[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 01:35 pm Title: XXII
Lol gotta love the twins
Why the old woman always has to be negative towards Eva? Smh at her
Lol Paul and his son story can't believe daadi bought it
Aww they're just too cute Michael and Eva
Poor Eva she worked so hard on her beautiful drawing
Author's Response:
ah the twins are extradionary aren't they pea? shaking my head at the ole bat she will never change but she is always gullible when it comes to sob stories well maybe just to Paul's elegant charm that never be beat lool and yes the pair are so cute yet Virkam had to come in and run the hard work she had planned smh, thanks pea <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 05:55 am Title: XXII
Their lil lunchtime in the treehouse was sweet...til Eva freaked. I get she’s worried but she’s not really hurting Vikram by hanging out with Michael...at most, Vik will be jealous but doesn’t genuinely care about/love his bride-to-be. But I agree with Mike that they should just continue spending time and having fun because really, what Vik doesn’t know won’t hurt him. Also he sucks ass for destroying Eva’s beautiful hard work. Great as always tomato!
Author's Response:
I agree I don't think Vikram will care for her to be with michael because he has clearly shown his feelings towards this marriage and the way he treats her love of art smh. Yes I agree too that Eva should enjoy the moment she has with mike now because mike will find a way to get her out of this mess. ah don't ya just love a jackass that we all face in different ways in our lives? smh lol. thanks onion <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2018 05:29 pm Title: XXI
Good to see Eva has Michael and Paul on her side.
Vikram and Daadi...there are no words...smh... perhaps karma will pay those two a visit...especially Vikram...
India is a beautiful country...too bad the men are chauvenists living in the dark ages where women are concerned...smh
look forward to reading how Michael and Paul (and Eva's cousins) help Eva out of this situation...
Author's Response:
at least the poor girl has some good people on her side including the jackson clan too. those two are consumed by their own self credit and control over everything that karma will be sweet when it happens tsk don't worry it's coming eventually lol. Yes I agree India is gorgeous but how men treat their wives in the 21st country is sad and digusting tsk. Thanks Mary <3
Date: Aug 15, 2018 05:49 pm Title: Introduction
Ah finally they kissed !!! Despite the holding back between the two *because of vikram the c*ckblock*. We know he ain't disappearing anytime soon sadly. All i need now is for Michael to put him in his place😊😂😂
Author's Response:
Vikram the prick who we all hate but hey we got the kiss like you said 😂. Unfortunately he isnt yet and that would be great to see Mike do that 👀. Time will only tell. Thanks Imo <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2018 10:16 am Title: XXI
Yikes I do feel bad for Eva. Paul and Michael found out about what's happening to her which is essentially a good thing because now they know that Vikram is a dangerous af man - not that kind of dangerous, which we like, the bad kind (and now I've unintentionally made a pun out of TWO MJ songs...or is it albums?) - anyway, they know so they won't let this wedding go ahead. No way. I know they will do what they can to save Eva.
"I- I rather see you living because I care for you too much" Eva blurted out nervously staring into his russet coloured eyes.
"You care for me that much? Even with all the mean things you say?" Michael teased.
"Stop ruining the moment! I'm serious" Eva huffed to him with a roll of her eyes trying to get back to the topic.
^ love love love.
O M G. I can't believe Paul betted on when they'd kiss for the first time! LMAO. The kiss was soooo sweet, really well-written and I know you're a little shy when it comes to these things but it was great, Lorry! Aw I'm glad Eva was able to experience such a spcial and memorable moment amidst all of this marriage/Vikram bs. Legit. She deserves to be happy fam she's so young got a whole future which she could possibly spend with Michael. The ending was hard to read...Eva's like a puppet. I mean, being physically harmful is one thing, but being sexually abusive is another and I'm legit just fearing for her life at this point because it's so baddd and she's not even married to him yet man! Messy now but I'm sure it'll be cleaned up. Wonderful as always, Lorry! Update soon. <3
Author's Response:
I agree that its good Mike and Paul know now that Vikram is no good for her and is a dangerous man sigh you had to bring in the puns onion lmao and of course those two brilliant minded friends will find someway to get her out of this situation. Paul somehow is always loosing his cash either way he has enough to last him a long time so a small dent in his bank account won't effect him lool. poor girl deserves to have a live without that pervert Vikram in her life and be with Michael who can show her a new whole world (Catch that refernce from one disney film hmm? lool). something will be done Onion! thank you for all the encouraging words as always <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2018 02:57 am Title: XXI
Gotta love Paul lol
Poor Eva tho she deserves so much better than Vikram
Yes auntie J is right Michael is smitten
Lol Paul and auntie J are too funny
Aww Michael and Eva are too cute and OMG finally they kissed
They made bets really? Lol
Smh Riya and Vikram are a perfect match for each other both of them are ugh
Ugh I can't stand the creep aka Vikram
Author's Response:
Paul never gets his way when it comes to the jackson clan when betting with money or not lool of course he and his favourite woman love to tease poor mike and eva about their feelings lol. Yay they finally kissed phew it took a while but we got there lool. Vik needs to jump on the sun train heading to the sun and daadi can get on too smh but we shall how things play out.
thanks pea <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2018 02:25 pm Title: XX
Clearly Vikram is bad news. Hard to believe Daadi is blind to this dark side of her future son-in-law.
