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Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 08:27 am Title: Only 1

I love this story! Do you think you could do a chapter that shows us what the Bad video would look like with Daya in it, please? I hope so!

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2016 07:47 am Title: Who's Bad

Aww! That was so sweet!

Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2016 07:15 pm Title: Only 1

Love the story so far, very well written. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2015 11:06 am Title: Holding Back

wow, i love it



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I'm glad you do. Thank you for reading and reviewing

 



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I'm glad you do. Thank you for reading and reviewing

 

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2015 09:34 am Title: Heated Conflicts

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!

 



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Don't worry. I'll definitely continue with this story :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 11:57 am Title: Heated Conflicts

i love it lol



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I'm glad you love it :) lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 10:45 am Title: Heated Conflicts

please continue



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I will update on this soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2015 11:49 pm Title: Dream Blues

U know I'm reading anything u write cuz ur such a great writer in so many ways. I love the pics u have of them 2gther. They r 2 cute! Keep this story going going going!! Mj and her need 2 have some alone time or are they not there yet?! OK hold slow it down in taking things a lil fast. Im so in love with this couple right here! Are u going 2 finish ur other story? I know u know which 1 I love. I'm so glad u made a comeback honey and if u ask me personally...u never  left!! Ur the best and u know it!! Hope 2 hear from u soon!!



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Thank you darling :)

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2015 11:34 am Title: Fireflies

Just read this chapter and I love it!! Idk what Karen's deal is with her being with mj but she needs 2 leave her alone and just let them be together. I know she's up 2 something, if I could jump in the story 2 let mj and Dana know what kind of person Karen is I would so gladly do it!! I love this story, ur such an awesome writer, ur talented, plz keep doing what ur doing, cuz I'm loving it! I think Dana is gorgeous 2 me and I think he sounds and looks like aaliyah, I like that pic of her. Hope 2 hear from u soon!



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I'm glad you loved the chapter :) 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2015 08:23 pm Title: Jackson's Bad Girl

That's right Zendaya defend your man and she was more than within her right to slap the piss outta his ass,huh how are you gonna call yourself idolizing this person and doggin him out in the same breath have several seats trevor.And i love how michael called in  to    check in with her and make her aware of what was coming and how low down for someone to leak her music.But like she said she's thrilled but at the same time apprehensive but i hate to say it that's what is going to come with territory when your dating the most famous man in the world and i wonder i know she loves michael and she wants recognition for her music but is she really ready girl i can't wait for more great chapter really.           



Author's Response:

We'll see if Zendaya is really ready for the fame and popularity and the results to come of her fame. But I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'll hopefully have an update after school or this weekend. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2015 05:59 pm Title: Jackson's Bad Girl

She did right 2 slap trevor, he had no right 2 talk about mj like that. I don't like him  cuz he didn't have 2 say those things about mj but I love mj and her relationship, they r 2 cute! I wonder how mj sounds over the phone? I imagine he sounds highly sexy! Plz write more of this awesome incredibly great story! I love it a lot! It's 1 of my favs, hope 2 hear from u soon



Author's Response:

Man I would've slapped him too lol and Ikr they are adorable together :) I know Michael sounded sexy over the phone too lol. But I'll hopefully update either after school or this weekend. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2015 11:53 am Title: Jackson's Bad Girl

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!



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I will hopefully I can update this weekend. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2015 03:16 pm Title: The Bitch Comes Out

AWWW!!! Happy belated Birthday to you and i hope you resolve your family issues it'll all get better in the end so try not to worry don't know what your family situation is just use your writing as your salvation and i promise it'll get better.Once again you've outdone yourself your a very gifted writer loved this chapter so much everything was on point you had me laughing my butt off with those cracks zen was throwing at ole crabapple karen so freakin funny and mike and zendaya's chemistry just gets stronger by the second their lil make out session was the most.And so glad mike put karen in her place tryin to come for his girl not happening and he let her know straight it wasn't goin down like that this chapter was well worth the wait girly no worries your story is still the bomb to me.



Author's Response:

Thank you darling :) and thank you for your understanding and support for my work. I really appreciate it a lot. Once again, thank you! There will be an update pretty soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: TazB913 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2015 02:16 pm Title: The Bitch Comes Out

Happy Birthday I love your Story.....Mines was on Sept.13 



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie and happy belated birthday :) I'm also happy you love this story. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:43 am Title: Who's Bad

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSS!!!!He asked her to be his girl and she said "YES"their officially a couple super couple that's what i'm talkin bout and a big "F"YOU to the haters and i do mean ole pasty face karen and zen's dad.And by the way can i just say how creepy her father is standing at the window watchin her talkin bout michael is'nt man eough for her it's like dude you know your her father right it's like now that her star is about to shine he wants to turn into creepy stalker dad makes me wonder was he always like this and kept it hidden?or did it start when michael came on the scene just weird.But anyway she's gonna be so stoked when he asks her to be in the bad video their gonna look so good and be so hot in that video and now that their officially dating that video set is gone be fire and everyone will see their together i just know its gonna be good.great chapter once again.



Author's Response:

Ikr about time lol. Don't worry about the bitch Karen. Let the haters like her and her dad hate on Zendaya. And you'll find out if her father was always like this or not in the future. And LMAO ''old pasty face'' OMG you always make me laugh when you review. Thank you a lot! Hopefully I can update pretty soon. 

 

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