[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2017 06:43 pm Title: ::Ch. 4::
Oooh... Good suspenseful chapter, btw :)
It's brave of Marlon to keep quiet even after being pummeled by Joseph.
Hope someone won't spill the beans about Michael and Amber being in Las Vegas... from what I've heard, there's a lot of mafia in that city...
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Because he cares more about them then he does for Joseph but let's hope no one finds out or they are doomed.
Date: Jun 05, 2016 10:22 pm Title: ::Ch. 4::
Joe's old mean ass needs to get out of here! Why does he have to be such a brute! Searching Gray for his runaway son! Man, let your kids live their life, and him beating Marlon! It was so hard to read!
Author's Response:
I agree with you completely he needs to leave his them alone it's not like they will say anything to let his business be known smh.I feel you as well at the time it was hard to write for me. Thanks for reading <3
Date: Mar 17, 2016 02:26 am Title: ::Ch. 4::
Glad that Marlon can get away, even if its for awhile. I hope that he changes his plan and leaves the horse somewhere else.
Author's Response:
knowing marlon he may forget the horse, poor thing lol and Lets hope he does lol. thanks as always <3
Date: Mar 15, 2016 10:03 am Title: ::Ch. 4::
Hope Marlon will be ok
Author's Response:
Of course he will, Marlon is a smart and resourceful 😅
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2016 04:21 pm Title: ::Ch. 4::
I'm so fuckin happy that Michael and Amber are married and that they made love (my lil freaks in bed) I hate that Joseph beat Marlon up like that. Hopefully Marlon doesn't get caught by him!
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue:):):):):):):):)
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2016 04:21 pm Title: ::Ch. 4::
I'm so fuckin happy that Michael and Amber are married and that they made love (my lil freaks in bed) I hate that Joseph beat Marlon up like that. Hopefully Marlon doesn't get caught by him!
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue:):):):):):):):)
Author's Response:
Lmao, indeed they are (lil nasties - in the words of Chris) imagine if Chris heard about it oh gosh~
I agree Joseph was so harsh to get such information out of Marlon which is so sad at least he's run away but don't worry it won't be any time soon ;)
Thanks for the love hun <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2016 11:15 am Title: ::Ch. 4::
Oh shit, Marlon. You better run boy. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Heck yes he better run, thanks as always 😏