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Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 96

Uh oh Junior is trouble just like Joe and Richard.  I think Jaz will understand what Michaela is going through.



Author's Response:

Yes he inherited Joe and Richards dna smh. Yes I'm sure she will 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 11:41 am Title: Chapter 94

Povera Ariel era incinta aveva perso il bambino dispiace ma adesso deve pensare ai suoi tre figli. Quando e se lo dirà a Michael  dovrà stare tranquilla perché la ama


Author's Response:

Si povera Ariel, ma sono sicuro se lei dice a Michael che la ama, non importa cosa

 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2017 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 33

Michael and Ariel's friends kidding around with them about their night together... am picturing Ariel: "Hey everybody, t.m.i. okay" LOL

Wow, a romantic day at the beach...wonder if they'll invite us? :D. lol

Author's Response:

That's what friends are for lol 

 

I'm sure they would invite us too lol 

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2017 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 95

Awww  they now have twins and Michael knows about the baby Ariel lost. It's ok I understand sometimes it is necessary to do that to move the story along if it fits with what you have in mind.



Author's Response:

Yes she told him eventually. 

 

Yes I have planned a few more things, things why the time skip was needed 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2017 08:18 am Title: Chapter 95

Ariel ha detto a Michael del suo segreto è tranquilla perché la ama. La famiglia di Jasmine si allarga dopo tanto tempo è tornato suo figlio Valentine che  è andato anche da Ariel e Michael i suoi genitori adottivi.



Author's Response:

Sì lei finalmente gli ha detto e lui ancora ama lei. Si Jasmine ha ottenuto il suo desiderio di avere un altro bambino si verifica anche con suo figlio Valentine

Reviewer: OpalsEmeralds Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 7

I've been wondering what her story was and you didn't disappoint!! Also, love how slow the relationship between Ariel and Michael is going!

Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2017 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 32

The perfect end to a perfect night... ;)

Author's Response:

Yes ;)

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 94

UH oh Ariel has a secret.   I wonder how Michael will handle this if he finds out?



Author's Response:

Yes a big one, knowing Michael he'll still love her 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2017 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wow...Cindy needs to get over herself...thinking Michael would ever take her back...and continuing to stick it to Ariel...what an EGO smh

I think I'd get along with Maria...I have a favorite restaurant I go to all the time myself :D

Author's Response:

Ikr? Smh at her 

 

 

Me too 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2017 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 30

Awww...sweet scene between Michael and Ariel :)

Yay...the twins came for a visit :D! Michael's always so cute with them :).

Author's Response:

Yes they can be sweet :)

 

Ikr, it's my favorite moments with the twins :)

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2017 12:38 am Title: Chapter 93 A whish come true

Il parto di Jasmine è andato bene benvenuta Michaela. Il dramma è la mamma di Jasmime quando saprà di essere nonna  

 



Author's Response:

Sì, la sua nascita è andata molto fortunatamente, sì, la madre di Jasmine non sarà felice, ma la sua perdita

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 93 A whish come true

Seems Ariel is a little jealous.  This was after all her idea.  Maria being upset i understand.  She missed the birth.



Author's Response:

Yes it was her idea after all 

 

 

Yes I understand Maria's pov too, she wanted to be there 

Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

Well, that's good...Cindy's baby isn't Michael's...

Hmm...so Danny's a womanizer who doesn't really care about Cindy or their baby...let's see if he keeps his promise about making child support payments...Cindy just might have to REMIND him about that responsibility...

Author's Response:

Yes it's a good thing the babies not Michaels 

 

 

Yes that's Danny, let's hope for the sake of the child he pays child support 

Reviewer: ThrillerNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 92

Oh nerve of her talking to Michael like that and about her grandchild too.  What a hateful woman.  She talks like that in front of Ariel she will let her have it.



Author's Response:

Yes she's a hateful woman, she's lucky she hasn't bumped into Ariel 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 06:30 am Title: Chapter 92

Di nuovo è tornata la madre di Jasmine per ricominciare con la solita storia. Meno male la prossima volta che la rivedrà andrà con Ariel e dovrebbero andare anche  Jasmine con Maria



Author's Response:

Sì, la signora Daniels è tornata di nuovo

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