Date: Jan 08, 2019 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 26 - “Because I screwed up, Michael"
you could have her think she's not pregnant but really is with her period being shorter and irregular. she thinks she's out of the woods but not.
Author's Response: That's a really great idea, I'll definitely keep it in my thinking cap for later on. Unfortunately, having Holly pregnant right now didn't quite work for the storyboard. But you never know what might happen in the future. ;) Thanks for the read!
Date: Dec 21, 2018 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Blissful agony
congrats, you did a great job writing a sex scene. I find they are so difficult to write. Hopefully things will get better for them.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I really appreciate the feedback. Sex scenes are very difficult to write for me too, but it's a work and progress. Stay tuned for another chapter soon! Thanks for the ready and the review. :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2018 05:03 am Title: Chapter 24 - Blissful agony
Come on girl you have me high you get me low but l love this story 😂😂😂😂😊😊😊🔰🔰🔰
Author's Response: LOL well, I have to keep you on your toes! Glad you're still enjoying the story. I'm going to try to get another chapter uploaded in another day or so so stay tuned! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2018 02:03 am Title: Chapter 23 - Who leaked?
girl Michael need get his sex on because I can't wait for it to happen l have feeling it joe did it that no good motherfucker but you what everything will turn out good for them l can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: LOL I know, poor Michael, he can't catch a break! Stay tuned for what is to happen on that front. ;) Joe does seem like the type that would leak to the press doesn't he? Stay tuned for the next update! :D
Date: Nov 28, 2018 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 22 - “So a tour huh?â€
I smell trouble in the air.
Author's Response: One thing's for sure, it's definitely not going to be easy for them. Stay tuned! :)
Date: Nov 25, 2018 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 22 - “So a tour huh?â€
I’m so glad you updated!!!! You’re so good at writing!! I can’t wait to see how the tour goes. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I feel so fortunate to have loyal readers who are still enjoying this story after 22 chapters! I am working on the 23rd chapter now. I hope you all like it. Some major stuff happens. :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2018 05:33 am Title: Chapter 21 - “Old man, don’t test me!"
I just love this story please update soonðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ™ðŸ™
Author's Response: Awww I'm so glad! I am definitely going to try to update soon. Hopefully, I can get working on the next chapter today! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: Nov 17, 2018 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “Old man, don’t test me!"
I’m so glad you updated!!!!! Hopefully you’ll be able to upload another chapter soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy I was able to finally get this chapter uploaded too! Stay tuned for the next installment! :)
Date: Nov 17, 2018 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “Old man, don’t test me!"
nice to see you write again. its been a bit. Good ole Joseph. its all about the money. great update!
Author's Response: I'm very happy to be back. Life has been very crazy, but hopefully, it is starting to slow down a bit for me to work on this story more. Stay tuned and as always thanks for the read! :)
Date: Nov 13, 2018 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Friends with Valerie Bertinelli
Omg it only took me a few hours to get to this chapter I need an update!! Love your work you are one talented writer xx
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you so much! I so appreciate your kind words. I am currently working on Chapter 21 right now. Stay tuned! :)
Date: Oct 19, 2018 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams
I hope you’ll update soon!! This is phenomenal 😊
Author's Response: I will soon! Thank you so much for saying that! It truly warms my heart. :)
Date: Sep 24, 2018 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Friends with Valerie Bertinelli
I almost screamed when I saw you updated!!! It defiantly made my night😊😊. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm so happy that I made your night. I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: Sep 11, 2018 01:03 am Title: Chapter 3 - “Why do you tug so at my heart?â€
I really enjoy reading your story so far. I really like how you interpret Michael’s thoughts and feelings within the music industry and him growing up in it. How Holly has a similar experience and how they connect to each other so well. Really good!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate it. It's so nice to have another reader. I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon, but the process is moving slowly. Stay tuned! :)
Date: Sep 05, 2018 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams
I hope you’re going to update soon!!!!
Author's Response: I will soon! I'm hoping to write and get something posted this weekend. Between work and school, time is more limited lately. But don't you worry, Michael and Holly will be back soon ;)
Date: Aug 11, 2018 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 18 - “I’m gay, sis.â€
Foiled again! hopefully soon they can get some alone time and become more intimate. great update
Author's Response: I know! I cannot wait until they finally have their moment together. Thanks for reading! I'm super excited for your update as well! :D