time ahead of them.

Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2015 07:05 am Title: Chapter 16 - Fuck... - Solution! or... Yeah...

Non c'è soluzione rimarrà incinta lo terranno e Robert si infuria non potrà fare niente dovrà farsene una ragione



Author's Response:

si sa, è il modo migliore per guardare a questo. Jordyn è quasi 18, quindi se Robert voglia o no, non può costringerla ad abortire il bambino, né può farla smettere. lei sarà il 18, quando partorisce, che significa che è la sua scelta che cosa fare e Michael sarà lì a sostenerla fino in fondo.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2015 06:18 am Title: Chapter 16 - Fuck... - Solution! or... Yeah...

let's just hope she's not pregnant  but Rob is going to kill Michael anyways once he finds out



Author's Response:

No, no, he's going to feed Michael his own shit covered balls. Then kill him. Don't you remember?

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2015 06:15 am Title: Chapter 16 - Fuck... - Solution! or... Yeah...

Damn, that's crazy. So they can't use condoms or the pill. I guess when he has to climax, he'll have to start pulling out, unless they want her to have a baby, but, methinks Robert wouldn't like that very much.........



Author's Response:

Methinks Robert might just end up dead or in jail if Jordy gets preggers. 

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