[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2015 07:33 pm Title: LAOT: Family Matters.....or na?
Okay. Kira is really starting to get on my nerves now. I understand that she can't control her feelings, but if it's threatening to ruin her friendship with Kai then maybe she needs to move out. Seriously. She better NOT do anything stupid at that party! 😡
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2015 06:48 am Title: LAOT: Fresh Start
Another very beautiful chapter. MJ is the sweetest. And that little love session was also very nice 😉. They both needed it. It was long overdue. Can't wait to see them begin their new life in their new home. Glad you got over your writers block because I was really anticipating your next update lol. Very well written chapter 😌💜
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2015 08:29 pm Title: LAOT: Fresh Start
Marleigh is such a cutie. Hitting her uncle Jimmy all across the ace and whatnot. She gets it From her daddy for sure alright, lol.
Damn, I wasn't expecting that surprise. Michael finally back home fr luring and I couldn't have been more happier for Kai. Made me want to cry too and takes only been three weeks like she said.
And now the surprise was THEIR home in the future. Awwwww!!!! Mike is really doing such a great job being a father and companion to Kai. The Love is real.
More soon.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2015 03:51 pm Title: LAOT: Deep In Love
Ooooooh i knew it. I knew I knew it!!!! I knew Kira still had feelings for Mike. I was aiming for.Jimmy but Michael? Damn son. Like c'mon now Kira. You know better than to still feel some type of way.about.Mike. He doesn't want you So why feel that way? Smh.
And I still feel so sorry for Trey. Ole boy ain't have to do him like that. Got the nerve to tell him he in love with someone else. Luca would have came.up missing that exact same day fucking with me. Lol.
So putting Niin a different position wasn't so bad. I ain't gone lie I was holding my breath a bit cause I ain't ' know how she was gonna take it but she took.it well.
Now this lil fast tail dancer need.to gtfo somewhere. I don't like her already.
[Report This]Date: Oct 05, 2015 01:51 pm Title: LAOT: Deep In Love
Girl you were very sneaky here! Had me thinking MJ really might have planted another seed out there. Thank God he didn't! Lol and I knew Kira was still crushing on him. She really needs to try and not give in to those involuntary feelings she has for him before she ruins her friendship with kai, as well as Michael. Also, I know MJ has mad love for Kai but...I really wish he'd stop flirting with other women dammit!!! Lol more soon.
Date: Oct 03, 2015 10:25 am Title: LAOT: Oooooo
Please write more. I enjoyed reading the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you ! and I will, I have many more chapters coming up soon!
Date: Oct 03, 2015 06:26 am Title: LAOT: Beautiful
Good idea, Mike.. great idea bringing the fam to see the show.
Date: Oct 03, 2015 05:56 am Title: LAOT: A Learning Process
Ut oh.. He's calling in Joseph. The ultimate manager.
Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:57 pm Title: LAOT: Oooooo
Great chapter but now I'm confuse as hell. Please tell me Katherine was kidding about MJ having other children. How would Katherine know anything about that when MJ doesn't. If he did know then he would be around trying to raise them but he's not. So it can't be true, right?...Right??? And who the hell is Kira talking about? Oh, please tell me she still ain't hooked on MJ. Because that was just so long ago and she really needs to move on from it before she messes up her great friendship with Kai. In other news, I think that was very mature of MJ to make Joe his manager. Like him, I pray that everything will work out for the best. Once again, great chapter! More soon :)
Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:31 pm Title: LAOT: Mike Where Are You?
Ghost is crazy. You have to always be careful who you hang around with. Everybody is not your friend. And, you don't want everybody to be.
Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:14 pm Title: LAOT: Appreciated
Who is that jules or Joe,or ghost?
Date: Oct 02, 2015 08:23 am Title: LAOT: Kai What Are You Gonna Do?
That is something to rally think about.
Date: Oct 02, 2015 06:59 am Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :) Pt. II
Very touching.
Date: Oct 02, 2015 02:00 am Title: LAOT: This Is Your Night :)
Wow! I guess now everyone will meet Janet.
Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:11 am Title: LAOT: Don't Choose Him, Choose Me
Good job!