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Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2015 01:15 am Title: Chapter 18-If We

Actions speak louder than words. Ppl are so fickle, D will have to take every day & step at a time. Michael is something else entirely!

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Date: Dec 27, 2015 12:54 am Title: Chapter 15- Signs

Going through pains and pressures from either someone else or from yourself isn't worth the total price you pay overall IMO.....

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Date: Dec 27, 2015 12:49 am Title: Chapter 14-Start Over

D had to make the decision that worked for her, Michael Married Jackson can't have his cake, pie and pudding too. 

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2015 12:45 am Title: Chapter 13-Good Advice is Hard to Come By

Her "mother" has some strong & valid points, its up to Dominique on how everything plays out.

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2015 12:38 am Title: Chapter 12-Lie to Me

Hot mess central! I hope she doesn't make any rash or too hasty decisions simply on Lisa's lies & putdowns.....

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2015 12:32 am Title: Chapter 11-A Bad Case of Crabs

Trai's cute.... A change always will do you good! Seems as if she may be pregnant.... Oh boy! 

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2015 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 6-Hot Date

Self love & respect is an absolute must for anyone to possess. We're already complete, no one can fill in any so called gaps. She needs to wake up from this craziness and leave it and Michael alone...... Not worth it. 

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Date: Dec 26, 2015 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 37-Underneath the Tree

Oh so this was a flashback. It took a me a sec to catch on. I been slow for the past few days and I don't know why, lol. So don't mind me.

Anyway, I'm glad to see that he's given Christmas a chance and is actually celebrating it now that he knows and understand the true meaning of it. I'm sure it took him some time to adjust to celebrating it being that he was a JW.

But finally, he got a hold to Dee and made some winter wonderland love huh? He miss his baby and even bought her has a diamond necklace. Why not me Mike? These two are so cute 'together' I swear. Too bad he's married....

 



Author's Response:

Right? I feel like Michael and Christmas just go together. I can only imagine what Neverland looked like decked out in holiday decor! -heart eyes-

Yes, they were adorable together, and I'm sure from Dominique's perspective she was hurt about the situation. She doesn't even get to spend the actual day with the man and you know he didn't spend the night either. 

 

It's very bittersweet...at least on Dee's end.

Reviewer: justdoitbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2015 10:23 am Title: Chapter 36-Always Be My Baby

amazing !

Reviewer: DirtyKayKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2015 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 36-Always Be My Baby

My emotions are so mixed when it comes to Michael. One minute I can't stand him and in the next, I want him and Dee in bed together. Right now i'm rooting for some makeup sex, but I'm not sure if Dee is down. Right now she just seems so defeated like she wants to end the pregnancy and the relationship. i honestly can't even predict what may happen in the future and that's one of the reasons why I love this story. Keep it coming. :)



Author's Response:

Haha! You know untill you said something, I didn't even think about them sexing anytime soon, but the tension from Michael's side at least, was definitely there ;)

Dee is at a weird place right now. She's still deeply in love with Michael, but there's alot of pain there as well and I still don't think she has registered that she's pregnant. And it doesn't seem like she's happy about it.

Makeupsex between these two would definitely be hot, but Dee and Michael have a lot of bull shit to get over.

I'm so glad you love the story! Your reviews are always A1. Plus you're a great writer yourself so I'm glad you find my writing entertaining :)

I hope to update sometime this holiday season <3

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2015 04:57 am Title: Chapter 36-Always Be My Baby

I don't even think they needed lawyers and contracts involved. Them sitting and talking was less tense and hostile than the meeting itself. 

The only part of the contract I don't agree with is the OBGYN. Women need to trust their doctors so especially that kind. It should be  Dee's choice 100%

Michael is in sweet mode for sure. What he needs to do though is put up and shut up about the divorce. Him telling his family will be interesting. I can imagine how Mama Kat will be when he tells her he had a baby outside his marriage.

And Dee should keep Trai at an arms length after this. Nothing can go down between them that won't cause animosity. 

The future is most interesting. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Right?! I guess Michael thought getting lawyers involved would be the only way to see Dee and to come to an agreement! She was being super difficult early on.

And you have a good point, I hope Michael will take Dee's input into consideration for the obgyn

 

Yesss, he's being very sweet here. I think it will be very interesting to see how the family reacts. I can't imagine it going smoothly

True, I feel like he already feels pushed to the side for Michael so I can't see him willing to do more for her, but who knows

 

There will be an update during the holidays :D

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2015 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 25-Truth Is..

wow! Ok that was a shocker. really wasn't expecting that one there. I actually think that trai will be competition for Michael.

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Date: Dec 13, 2015 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 23-This

Finally she ends it!!!! YESSSSSSS!!!

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Date: Dec 13, 2015 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 21-Seven

Gosh I really don't think that I can belive a word that comes out of this mans mouth anymore! lol But, we will see if he is telling the truth.

Reviewer: Mercy77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions

OH GOD! I pray that she doesn't make things worse. She needs to just talk to Michael abou the whole thing. She does not need to get another man involved.

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