[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
a great story so far i look forward to reading more of this story
Date: Nov 12, 2015 09:20 am Title: Chapter 3
Uh ohhhh 😏, Michael is spending the night at Justice's house. Lord, i wasnt expecting that at all. Im sure India is gonna go crazy in the morning when she sees him. She is so cute, btw.
Also im so curious as to what the background story to her name.
Author's Response:
Ikr?!!! India's gonna flip the moment she sees Michael lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2015 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
HHmmm... I actually like this. I can't wait for you to continue.
Author's Response:
Aww thank you! I'm having fun writing this one :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2015 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
cute story so far looking forward to reading so much more of this amazing story keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
awie my heart can't take this!!! Haha but seriously thank you :) Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Date: Nov 10, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Which film is justice based off of?
Author's Response:
Justice is based off of the character Janet Jackson played in the film 'Poetic Justice' it came out around 1992/93 it's one of my fav films and I absolutely loved how Janet portrayed her! Lol I was actually watching the movie the other night and thought to myself, hey it'd be cool to have a character like that in my story! She's a tough cookie who's been through a lot, especially when it comes to relationships and loss yet she manages to keep her head held high :) India is based off my niece but also in the film Lucky (Played by 2pac) and who's also Justice's love interest (in the film) has a daughter. So basically India is a mix between that little girl character and my own niece haha. If you haven't seen the film I recommend it! It's awesome! There's just a lot of profanity haha
Date: Nov 10, 2015 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg India is adorable!! Hes probably LOVING that this kid has no idea who he is! Thank you so much for your support!! I really needed that:) shes not in treatment, I have to find an interventionist who will convince her she needs medical help. Except the one i met wants 10 grand😒 or at least a 6400$ retainer. Thank u for the hug needed thata d for offering to talk😘. R u on twitter, have an email or something? Btw which era were you picturing for when he came to her house? 😊
Author's Response:
India really be thinking that it's a Michael Jackson look alike rofl she's too precious! And yeah my Twitter is @marshall_tosh anytime you wanna talk! I'm here for you girl anytime :) I was sort of picturing like the end of the bad era meets early dangerous era when Michael went over Justice's house lol Dangerous album didn't come out yet ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2015 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
India is such a cute and sweet little thing.
Great 2nd chapter.
Author's Response:
Ugh ikr?!! India's actually based of my 6 year old niece! She's a trip haha and thank you!!! It means a lot :)
Date: Nov 10, 2015 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg continue this!! Sorry i havent reviewed in forever!!! Dealing with family shit, my moms an alcoholic and I'm working on getting her into treatment. Ok i disagree I mean shes not at fault in the relationship because she didn't want kids, i mean its just immature and awful to throw a relationship away because you want different things and not try to work it out to save it. She obviously wanted to not only go cheat on him but not work on relationship and then play the neglected wife w/ a cheating husband role. That's a cool name btw, justice:).
Author's Response:
Hey! I've missed you! Sorry to hear about what's going in your family :( hope everything turns out well with her treatment! If you ever need someone to talk to though, always know that I'm here :) I think it's safe to say that Lisa never really wanted to be with Michael in the beginning and he truly had feelings for her. I'll definitely try to go more in depth into what went down in their relationship in future chapters though! I've had this story in me for a while now and thought it'd be pretty cool to finally start uploading it lol I've always loved the name Justice btw! It's unique. She's actually based off of a character from one of my fav films btw haha super glad you're enjoying this!! I'll try to update frequently! *gives big hug* <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2015 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how your story starts out. Looks really good
Author's Response:
Aw thanks!!! I just wanted to try something new lol :)