Maria deserves that little jolt from Nikita after all these years belitting her due to her resemblence to her dead sister and not loving her when she was the innocent viticm in what her dad and her sister did. I can't blame nikita for acting that way. what a sweet way to end the story with the new addiction to the family naming her after Nikita's mum in the end. It was nice to see the story wrap up nicely but this is never the end for you in story telling lol. 

Oh my god. First lemme say this - I can’t believe that this is the actual final chapter of this story. I honestly still remember when we were discussing ideas for this way before you got to writing and it just amazes me how fast time has gone by and now it’s actually finished like damn. I’m shooketh! 

Onto the chapter: it’s like they are one big happy family. Feel like it’s going to tie up fuckinggg beautifully because I see that Maria and nikita are finally having a very important conversation. Wowwww Nikita is really outchea throwing knives! YOU GO GIRL- I mean, THAT IS very BAD. Should not happen. Yes it is indeed Michael’s fault that she is pregnant with a foetus. Gee I wonder how it happened. Oh yes he (censored) and then he (censored) before (censored) and that’s how it happened! Well I was right about that beautiful ending. I love that they’re naming their second child Patricia. Phew no more maria = no more negativity. 

This chapter did feel more summary towards the end but then again it is the ending so it’s totally cool. Looking back I wish I could have read the story weekly as you posted the chapters but life got in the way, I took a long long break from this website, and stuff and so I’ve had to do lots of catching up and remind myself of certain plot details, but through and through, this was a good story. A great read too. There were things I agreed with, things I didn’t agree with, but overall I think the characters defo deserve their happy ending. I’m sad it’s over! But knowing you, when one story ends, another begins. Sorry my reviews have been late for so long but remember that I am on Xmas break for another 3 and bit weeks so i’ll catch up on FBOFW at some point too. Also idk why I’m saying his here when I could say it in the group chat but yes I hope you enjoyed my wild sporadic reviews and melting over Miguel, who I’m gonna miss so fucking much LOL. TIL NEXT TIME PEA!!! 

Okay it’s official. Miguel is the cutest little child baby small person thing that I’ve ever come across in any fanfiction. Ever. He’s cuter and even more adorable than the toddler in my fic, I don’t know what it is about Miguel, his language just makes me smile but I def know I can’t get enough of his character. Mrs Ramirez may be shaking her head but guess whatvfam. SO AM I. Why can’t she accept that Nikita has, I quote from the 6 god drake, “started from the bottom” and now she’s here? Where is that you might ask? Living a wonderful life with an amazing husband and beautiful child. She needs to be happier for her daughter too. I’m glad Michael has Nikita’s back as always. But I find it so just wrong that she’s talking to her daughter like that, it ain’t right fam. Ain’t right at all. She’s likely just jealous that her daughter is living the life she always wanted. 

Some of Carmen’s questions were RIDICULOUS. Talmbout abortion man shut yo bitchass up! That being said I salute Nikita for her answers she handled the whole thing really well. I wonder what else Carmen had planned to ask Michael and Nikita but whatever they were, I’m sure they were as bad as Oprah asking Michael if he’s a virgin on LIVE TV, and therefore I’m glad she didn’t get to ask them what she really wanted. Side note I’m positive that Miguel is one beautiful baby boy. Half black and half Latino? Gotta be cute as hell. 

Nice attitude from that clerk about Nikita...smh

Good to see Michael is always the voice of reason when it comes to things that are really important :D

Author's Response:

Yeah smh at the clerk  

Wow...what's the matter Amparo...jealous?...Her attitude...smh...

Amparo and the others need to just get over it, and let Nikita see her neices and nephews...smh

Glad to see Michael showing up, and the two of them spending the rest of the evening together... :)

Author's Response:

Yes Emillio has the right to see his auntie 

San Diego...one of my favorite places...love Sea World :D...

Poor Michael, lol...I'm imagining him hanging on for dear life as Nikita goes zooming along...I can see Michael's face...lol.

Hm...she's lucky to get off with just a warning...AND an autograph from Michael for the officer...lol

Sounds like it was an exciting day for everyone...lol :D

Look forward to more :D

Author's Response:

I want to go there too someday 

aww sweet that the whole clan is back together and what a nice surpise that Nikki is having another kid alongside her sister which it looks like the two have patched up their sister relationship.