Reviews For Brown Eyes' Blues
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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 10:47 pm Title: One Two Many For Dinner

Maybe she will be less available. Or she could become more visible. Or she may just go back to New York City.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 10:17 pm Title: Seal This Deal

It will last about 7 minutes..:-)....



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Lol. <333

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 04:25 pm Title: So Close I Could Taste

Yes, I really did expect him to take care of her. He is just taking his time until she comes around and is comfortable with him.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 03:52 pm Title: Popcorn?

Mike wants her badly.. you always want what you can't have.. you always craves things that you are allergic to. But you want ben anyway. And you continue to eat them even it they make you break out and itch with no end insight...:)



Author's Response:

Yesss this is the perfect analogy for them at this point!! Like you want something so bad you would brave an annoying itch to have it. <333

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Gelato...Cold Then Hot

It was good. I really enjoyec reading it.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 02:51 pm Title: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr

Wow! What a dream, Mike..Especially when your not with that person yet. Eventually, maybe he will, get with Charlie or she will all be in his dreams..

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 08:54 am Title: Leaving On A Jet Plane

A good start.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 07:25 am Title: Wanna Be Startin Something

I like the start.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2015 07:13 am Title: Prologue...

I want to know what happened to them.



Author's Response:

Welcome to he story!!! You're in for a rollercoaster of a ride as I'm sure you already saw!! <333

Reviewer: mjjlover1120 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2015 09:04 pm Title: Positive

one more chapter?? its too soon! but that means the baby is coming!! this is bittersweet. Girl the chapter was bittersweet. I definitely can understand Charlies initial fear of bring pregnant. Sanjee literally had exactly what Charlie is getting but she lost her life and her baby. It's so sad but Im sure Sanjee would want nothing more than to see Charlie have the baby. Im ready for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah one more. Going through all the reviews I'm feeling bad now because it does seem short but because of how insert it up when I wrote it I already conceded that it would end now. It as a long time coming I can tell you that much. Lol. Yes Charlie and Sanjee did very parallel lives when it came to their romances. What happened to Charlie and Michael have them true perspective as to how fragile life can be. You can be happy one minute and the next you lose everything. Sanjee will be their angel! <333

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2015 11:43 am Title: Prologue...

Very intriguing. Although I don't like Michael being a player its definitely iworth reading.

Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2015 06:02 pm Title: Positive

Why end this story? Its very good with a great depth of feeling and emotion. Would you reconsider?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and feeling this story. I'm ending it now because when I first wrote almost 5 years ago it I had planned to end it with this chapter. I'm doing an extra one because some readers requested at least one more. I didn't want to prolong it so it got stale for people to read or to add unnecessary drama to keep it going. I wanted them to find their love and be happy in the end. They went through a whole lot this story. I hope you understand because I really am happy you liked the story. I'm all for happy endings. <333 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2015 02:02 pm Title: Positive

Seeing the Michael at the beginning of the story and the Michael now it's like wow he's a completely different person!!!! I'm so happy they are having a baby!!! That child is going to reduce this already soft version of Michael into a freaking bowl of mush! It's so sweet that they will name it after Sanjee! 

Glad to see us both climbing out of our creative block holes!!

Ugh I can't believe I'm saying it but I missed this Michael lol



Author's Response:

It's amazing what real love can do to a person. He fought so hard not to fall but when he did he hit every bone on the way down. They both did. Michael is going to be such a sap for that baby. Yes I thought it would be sweet if they carried on Sanjee's name. I knew you would miss him!!! Lmao. You love him dearly. 

Creepy internet LOVE!!!! Km glad you came to grips with it. You fought the love harder than Michael did. Lmao. <333

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2015 08:41 pm Title: Positive

This chapter, I related to so perfectly because I had an emotional breakdown yesterday. I was talking with my aunt and we were just reminiscing and stuff and talking about my grandmother who I lost a few years ago due to ilness. And you know how you trying to talk about the good times you had with that person to the  point you break down and realize you can never have that again in the flesh with that loved one. I mean I was gone. It was sad. And I'm just overly sensitive too. Lol.

But, I'm glad that Sanjee is put and laid to rest to be with the good Lord and his heavenly angels above. I was getting teary eyed myself just reading this. Why you had to do this to me tho Tut??? ;( lol. It's sad that she's gone but we all know she's in a better place in her real home now where she belongs.

And Charlie and Michael are expecting?!?!?  Omfg!!!! I'm so happy for them. You know they say, when a person leaves another is being brought into the world. As.I see it, with Charlie losing Sanjee as her sister God is feeling that empty void with that baby. Baby Sanjee. I was one of those babies myself so I know girl. 

Just so your ass should know, we ain't cool nomo Tut. How you gone do a sista from Louisiana like that?? Huh?? Do I need to beat you Bayou style up in chea?? Gone end this story at 24 chapters. Why not 42? You're so wrong for this. I think I need to get the authorities for this, for you!!!! Kml. Nah. I love ya girl. I'm sad it's getting ready to come to an end but i enjoyed it From the beginning to the almost end.

Can't wait for the last update. 



Author's Response:

Awwwwwe Bew!!! I know exactly what you mean. I lost my Grandmother a few years ago and I still feel the lost to this day. Is painful to lose someone like that. Hugs and Kisses!!! I knoooooowwww. It's a short story I didn't mean for it to be this short but I don't want to drag it on. I think I kind of let go of it being such an old story. I just want to give it a good end. I was going to end it with this chapter. Lol. <333

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2015 08:19 pm Title: Positive

I can't believe it's almost over! This has definitely been a wild ride. Sanjee would be so proud to see her loved ones showing just how much they loved her. Naming the baby after her definitely proves that she'll live on.

This was emotional as hell for me. So much has happened and it's coming to an end. The baby's on its way and I am so ready for it to meet its parents! It'll come into this world knowing it was loved and definitely came from love.

I'm just so happy for these two. They waited all this time for each other and they're forever connected through baby Sanjee.

UUUUUGGGGH

This has been great to experience. I'll leave my dramatics for the last chapter

but thank you for this

thank you for sharing this <3



Author's Response:

Yeah it's come to an end. Like finally. It's been 4 years in the making. This chapter was started a whole year ago of you can believe it. Lol.

The send off had to happen. I didn't want it to be a while funeral scene. I got super emotional writing Sanjee's dads lines. Yes baby Jackson is on its way. Looking forward to the dramatics. Lol. <333

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