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Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 10:26 am Title: Chapter 8 - Janet's Meddling - Sweet Revenge

Non riusciranno a fingere a lungo perché tutti e due vorranno fare l'amore.  Janet non potrà fare altro che metteresi il cuore in pace



Author's Response:

Vero, ma sanno che non possono fare l'amore ma perché Jordyn non è ancora 18. E 'solo un modo di liquidazione Janet up.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 08:04 am Title: Chapter 8 - Janet's Meddling - Sweet Revenge

I loved this chapter.  Way to go Michael and Jordy. I hope they can keep their plan going for a while and really get Janet going. 



Author's Response:

Haha with Janet's hot head, they're already half way there!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 05:41 am Title: Chapter 8 - Janet's Meddling - Sweet Revenge

Michael is hilarious! I liked his plan! Janet can't help but to be a irky little sister lmaoooo

 



Author's Response:

It's just what siblings do. I have a Janet type sibling. We do this shit to each other all the time. Usually she doesn't get away with it.

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 05:23 am Title: Chapter 8 - Janet's Meddling - Sweet Revenge

These two are an absolute mess, lol. Michael & Janet, that is. Jordyn is so oblivious to it all...she's so innocent.

Author's Response:

Yeah, but they're trying to corrupt her! This is called being siblings.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 05:20 am Title: Chapter 8 - Janet's Meddling - Sweet Revenge

That was messed up! I think that they'll keep up the charade as long as possible, or until Janet manages to figure out that they're faking it.



Author's Response:

Well that could be forever, knowing them. Mike's gonna pamper Jordyn so much...

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Janet's Meddling - Whispers of Love

Janet hooked homegirl up! Had her face beat by the Gods honey! Lmaoooo at Janet falling out! And Jordyn and Michael are soooo cute awwwwwwwwww!!!!!! Cute asses! I can't with them!



Author's Response:

Haha I got big plans for Janet when she comes to!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Janet's Meddling - Whispers of Love

Wow!! So it was Jordyn! Sneaky, miss Kola. Very sneaky. lol! Janet is a nut. Michael's gonna find something to do with her that'll have her vowing revenge, I bet........



Author's Response:

No! Of course not! He'd never do that! Geez... He's not evil.... More or less... You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing! You're my most loyal reader ever!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Sleepover - Janet's Meddling

I do get Janet's point. She is underage but dammit Janet why you setting him up on blind dates? She know he likes Jordyn! Well let's see how this goes 



Author's Response:

Haha I think you'll like how it went down. Even Janet went down with it. 

Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 11:57 am Title: Chapter 7 - Janet's Meddling - Whispers of Love

Stupita dal bel appuntamento organizzato da Janet. Finalmente alla fine si sono dichiarati il loro amore 



Author's Response:

Sì, è stata una bella cosa che ha fatto e hanno avuto una notte fantastica. Peccato che ha passato fuori alla fine.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 09:45 am Title: Chapter 7 - Janet's Meddling - Whispers of Love

beautiful romantic story i cant wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll be updating as soon as possible.

Reviewer: JayRenea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2015 07:39 am Title: Chapter 7 - Janet's Meddling - Whispers of Love

Amazing!!! Who knows what's gonna happen next. That was a beautiful ending to this chapter, can't wait till the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, Janet passed out. That's my favourite bit. I'll try update asap

Reviewer: Badgirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2015 07:30 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Sleepover - Janet's Meddling

L'appuntamento con la misteriosa ragazza non funzionerà perchè Michael è innamorato Jordyn



Author's Response:

Grazie a Dio per google translate! Non ci resta che aspettare e vedere cosa Janet è fino a, qualcosa forse che ha fatto veramente cattivo! 😊

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2015 07:16 am Title: Chapter 6 - The Sleepover - Janet's Meddling

Janet is trying to get his mind off of Jordyn, I know it! Something tells me it's not going to work, though. I wonder who the mystery girl is. Maybe Naomi Campbell? That dress is absolutely stunning, by the way! I LOVE it!!



Author's Response:

Haha if you love the dress, you'll probably ADORE Jordyn! I have a closeup for her and it is gorgeous! It might be Naomi, maybe not. Guess we just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: JayRenea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 06:59 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Sleepover - Heatwave (In More Than One Way!)

This story is amazing! But they should tone down a bit, at least until she's 18 because I'm sure that sexual tension is gonna get them caught if its strong enough. Keep up the AMAZING work and I'll be waiting for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha they already got caught making out, by Janet! I don't think Michael comprehends 'tone down'!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2015 06:50 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Sleepover - Heatwave (In More Than One Way!)

Well, knowing Michael, he's gonna tell her in the most romantic way possible. I think Janet gave him some great advice; he does need to tell her, and soon, otherwise he'll end up hurting her asnd breaking her heart.



Author's Response:

Yeah, especially since he will have to act like her second father in public. That would probably be the most confusing part for her because how is she to know whether he actually feels something for her, or if he's just looking for a quick fuck to laugh about later?

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