Penname: KariLeon [Contact] Real name: Leona Kerr
Member Since: May 30, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I adore mj and i luv writing so why not combine the two?(:


Gender: male
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Reviews by KariLeon
Summary:

A Fictionalized Biographical Love Story

Disclaimer: This story is based on some true events. 

Michael meets a dancer and a 22 year love affair begins; but its not the typical happy romance.

                                                  ********NEW CHAPTER 2017******

Included Author's Note and Special Thanks at end.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 127 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386192 Read Count: 128139
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2010 Updated: Mar 03, 2019
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 96: PART SIX

Girl you are one of the most amazing writers and trust me i've read a lot of fanfic.This story is just seamless. you've pieced together everything so perfectly. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You don't know how much I apperciate that! I put a lot of time into it.   :)

Summary:

Vixen Rogers is a young single Mom living on a council estate and struggling to get by. One day she meets Michael Jackson at a fan event and her life changes forever when he makes her the offer of a lifetime.

Michael is preparing for his big comeback when he meets Vixen and falls in love with her and gives her the oppotunity to have a better life.

Both Michael and Vixen have secrets from the past which could jeopardise their future and destroy everything. So how will they cope with disapproval from their friends, family and the media when the world finds out the about their relationship?

Will the 30yr age gap prove to be a problem?

And who is holding a life threatening grudge against Michael and is hell bent on destroying in his life?

Will either of them get the happy ending they deserve?

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85806 Read Count: 7703
[Report This] Published: Feb 17, 2011 Updated: Aug 18, 2011
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

i just started readin' this and so far im luvin it.



Author's Response:

aww thank you that means a lot cos i'm a BIG fan of your stories too :)

Summary:

The city of Brookyln, the home to all sorts of gangs, including the notorious "Rebels" led by Mini Max and his best friend, Michael Jackson. They stick together like a family, but one night when Michael is walking the streets alone, he gets outnumbered and jumped by men and left in an alley for death to take him away. Fortunately, help came his way and he finds himself falling for this beautiful stranger. Will his buddies kick him out of the gang because he isn't "bad" anymore, or will his love for his crush make him forget about them and the world denying his love?

*Based off of the "Bad" music video

PLEASE REVIEW!!! YOUR REVIEWS MAKE ME SMILE!!!

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The Rebels


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83462 Read Count: 158019
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2011 Updated: Oct 24, 2011
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh my god!!!!! please  update soon...

Summary:

Monica's world has taken a dive for the ocean. She can see it, feel it, taste it.

The rocky relationship she's endured with Andrew over the years appears to be coming to an end.

Her very best friend Michael is in her corner, as he always has been. Michael knows he has what it takes to fulfill her every desire; he knows he can touch her in places which Andrew never had. He deeply wanted to touch her heart and make her feel whole. He knew he could make her body scream and quiver under his sensitve touch.

Unfortunately for the two, Monica has been rather blind throughout their friendship.

Now seeing the true love of his life in pain, Michael is once more by her side. But the complications of the third party only seem to further blind Monica.....

 

WARNING: STRONG ADULT CONTENT. RATED R.

(SHORT STORY)


Categories: Romance, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Fantasy, Adult, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8918 Read Count: 2570
[Report This] Published: Jul 30, 2011 Updated: Sep 01, 2011
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Hopeful Finality

love it!!!!

My Bully by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Yahara

 

 

Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?


Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164232
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2011 Updated: Nov 07, 2013
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i love is so far but i was a bit confused because ive read a story similiar by you but its amazing nonetheless so plz continue

Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

damn, he's pretty demented. Yahara bttr not go out like a wuss and fight back, i et her a gigi could cook up some crazy ish. anyways, i'd like a mj pov as well. I'd really like to know his perspective on all of this and why he's doing what he's doing.

Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Can you update "strictly professional" thnks.

Summary:

Camilla never understood how a sweet soul like his could shatter her world into pieces and put them back together in an instant.

I'm back to updating regualty x


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14946 Read Count: 3716
[Report This] Published: Aug 12, 2011 Updated: Mar 04, 2012
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction

wow, what an ass!

