Date: Apr 28, 2015 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Bruised Knuckles
Yay! Can't wait! Glad to hear from u
Author's Response:
Thanks, I always try to respond
Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Sleepover - Post-Sex Snuggle
Michael said what he was really doing lmaooo
I don't know I think Kylie believe he can keep his hands to hisself
love the story so far
Author's Response:
Yeah, but at least Kylie can calm Robert down. Let's just call it mother's intuition.
Date: Apr 28, 2015 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Sleepover - Storm Tears
They about to get some morning love!
Author's Response:
Well... More or less...
Date: Apr 28, 2015 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Kisses
Michael feenin for some Jordyn
Author's Response:
Haha yep!
Date: Apr 28, 2015 10:22 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Kisses
How old is Michael? Is he younger than Robert?
Author's Response:
Robert is about 43, Michael is 38
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 06:46 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Sleepover - Post-Sex Snuggle
Ahh another job well done! I think everyone's gonna be suspicious now that Michael's said what he's said, but hey! That's the fun of risking things right? Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the update!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yep! But he's jut such a bone head. He can't resist causing trouble and he still hasn't learned about things that backfire.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 05:07 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Sleepover - Post-Sex Snuggle
I think Kylie is making Michael feel guilty, because it seems like she has suspicions about his attraction to Jordy, and sometimes mothers just know shit.........;)
Author's Response:
"Sometimes mothers just know shit..." I love how you put that. I totally agree. Although, he's a boy so he may be a little slow at figuring that out...
Date: Apr 28, 2015 02:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Sleepover - Storm Tears
This story is getting good n I think mj was not out of line 4 kissing her it could have went further but he respected her and I like that. I think he will wait for her until the time is right I like it continue with the story if u plz
Author's Response:
I'll be writing and posting the next chapter as soon as my laptop is done charging. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: Apr 27, 2015 07:01 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Sleepover - Storm Tears
They could get into a lot of trouble, but I support the couple. I LOVED IT!!!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, to be fair, Jordyn is literally just a few short months away from being an adult, AND they both seem to like each other. So long as they stay away from sex until she's 18, they're fine. Right?
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 05:53 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Sleepover - Storm Tears
Ooooh, it's heating up between them already! I wonder what's going to transpire........
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! He's doing his absolute best to control himself, but an entire night alone in that house, just him and her? Exactly what does he think he's playing at?
Date: Apr 26, 2015 07:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Kisses
Please Post A New Chapter Today! I'm Smitten!
Author's Response:
Haha I'll surely try! But first, it's not even 7am here yet...
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 06:36 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Kisses
Yeah, Michael was wrong for kissing Tahlia but I found it funny. xDDDD Keep up the great work!! I cn't wait for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha I agree! If brains were dynamite, that moment shows that he was clearly a dud. I don't have to work tomorrow, so I will most likely update. Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it 😁
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 05:30 am Title: Chapter 2 - Dinner and Kisses
Hmmm, I'm thinking that Michael kissing Tahlia could have a lot of repercussions if he's not careful...... Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, maybe he could've been smarter and kind of just... Not kissed her? He definitely wasn't being intelligent there, no matter how smart and funny he thought he was.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2015 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Bruised Knuckles
You've done it again, Kola! I really like it so far! Csn't wait to see more!!
Author's Response:
I knew you'd find me eventually! Yep, I'll hopefully be updating at least once a week.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2015 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Bruised Knuckles
Really like your first chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks 😊 I hope you like the rest of the story to come!