Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2018 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Getting caught by the press

Paparazzi had to always ruin the moment. I am beyond relieved that her perverted dad didn't do anything to her. I'm liking the slow pace right now. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying the pace of the story, thought it might be good to slow it down a bit and let them have some fun! haha Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It truly means the world to me! :)

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 9 - “I think you get jealous of Diana.”

Dang, what happened to sweet Holly? LOL

Jealous brings out the worst in everybody. The fight was very intense. I really felt that. Great writing! I can't wait till she turns 18.

Author's Response: Lol I know, she is really about how she feels now! You are so right, jealousy always brings out the worst in people. That fight scene was really interesting and challenging to write - I wanted to show a side of their new relationship where things aren't always going to be okay. But you know what they say fight hard and love hard haha! Thank you so much! Holly turning 18 is in the next chapter so stay tuned! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Voice Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2018 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Enter Holly Williams

Hi Again!  I would send you the link to the picture/graphic so you can insert it in the biography of your story (when you press Edit Story, the first box with your story description) the format would be JPG nothing crazy at all, just your normal picture format :)!

I do not require payment at all, this is free and me completely volunteering my creativity.  As a writer, I understand how important it is to get your story seen and read by others and reviews doens't hurt either! Im just solely wanting to help :) :)! 

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I sent you a response. :)

Reviewer: Voice Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2018 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 8 - "Until you find a house of your own…why don’t you stay here?”

Aww I am enjoying this!  Its very sweet! I enjoyed th developemnt of David's personality with Michae an vise versa! very realistic! Secondly I enjoyed the fact Holly seemed to have been okay with taking such a huge jump/risk with Michael. I can't wait to see how it turns out.  hmm what about Diana???! so much to think of lol!

thank you for updating, you've got a new reader :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! Your review honestly brought a smile to my face. I'm so glad you brought up that the dialogue between Michael and David seemed realistic - I've struggled with that in the past so its something I pay extra attention to. There is going to be some major things happen in the next upcoming chapters so make sure to stay tuned! So happy to have another reader! I'll update ASAP!! ;) Thanks!!!!! :D

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Close encounters

Yes yes you go girl it about time you tell your mother who making the money lol😂😂😂

Author's Response: Haha I know right? It's about time she told her mom how she felt. Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! :D

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 - No longer his little Holly

Wow, two chapters! How did I get so lucky lol! This is very sweet of Michael to respect her and give her some space even when she doesn't want him to. Love, love, love the story so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Hahaha! I was on a writing kick this weekend! Thank you so much for the words of encouragement. I am currently writing chapter seven so keep your eyes peeled! :D

Reviewer: wordonthestreets32 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2018 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 4 - “Will you stay with me?”

Awesome chapter! I'm enjoying the progression of their relationship so far. Her mom is like the female Joe. I hope she stays in Encino forever.

Some unsolicited advice: Maybe separate the dialogue into their own paragraph? I was having a hard time where it started and ended and who said what.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your reviews thus far. I sincerely appreciate it. Next time I will upload a chapter, I will change the line spacing around to make it easier to read for you guys. Thank you so much for reading, rating, and reviewing! :D

Reviewer: marje143 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 02:39 am Title: Chapter 3 - “Why do you tug so at my heart?”

Her mother is crazy that other Joe in the makeing that all of to say