Summary:

Ranae Livingston has just moved to Los alvros california and her parents have given her a place to stay they say it is the old home that was given to there parents years ago when the old owner didn't want it any more she has been living in for three weeks now and she has just gotten settled in for her first night in the old creepy ranch home but when things start to get weird noises at night creaking footsteps she can never find the source to and even a black cat that has apeared out of no where the perfect little home she has fell apon may turn into more then she bargined for.

what can she do she moved here for a new job helping a childrens youth facilty and charity organization to help inrich children when meeting 9 of the children that frequent there often she discovers these kids are smart and witty and also may know a thing or too more about the house then she could ever image and when one of the kids cousin joseph shows up and peaks her intrest about the property and its old tenants she finds her self intrieged not only by the story but by him as well but she also has come to have met a strange in the tome that is rather intoxicating.

but the thing she doesn;t know is both of her love intrest are carring a secret and will there love obsessions and secrets leave her prey to being either of there victim. 

will she be able to choose 

will she even get a choice 

will she enter there world of darkness... willingly

follow Ranae on her journey of love mystery, obsession revenge and jealousy in 

 


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Sci Fi, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50499 Read Count: 2143
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2011 Updated: Apr 03, 2012
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I like this story a lot, i think you have a really wonderful concept and the potential of this being a hit fic on here, but in all honesty and i hope you dont take this critique badly but its sort of difficult to follow, your writing style.



Author's Response:

UPDATE were up to 15 you better catch up

Summary:

Cameron Jameson has worked for Michael as his assistant for two years. They had grown close whether she wanted them to or not. Many aren't able to see Michael when he's truly himself. She's one of the only people who knows Michael in and out. From his womanizing ways to his occasional partying. But what happens when she's his next target?


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59025 Read Count: 55069
[Report This] Published: Sep 29, 2011 Updated: Jun 11, 2014
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg, you hve to update soon! Wht the heck is wrong with Mike? I thought he was so in love with Cam, now hes possibly cheating on her. Ugh, but I can see michael point of view, hes probably exhusted. Cam wont commit to him, shes confused if she loves him, an their relatuonship is like a rollercoster ride. Anyways, update soon chica!

Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thnks for the latest update...update soon

Summary:

 

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Categories: Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126308 Read Count: 20396
[Report This] Published: Oct 19, 2011 Updated: Jun 24, 2018
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hey, another fan here. This story is awesome and so very good. I hope you post the nxt chappie soon, I really want to see whats going to happen. Is Hae gonna keep the baby or what?
also whats up with rae? Why did he do what he did? I mean I got that vibe from him ever since they left their mama and he was telling hae about this girl he was in love with but couldnt be with cos of her parents..so no I really wasnt suprised when he raped her. Anyways, update soon hon. this is easily one of the best stories on here. Dont get discouraged, some ppl read but dnt like to comment.

Author's Response: Oh, well I guess you saw. I usually reply to all my reviews, so sorry about that. I only login long enough to update. Thanks for the review.:D -MJLegacy14

Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: Oct 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OMG, you have to update sooon!!! Pardon me, but you take too long between updates! Ugh,why did she say yes to Donny and why does she keep giving up her kid, like seriously!!! I get he was the product of incest rape but jeez, its like shes punishing herself and the kid for what happened. She obviously loves him and he loves her. He spoke for her and once she found out he was hers, she just distanced herself....anyways this story is awesome...one of the best on here. Ive been reading and I apologize for not reviewing....

Author's Response: Bahaha! Yeeeeah, I know I have updating issues now. :/ I'm sorry for that. I try, but I kind of get sidetracked or I'm busy, but no excuses! From now on, I'll try and update every week. She sort of is punishing herself, isn't she? e_e OMJ. I can't take compliments like that. I try, but I don't think BTLY is ranked as one of the best. Thank you for such kind words. I truly appreciate it from the bottom of my hearts.^___^ L.O.V.E

Roomies by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Ayden is finally on her own. She has found an apartment, and wants to persue a career as a photographer. Only problem is she will be rooming with four other guys in her apartment, and all of them have their own unique personality. One of which happens to be Michael Jackson and well.....you'll just have to read.Ayden

MichaelJojo

NickJoe


Categories: Romance, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30826 Read Count: 9504
[Report This] Published: Dec 25, 2011 Updated: Dec 16, 2014
Reviewer: KariLeon Signed
Date: May 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can u update strictly professional? Thats my fav story of yours and you dont update much. You left off at a juicy cliff hanger!! Thnks in advance.