[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dang so she's been assigned to him ever since the da he was born into this world. The Way God works I tell ya. I knew she was sent to him for a reason and that reason was to give him a heads up about all the bad that's gonna happen to him. Maybe it won't, maybe it will. I hope not and that Hope can make them go away. Mike deserves peace and happiness for once.
Date: Aug 31, 2015 07:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Dayammmm!!! You're fantastic!
Shit now that she broke her vows...will she be cast out? Or sent back up to Heaven
And I always knew she was an angel. Wondering if she's always been an angel just sent down at different times or she used to be alive?
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much chica!
We'll see what happens in the morning girl. Hopefully, her punishment isn't too severe. You know in the Bible it says that when angels were intimate with humans, they created giants. Crazy right?
Stay tuned
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh Lord. This chapter was good. The ending really got me there. I knew she was an angel in disguise. I said it So many times. But where is that blood coming from though. I'm so hooked right now.
More soon please.
Author's Response:
I'm currently writing the next chapter. Not too sure of where this is gonna go. The blood is from where her wings ripped through her skin. Gruesome right?!
Thanks for for sticking with me Zendaya.
Date: Aug 10, 2015 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this!!! Again, you're incredible at what you do. I'm inspired to write like you.
Please keep this going <3 You have a gift.
Also, have you heard of mjjfanfiction? It's an upand coming fanfic site and everyones super talented and sweet. and it's interactive. I'd love for you to join us <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 03:00 am Title: Chapter 3
Hope is so mysterious, I swear. Like I said in my last reviews, I believe she is an angel sent by God. They way she slips up at times gives her away. Or... I coukd be wrong. But I believe she is one to look after people.
Now, I don't blame Michael for asking so many questions.Sneaked curious about her and that's what makes this story great.
More soon:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm really trying to keep the mystery going with Hope.
What if she is an angel though? What would that mean? What would it do for Michael?
I'll updated asap
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
HMMM... VERY INTERESTING I LOVE THIS!
No other story on this site has caught my attention the way this one has. I cannot wait to read more!
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. It means a lot to me to know you enjoy it so much. I'm always so nervous when I post my work :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
AMAZING.
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE THIS!
You captured my attention within the first few lines. This is VERY well written!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 02:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Hope has really got me on my toes with her. I think she is an angel in disguise who was sent to watch over Mike and inform him of all he things people in his life are trying to do to him. I really believe she's a damn angel. She popping up at everything and everywhere he's at. Lol. Or... coukd be someone of the future. Anything is possible right now. But I hope Mike takes what she said into consideration and watch his back. People are very cruel.
Btw, I guess he didn't adopt Samantha after all. :(
More soon.
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2015 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the first chapter. It was great.
But .... I do feel so sorry for Samantha. Her mother passed giving birth to her and her no good of a father left her. Smdh!!!! What's wrong with some men nowadays??? But it's good to know she's smiling although she didn't have any parents.
Now... this mysterious woman Hope... I can tell the kids love her and she makes tem very happy. And I also see she piqued Michael's interest so soon. Hmmm...
But why do I feel tha in due time, Mike is going to adopt Samantha??? It's just a good feeling he is. I hope so. She deserves a father and someone to love her unconditionally.
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2015 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the start to your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you!