Date: Jul 08, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yea I get what you mean you like darker stories that could be easily realistic and you don't like the cliche sugarcoated fantasies. I love psychological themed stories/films etc. there just more interesting to me. Instead of the typical slasher chases stupid teens. I like more humorous ones, crazy situations, some funny erotic ones, lmp/mj ones, I like ones that aren't predictable and cliche and just overly cheesy romantic. I have yet to find a darker one that I like but hopefully you'll change my mind:) ugh can he not rape her again or tie her up in a basement and torture yea mind goes there. Seriously he is a fucking asshole but I can tell it wasn't by choice it was a bunch of crazy shit that made him that way. Cool story:) I like where you're going with it
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2015 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow... I can see why this chapter seemed to be hard for you to write...
I hope that Michael will apologize to Lucy for what he did to her, and that Lucy will shelve her pride and find it in her heart to forgive him, too...
Anyway, keep up your super-cool, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Date: Jul 06, 2015 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
- he's crazy wtf
Date: Jul 06, 2015 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry just realized this one is your first story, haha my mistake. I look forward to more from you though:)
Date: Jul 06, 2015 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I totally get what you mean. I hate that cheesy, Nicholas Sparks style running off into the sunset stuff. Out of curiosity what are your favorite horror stories/films? I love some of that kind of stuff I just haven't found any good ones lately. I don't think that fairytale stuff is realistic like at all, it's cliche and annoying. Ok thanks for answering my question though:) I actually get what you mean it's why I love Game of thrones so much if you haven't watched it you should it's awesome. Yea unicorns and 'innocence' (my least favorite word) bore me to tears. If you want to convey what you were talking about with it being more freaky and such don't turn into a domestic violent relationship and try to make it look romantic. You know what I mean? Why I hated 50 shades was because it was an inaccurate portrayal of bdsm which is based on consent and they tried to make it look romantic that there was no consent and there wasn't any of it in the books the film did a better job but wasn't quite there. You're an awesome writer by the way I'm really intrigued by this:) I'm gonna have to go check out your other stories now:)
Author's Response:
I didn't like 50 Shades Of Grey too... But Michael's and Lucy's relationship won't end up like this. I got my insipiration from other MJ Fictional stories based on bullying, crime, kidnapping, stubborn hoes, hurt/comfort , suicide etc. ... Btw not a horror movie expert in fact, but I've watched some basics. Paranormal Activity, Anabelle, Mama, The Exorcist, Deadly Women [Series], all of the Saw's and more. Talking about horror, I'm more into mental horror. I cannot find the right words to express it at the moment, but it has to do with psychological issues. Anyway, which kinds of MJ fantasies do you like the most and the least?
Date: Jul 06, 2015 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
He is NOT right. God she needs to report him. Can I ask why you decided to have him rape her? I mean you can't build a relationship off of sexual assault, I hate it when rape is used as a plot device to give sons reason as to why a girl is traumatized or when it's out it and it's made to look like it's not really rape but she still doesn't want it. I love the details you put in about how someone who's an illegal immigrant doesn't have many citizenship rights so if one is assaulted they can't go to the cops otherwise they would get deported. That's really interesting that you wrote her as being one, it's really cool actually. You don't hear from the perspective of one in fictional stories like this too often or maybe that was just in my experience. Anyway great job didn't love the rape like actually hated it. Him being drunk doesn't justify it either. She's a legitimate victim of a horrible crime why I think prostitution should be legalized so they can go to the cops if this happens. Great story loving it.
Author's Response:
I don't know how to express it, but I like stories with freaky stuff. I don't want a love story with unicorns and pure innocence. I know I am a psycho for making Michael look as a fucking criminal, but, to be honest, I love horror/hurt plots that slowly convert into new situations. You will see what happens next, we will have a lot of plot twists. Just a warning; this will be a story with a lot of violence, not only from Michael's side. Thanks for your review btw. <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Neat... :) Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too (except for the lack of paragraphs)...
Keep it up with your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Neat so far, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very unique and beautifully creative writing... :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. :) Ι will update the next chapter today or tomorrow.
Date: Jul 01, 2015 10:01 am Title: Chapter 2
That. Was. Some HOT sex. And good for her for refusing to obey him. She knows her boundaries & won't let anyone bully her into doing something she doesn't want. Like taking off her makeup & swallowing
Author's Response:
Yeah it was hot. Lucy and Michael had hot sex. Yes she knows her boundaries and won't anyone to tell her what to do. I can say that you liked the chapter 2 of my fantasy,right? ;)
Date: Jul 01, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 2
- damn that scene was crazy and now he's upset
Author's Response:
Yes he is upset. What will happen next? Hmm we'll see soon!
Date: Jun 30, 2015 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Continue this its so HAWT. love the title by the way
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like my fantasy. I liked the title too. ;) I will update the next chapter tomorrow.
Date: Jun 30, 2015 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
- OMG continue this is so entertaining
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you enoyed the 1st chapter of my mj fantasy. It's my first fantasy. Maybe today I will update the 2nd chapter of the fantasy. I hope you will like it.