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Michael Jackson is known all over his city, he is a very famous individual...but not for the reason you think. Michael is a popluar street thug, and he does it all. He runs his city, and everybody who is anybody is smart enough to bow down to him.
Michaela Jones however, happens to live in the better part of town. She has a steady job as a nurse in a hospital, working with children and is completely unaware of the man in charge of her city.
One day, these two manage to coincidentally- or fatefully - meet.
*Sniff sniff, wipes tears away* OMJ I have over 200 reviews...Thank you guys so much. Your kind words mean so much to me, really! I love you with all my heart! MJHUGS And love to all of you! <33
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 295152 Read Count: 68930
Date: Oct 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
yaassss!!!! so glad for the update, thank you! good to see mike remember and have him back to his old self. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen now x
Author's Response:
Lots of love to you hun! Hope you enoy the new update! Thanks for the review! :D <3
Date: Jun 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
you don't know how happy I am that you updated again .. made my night! lol. Absolutely love love love this story!
Author's Response:
That means so much, thank you! I really appreciate it. I'm happy to have updated. Thanks for the review! :D <3
"Sometimes, where you are is so much more than who you are with, but, others, my goodness, others, who you are with makes it matter not at all where you are" - Tyler Knott Gregson
Categories: Angst, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100588 Read Count: 3347
Date: Jun 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 B
I just couldn't go to sleep knowing you had updated & bc it just caused me much anxiety wondering what was brewing next. I was hesitant to read but now that I read it I sTILL HAVE ANXIETY. it's nerve wrecking. oh my god. bUT IM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!!!
I'm kinda glad you Lisa retaliate like that. but I'll probably regret it as I know my heart won't be ready to take what will happen next. James is such a idek.. Thea, Thea, Thea.. really anticipating her next move & how she'll react. idk it's almost 5am & I haven't slept. I'm anxious. & happy. im crey. Glad you're back! :')
Author's Response:
LMFAO! One way or another, it'll be okay! I don't know - one minute I'm like "fuck him" and then I feel bad. No one really is a villain here, though, even though it kind of seems like it. What's going on is just a product of everyone's actions, really. DON'T CREY, THOUGH! ;__;
Date: Jul 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
im embracing all this drama so much; I love it!
"SHIT" is right! HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL, THIS IS GETTING INTENSE BY THE CHAPTER! James, that bastard. Him & Lisa can go suck a cows ding dong ;-;
but this part, "Water! Does anybody want some water? I do, so I’m gonna get some. Honestly, I can’t get enough of it” & when he said "Thea!" I heard it in his voice from The Legends Panel fjkdyvdjf I laughed too hard. You just capture the essence of your characters so well I could fucking kiss you for it. but then again I could just crey in your arms bc that whole scene from Michael's past & what he went through broke my heart :(
Yet somehow I found comic relief in Lisa's pov as she went ape shit lol.
Thank you for updating!!! :)
Date: Jul 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
omg wait & that last part, "He didn’t need verbal comfort. He needed action." so she leaned over & hugged him DHKDYVJSJ yaaassss!!!
o k I'm done now :)
Date: Jul 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
YAS @ this drama brewing!! (I never thought I would ever say that lol) BUT MICHAEL & THEA ARE BACK MY OTP IM CREY. I love how they're back to joking with each other again. it makes me so happy :')
to sum it all up, "it was delight and torment and pain and pleasure all at the same time" lol. I loved it Erin, thank you! & good luck in retail over the holiday ;-;
Date: Jun 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
oh my gooood why do you do this to meee?! has my love not been enough for you, that you just torture me like this!
straight up anxiety throughout reading this lol. lord, I need a cardiologist. I'm glad Michael "made it in time" lol now he can talk some sense in that stubborn head of Thea's. they need to quit playin & just dhkfyvdjf. ;__;
i love Elizabeth "the hardcore romantic" lol
Author's Response:
Don't die, bae! My love for you inspired two updates in the same week! LMFAOOO I was shaking when I wrote it - I had to take so many breaks! And who knows? You might get your wish!
