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Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous 
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Date: Jul 23, 2011 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2011 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
Hahaha that was funny, plzz update asap!!! Or maybe now.:)
Author's Response: The next chapter has been posted.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2011 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2011 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
Haha damn mike, knocking his lady off the jet ski xD all bad. Cnt wait for the next part
Author's Response: LOL! The next chapter's been posted.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2011 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
Author's Response: LOL!! Me too. I would never go jet skiing. Next chapter's been posted and it's sorta long. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2011 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 18: Crusin for a brusin
POW! Right in the kisser! Dang he knocked her off. LoL. Jet skis sound fun but I'm afraid I'll lose control of one and drown. D:
Loved the update :)
Author's Response: LOL!! Me too. I would never go jet skiing. Next chapter's been posted and it's sorta long. Thanks for the review!!