Reviews For On the line
Reviewer: Invisible Ink Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious
Author's Response: Don't sweat it hun!!!!! :) I loved it!! It was brilliant!!! I might make some changes like typos but your good. Thanks!!!
Date: Jul 30, 2011 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious
:D Thanks.
Sorry I didn't make it go your way.
OMG!!! MORE.
Author's Response: Don't sweat it hun!!!!! :) I loved it!! It was brilliant!!! I might make some changes like typos but your good. Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed 
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Date: Jul 30, 2011 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious
Author's Response: Just wait and see!! Since I'm not really funny I get most of my humor for comedy shows I've watched. But you never know. Alica just might do it!! Another chapter has been posted!! Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2011 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious
That'd be awesome if she was pregnant! Lol she was like "next time it happens, someones getting stabbed." that was funny.
Great update. <3
Author's Response: Just wait and see!! Since I'm not really funny I get most of my humor for comedy shows I've watched. But you never know. Alica just might do it!! Another chapter has been posted!! Thanks for the review!!