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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 03:20 pm Title: LAOT: Mike Where Are You?

Aww God. This chapter got me scared outta my effing mind. First Ashton pops up and now Ghost creepy ass trying to blackmail Mike in a crime he did not committ but there are witnesses so how in the Hell that's gonna work?? Ghost you dumb as fuck bruh. Dumb. I hope nothing bad happens to Mike. He's just now starting to be successful and he's on the right path and everything. Why would he want that sabotaged???

More soon. 

Reviewer: GreeneyesforMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2015 11:04 am Title: LAOT: Mike Where Are You?

Why does Ghost just attract me, like damn that ghost. lol 😂😂😂😂

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Haha right! He's a true bad boy but he looks so good lol, a smooth talker too

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2015 09:02 am Title: LAOT: Appreciated

Aww! Little Mar Mar is just too cute for words. I know MJ is missing them like crazy already lol. Poor Kai. I feel that if she was working or in school right now she wouldn't have time to be so paranoid about MJ and constantly waiting on his phone calls. She really should try to find a hobby to keep her mind off of things. I feel bad for her. I feel that MJ will stay faithful though. I think he's finally got it this time around. I can't wait until they see each other again.

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2015 07:41 pm Title: LAOT: Appreciated

I love their relationship right now their growing so strong and their daughter is absolutely beautiful 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 09:30 pm Title: LAOT: Appreciated

Marliegh is so freaking precarious. Like OMG, Michael and Kai created such a very very very very very beautiful little girl. I would hate for Her to grow up cause all them thotting ass lil boys gonna be all in her face. I can see Mike already getting into protective daddy mode real quick, lol.

I see that rehearsals are going good for him as well as he preparing for his first show. I'm more than positive that it will be amazing. Everyone is loving him already So I don't see what can go wrong. Just nerves I guess. And I did not know Katherine had a sister!!!!! Wtw!!!

Lastly, who the Hell is this at the CVS with Kai... well ran into her there??? It better not be Ghost. I have a feeling it's him.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 02:51 pm Title: LAOT: Kai What Are You Gonna Do?

Awwww i wanted to cry myself. Mike finally left to go on tour. I know he's gonna miss his babies so much. Kai just dont know what to do now without him but like he said, everything is gonna be cool.

and their mother's b-day is coming up. In a way, i want them to go visit Stone but then again i dont. Im flip flopping right now. But they deserve the truth about their mother's death.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 02:02 pm Title: LAOT: Kai What Are You Gonna Do?

Whoa! That's deep right there but I think they do need some closure. That definitely won't be an easy thing to do but Honor and Kai might feel somewhat of a burden being lifted once they get some answers. Like Kai, I'm over here begging Michael not to leave either lol. More soon.

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Date: Sep 15, 2015 01:24 pm Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :) Pt. II

Awww! I don't want him to go either 😭. He better come back soon and make sure his ass stays faithful this time. Im glad he and Janet are going to get to know each other. And I think I'm starting to really like Dallas. It was sweet of him to help out with PJ. I think it shows how much he really likes Kira. And Joseph really needs to get his ish together and stop being messy and causing problems. Overall, very entertaining chapter.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2015 10:00 am Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :) Pt. II

I'm so glad everything worked out between him and Janet. He sure did said some things but it's not her fault why you guys parents separated y'all. Don't punish an innocent person Mike, but I'm happy that they talked it through enough to agree to get to know each other. Made my day. 

And now the tour is fine ally about to hit the fan. Poor Kai. She doesn't want him to go but he got to. She better send those pictures he asked for too. He's gonna need them.

More soon.

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Date: Sep 11, 2015 10:34 am Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :)

Ah! Don't tell me some ish is about to go down at the movie premiere? Everything was going so beautifully. Please don't ruin it, Joseph! 😬 nice work. O really enjoyed this chapter.

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Date: Sep 11, 2015 10:10 am Title: LAOT: Don't Get Caught

Lol I just knew someone was going to catch them. But I rather it be Kira than Katherine, Uncle Jimmy, and Honor. Lol talk about awkward and humiliating 😨

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2015 08:44 pm Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :)

Omg, I am so proud of Mike and I know he's proud of himself too just like everyone else is. Poor thing was a nervous wreck about his short film but accordingly, every one loved it. I bet it was amazing. I know Marleigh was proud of her daddy as well. Smile full of gums. Lol.

But dang, Joseph is showing up with Janet that Mike never knew about the sister he had. Lawd, I already see where this is going for the night. 

More soon.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 10:37 pm Title: LAOT: Don't Get Caught

Awww Mike is about to leave in a few days. I don't think I'm ready for that yet. He's gonna be leaving his two babies behind for a month or two. :(:(:(

But damn, they just couldn't wait any much longer for the sexual healing, huh? Damn. Mike teeing it up and Kai, well, she's whimpering. 

So funny that Kira caught them in action for  once. Lord the visual.

More soon.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 06:13 pm Title: LAOT: Don't Choose Him, Choose Me

Very beautiful chapter. I'm so proud of MJ. That was so sweet what he said to her. Made my heart melt. He's becoming quite the man. Yes he is 😊

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 11:36 pm Title: LAOT: Don't Choose Him, Choose Me

What??!?!? Mike didn't flip over Kasey and Kai walking away...together.... to find his watch that he lost??? Okay. That was a big shocker a change I should say. But Mike knows what's the dealio between Kasey and Kai and Kai and him So there's nothing he should be worrying about.

And the part where Mike actually expresses his he feels to Kai just... ugh!!! It was a sweet moment for me.

More soon.

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