Vikram's attacking Eva clearly was a turning point in the story...I agree with that 100%. Hopefully, now that the twins have seen Vikram attacking their cousin they can get Michael and Paul to help get Eva out of harm's way without Vikram turning on them...
As always, looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
the old woman is immune to her 'son-in-law' faults' it's sad she lets this happen and does nothing sigh. I agree Vik hurting Eva gets into the meat of the story now.at least the good thing that has happened in the chapter is that Aadesh is on their side now and something can be sorted out with mike/paul in due time. time will only tell Mary! thanks as always <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2018 04:08 pm Title: XIX
Good to see Michael and Eva made up...thanks, Paul for breaking the ice, and getting the conversation started :).
Wow...Vikram showing up...And Eva was having such a nice day too...smh. And Daadi's reason for insisting on the arranged marriage...smh. Eva shouldn't be being made to pay for her parents' perceived mistake...smh
Something/or someone should do something to change Daadi's mind...
Look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Indeed thank goodness for the level headed Paul to break the ice and get them to talk and Yes with some history of where the marraige started to present day bought light to why Eva is being thrown in this crazy situation. I would highly doubt nothing will change that ole woman's mind but we shall as time goes along haha. thanks Mary!
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2018 02:27 pm Title: XX
Poor Eva she has to find a way to get out of it she derseves so much better
Author's Response:
I agree there has to be some way out of this mess. time will only tell. Thanks Eva <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2018 09:22 pm Title: XVIII
Hm...a chance meeting with Eva outside of the hospital...could prove to be awkward, but we'll see...
I agree Lorry, Eva deserves a chance to explain herself. Hopefully Michael will follow his aunt's advice...
Author's Response:
Indeed it could end up becoming awakard and poor thing does need the chance to explain herself we can see how mike and Paul will recieve it in due time. thanks mary <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2018 12:59 pm Title: XX
I can’t read Eva being so terrified like I actually feel her fear. As for Vikram well he is just really good at doing what he does, putting up this lover-boy facade. Someone has got to make Daadi realise that this man is a monster and he doesn’t deserve Eva. Maybe if Riya caught Vikram being violent toward or mistreating Eva, she might change her mind about this marriage. And welp there’s that lamb curry again that I love so much jk. Me and Eva wouldn’t get along in terms of food preferences😂. I thought the irony and tenseness of having none other than Michael as the photographer was cool af. If only Vikram knew muahaha. But I can tell he was uncomfortable the whole time...but he did his job like a pro and I’m proud of him for that.
SIS THE ENDING. I was so shook! Thank God for Adil but that was just...wow. Part of me wishes that it was Daadi who appeared instead of the twins but I’m glad it was the twins because they will actually do something about it. I know they won’t let Eva’s life be ruined and I can’t wait to see what their synced minds come up with. I need Michael and Eva to have their happy ending ok. Amazing (and kinda terrifying) update, tomato! <3
Author's Response:
I did not expect that I described her fear so well (after so much research) I highly doubt Riya will see any fault in her golden boy all she sees is good and nothing else. I had to add that lamb curry in it yet again lool. ah isn't irony fun hm? especially when it hits Vikram and he gets in his feelings which lead to him abusing poor Eva that was uncalled for thankfully the boys were there to help her but I do feel Riya will not do anything and just ignore whatever she might see. at least the poor girl has some people on her side to get out of this mess. thanks onion for the support as always <33
Date: Jul 18, 2018 05:36 am Title: XIX
I'm so happy your back I was really enjoying this story!!!!! .Eva needs to marry Michael instead 😊
Author's Response:
Aw thank you im thrilled you are enjoying my story and who knows what will happen you'll just have wait and see 👀.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2018 06:20 pm Title: XVII
Uh oh...Michael and Paul coming dangerously close to Vikram at the party...
Paul's sister...omj...lol...
And them wanting to use Michael for the photoshoot...poor Eva, what a delima that is for her...
Look forward to seeing how this all plays out...
Author's Response:
Let's be glad they were not caught out phew! And there is just no word for Paul's sister and her love for black men but hey she admitted it lool. Welp I can't give away what might happen you'll just have to see what happens Mary 👀. Thanks As alwaysl
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:00 am Title: XIX
I really liked your story) it is great
Author's Response:
Thank you! More to come soon 😊
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2018 04:26 am Title: XIX
I’m really happy Michael forgave Eva. His time to be upset was finished! Since everyone’s secrets are out, I feel like this is a turning point in the story; the chapter of revelations and I love that Michael and Eva got flashbacks. For Eva’s it’s honestly very real in the sense that arranged marriages do typically tend to happen between two people who know each-other somehow; either from childhood or family connections. And Michael’s was really profound. The way you described the car accident was really great I could picture the action in my head.
Since everyone’s on good terms again, please tell me they’re not going to let this marriage go ahead. Vik is evil. They gotta come up with something! Can’t wait to see what happens next. Lovely as always tomato <3
Author's Response:
it is good to see that mike went against his heart and allowed Eva the situation but something has to get this chain of change to happen who knows what could happen! I am glad you liked how I described the car accident I found that to be the hardest to write about but now it gave michael a chance to grief and let that pain stay in the past!. who knows might happen onion! thanks as always <3