Date: Nov 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A
ok sorry I had to get that out lol.
soooo..... holy fuck. I was hoping that they would separate (mike & lisa and thea & james) but I didn't think it was actually gonna happen but yaaasss lmao. I hope mike & thea can start over again and be together .. I don't know what Lisa has planned but I can feel that it ain't gonna be good!
i cant stand james....
i kinda like how michael wanted to work things out with lisa but then he got angry .. and started to blame her .. like no .... that bastard lmao I love him though
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING ERIN ! x
Author's Response:
Lmao, I know, right!? He is a piece of freakin WORK! I think it shows how mercurial he can be, how he somewhat expects everything to go his way or it'll be the highway, but he is in for a rude ass awakening. Sometimes I wanna smack him and he's my character. Smh. LOL, you're welcome! And yeah, James is annoying.
Date: Nov 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A
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Date: Feb 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
YAS! YAS! YAS!!!! OMfG I DONT EVEN KNOOOW. MY. FEELS. ARE. EVERY. WHERE. THEY STILL LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH I'M SOBBING. THEY SHOULD JUST RUN FAR AWAY AND BE TOGETHER :') ZXCVBNDFGHJKL DA SEHKS DOE YAAAAAS FOR ADULTERY IT WAS ALL AMAZING I LOVE IT. JUST LOVE IT. ERIN, THIS WAS FANTASTIC! I can't even imagine what will happen with James & then the bitter wife lisa. This is gonna be good. o m f g
Author's Response:
Your reviews make my life complete. Seriously.
Date: May 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
oh my god Erin....... that was so intense. in the beginning with him & lisa fighting & then him fighting with himself. It's like you said, internally he's set on fire & there isn't much he can do before it all comes shattering down. oh man, & them Thea's pain when she walked in on them.. all four of them at dinner were a hot mess zdfghtjxbykl I was hoping Mike & James wouldnt get into a fight.... then again, I love me an angry Michael lmao so I wanted him to kick some ass but when Thea got in the way doebskjadks!!!! I fucking hollered omfg I ain't shit bc I COULDNT STOP LAFFING LMAOOO omg I loved it though, it was great. It made my day! ..but now... I'm curious what's gonna happen with james & then Mike & Thea but also Lisa, like I wonder what happened between mike & Lisa while James & Thea were arguing.. Oh, & I like how you still have their own personal point of view. you really capture their own emotions & thoughts that way. I can't wait for what's next! :D
Author's Response:
Ah, my favorite reviewer! LMFAO, that was CRAZY. Can you believe that it took me three damn months to write THAT!? Smh. I'm wondering what's gonna happen too. If you've gotta know, they sort of got into it themselves, but I'll provide more details in the next chapter. I honestly thought that this one was a hot a mess, but if you like it, I love it!
Date: Jan 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
HOE MY GOD ASDFGHJKL. I SWEAR I GOT EMOTIONAL DURING THE TREE PART & THEN WHEN THEY WERE ALL HUGGED UP AT THE BEACH I'M CRY I WANT THEM TO COPULATE HAFF BABIEZ & LIVE HAPPILY 5EVR
Date: Jan 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Jfc Erin, I love the way it's written. It really captured me & I'm sooo glad the chapters are long omg I really can't get enough of this. It's really really great! I'm loving it. I just omg idk lmao I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: Jan 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
AWW AWW THEA & MIKE AWR TOO ADORABLE THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER LIKE YESTERDAY BUT OMG JAMES NEEDS TO SOD OFF AIN'T NOBODY GOT TIME FO HIM DOE. & ASDFGHJKL YAAAAS WHAT ALYSSA SAID MIKE CAN NOW SNEAK OUT AT 3 AM & TEAR DAT UUUUUP!!!!!!
Date: Feb 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
jfc they're so bipolar I just asdfghjkl ;__; I don't know what's gonna happen, I'm scared LMFAO. omg mike's such a lowkey smartass that bastard i love him lmaoo. then the little "fight" LOL I thought they were gonna get it in while James was patiently waiting downstairs lololol. Then I couldn't stop laffin @ "You make me sick, Thea. You know that!? Sick, sick, sick!" let me not forget... James is a bastard! Lol like.. ugh idk I just he's just..ugh! lol. I actually liked the change of views, gave us a little insight.. good job Erin! It was great. my liddo heart, let me go s0b in a corner cus perfection ;__;
Author's Response:
LMAO! Aww, thanks, boo~ Your reviews always make my life complete. James is...interesting. He irks me, but I can somewhat see how he feels about the Thea and Michael. They are so damn annoying! They should get a room of skip off into the freakin' sunset already, because they're getting on my nerves. But at the same time, I love them! And I'll love you 5 ever for your feedback. <3