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Reviewer: Areyoulistening Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2016 07:51 am Title: Chapter 2. Anger

Hey! This was amazing! Please  keep on uploadoing <3 It brought tears to my eyes

Reviewer: ave Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 2. Anger

I've got to say - I love it so far. Both Michael and Sam are so cute. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope to have more soon. :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2015 01:59 am Title: Chapter 2. Anger

Finally he admits he loves her! He CANT die. 



Author's Response:

I know!! Can you imagine knowing someone for a decade and only after all that time decide you're in love with that someone? Good thing he's not dying; he just thinks he is -- though that's pretty bad, too. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1. Denial

I can see why Kendra is concerned about Sam feeling like she has to do all this stuff for Michael but she is a good friend of his and friends care for each other... Now if she was taking it further and helping him bathe, going shopping for him, giving him a foot massage etc I would then be like girl noo lmao, having said this tho if it was my friend wanting breakfast in bed, would I...? nah son, they got legs lol

Can't wait to see where this is headed, please do update soon lovey :)))



Author's Response:

I'm not even sure how she'd make up some logical excuse in her head to help him bathe, but I feel like Sam would, partly because I think she's living in some deep denial about how into her best fried she is, so now I'm totally gonna make it a challenge to myself. I think she'd draw the line at the foot massage, though - the man can afford a masseuse. :)) Thanks so much for your comment! 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1. Denial

Loving this!! Kendra does have a point. Sam shouldn't be waiting on him hand and foot because she thinks she owes him. Doing nice stuff for a friend every once in a while because they are your friend is healthy and ok.  What could she possibly owe him for? I see why she agrees to marry him she's very masochistic in that way where she will do whatever even if it hurts her to make him happy. Thats all very honourable and all but its going too far. Love where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the awesome comment! And yes, Kendra is definitely trying to be the voice of reason, even when everyone can't always appreciate her perspective. Sam will definitely have to figure out if she really feels obligation or love -- and, if both, which one is ultimately stronger than the other -- for Michael. And not to worry, little by little we'll learn a bit more (organically) about Sam's past and why she's internalized so much responsability in her friendship with Michael. For now, though, she's just doing what she thinks is right... :D

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1. Denial

 I don't like Kendras negativity so much.... But I guess I understand her concern for her friend. I know Michael is going to love Sam and she won't feel the same. I'm not prepared for the heart break but I'm curious of where you're going to take this. Even though it's only chapter three I think this will be one of my favorites. Continue soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it is becoming a favorite! And I agree -- Kendra's negativity is definitely a bit much, but I also figure she has to be frustrated, seeing those two dance around each other for years and never actually get anywhere. Hopefully they'll get somewhere now. ;)

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Prologue

Love it. Your writing style is amazing. I came wait to see this all unravel. I'm very curious of how this is about to go down.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! :) We'll see how it all unravels...

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 03:38 pm Title: Prologue

Ooooh very interesting indeed *smirks* I love it! I can't wait for the update, thanks for attracting me back to reading MJ fanfics ^_^



Author's Response:

Yay! I hope you'll enjoy Chapter 1 as well, now that it is available. ^^

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 03:28 pm Title: Character Biographies

FUCK YEES!!! Not gonna lie this is the first time I've been on the site for a while but now it's caught my interest, nd its all because of you!

I've been longing for agees for someone to do something Bollywood related ideally with the gorgeous Aishwarya and Michael paired it, so when I log on and find this it's like my prayers have finally been answered, praise the lord :D

Can't wait to read the first chapter omg

 



Author's Response:

YES! Another Bollywood fan? Ah!! I'm typing like crazy so I can get through the introductory storyline and get to the rest of the fun! :D Thanks for the awesome comment.

Reviewer: eaw112 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 07:17 pm Title: Prologue

Love this, poor Dan lol.



Author's Response:

Yay and yes - poor Dan, doesn't even know his paycheck's on the line, lol! 

Reviewer: Crazyme Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 06:08 pm Title: Character Biographies

Really like the start of your story. You've got my interest

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :) 

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 05:46 pm Title: Prologue

Now this sounds interesting! , can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving it a chance! Hope to have more soon. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2015 05:14 pm Title: Character Biographies

Sounds interesting and a fun ride. Continue?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a chance! I really want to make it fun and light-hearted. The Prologue is finally up. I meant to put it up together with the biographies, but was having some computer problems for a moment there. :) 

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