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Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Date: Jul 30, 2016 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Sorry but none of your uploaded chapters contain any words....
Author's Response: Uhm I think it's because the site went down and weren't able to retrieve the chapters. Thanks for pointing it out will fix it right away! Sorry I didn't see this very soon.
Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll definitely work on that. I really appreciate it. b29; I'm currently writing a chapter and I think this will be a bit longer than the others. Thanks again ^___^
Date: Jul 10, 2016 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Welcome :)
My primary feedback would be to consolidate the chapters or make each chapter longer, with more happening. It's hard to get into a plot when chapters are brief.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll definitely work on that. I really appreciate it. b29; I'm currently writing a chapter and I think this will be a bit longer than the others. Thanks again ^___^