Penname: Zendaya [Contact] Real name: Breanna
Member Since: Jun 06, 2012
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Age: 18-21
Gender: Female
Real Name: Breanna
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This Is It by Dreamer Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Never in a million years did she think she'd ever work with him. Yet, she was hired to assist on his comeback tour. Wanting to make this the best thing to ever hit the planet, she, like the others, always put her best foot forward.

What she didn't know was that this opportunity would lead to an extremely complicated friendship, filled with indescribable events.


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Anorexia, Death, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17945 Read Count: 3842
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2014 Updated: Jul 19, 2015
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: May 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow. Dani and Michael act like Tom and Jerry fr fr. I'm glad she apologized to him cause he was hurt by her words. Great chapter by the way.

Save Me by ThrillMe Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

Angela and Michael have been married for ten years. Michael was deeply in love with her until she started to change for the worst. Angela pushed Michael and their family away ,now she tries to fight to get her life back. But things dont go as she expects , Will Michael be their to help her get through their problems? Follow their bumpy journey of love , betrayl , lies and deciet.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6057 Read Count: 629
[Report This] Published: Jun 15, 2014 Updated: Jun 28, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I didn't know Mike told Jasmine that Angela was dead. Now he was wrong for that fr fr. And now she's leaving. The kids we're so happy to see they lie mother again. It was just so sweet. Keep up the good work Bri. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh God. I wonder what kind of "work" she has to do. And Mike is such a stubborn ass nigga I tell ya. Lol. Please continue. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Yari. She's actually telling her father her true feelings. But that attitude she has. Giiiiirl, I could choke her. Lol. I really hope Angela don't screw this chance up. She needs to get better so that she can be with her kids. Her children don't need to see her like that. And Jasmine....idk what to say about her yet. But great chapter Bri. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Michael is such a wonderful father. He's going to be playing dress up with his daughter. How cuuuute. But I do understand where Jasmine is coming from. She wants to tell the kids but I guess it's hard for Mike to just let it out to them cause they're gonna ask questions about their mother or if their dad was still married to her. Idk. But it's a real shock to see Angela pop up on the steps of her old home. And Mike just don't know what to do. I hope he let her stay for the night instead of having her out on the streets. And now Jasmine' s asking questions. Lawd! Please continue Bri. Love ya.



Author's Response:

thabk youuu and i love you mooore , exactly i cant really be mad at Jasmine because i mean come on yall are getting married soon , poor Angie stay tuned boo

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, you put the story up. Yaaay! I can't wait for you to continue :)



Author's Response:

Ofcourse I will thank you so much for the encouragement 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awww I'm so happy for Mike and the kids. He's engaged again to a beauty and the kids must adore her. They need a mother figure in their life cause their real one is just so strung out on drugs. I feel sorry for Mike and the kids for what they had to go through with Angie. I just pray Angie gets some real help or something so that she can be w with her kids. At least she can do it for her kids. But great chapter girl. I love it! 

Stay by ThrillMe Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 181]
Summary:

Aliyah and Michael have a troubled relationship. They both grew up in a little town by the name of Gary , Indiana. Michael promised Aliyah that they would get married after college. But Michael becomes this big time Hip-Hop artist and changed for the worst. Will Michael be able to uphold his promise? Who will Stay

Chapter 13 is posted , Im sorry to any new readers this accidently got deleted so bare with me. Much love


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51175 Read Count: 7360
[Report This] Published: Jun 15, 2014 Updated: Jun 09, 2015
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 31

Trey is now on my good list. He's so sweet to Liyah and so loving reminds me of my boyfriend. But that Michael, is most definitely on my 'knock you the fuck out' list. Idk what has happened to our Mikey. I mean he was bad before and did try to do right but right now it's like I don't even reconize him anymore. Now that last sentence when he said that Aliyah went back to Trey and that those feelings had instantly vanished idk if he was talking about hers or his. If he was referring to his feelings, his ass can't get mad cause she went back trey. Hell, maybe if you wouldn't have walked out on her at the hospital and told her about ratchet muskrat Kamille's pregnancy in the first place, you'd still be with her and wouldn't be feeling this way and wouldn't have become a nigga who fucks anything with a rotten pussy. Mike still has alot of growing up to do.

Great chapter, by the way. Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 22

I'm not even suppose to be on here but your story was calling my name for me to read the new chapter you updated. Lol. But imo, I really think Liyah should forgive Erica......in due time and Mike. And she really do need to cut all ties with Trey too and work on her and Mikey. But these secrets that her and Mike are holding from each other....they need to come to the light. They should at least sit each other down and let it all out that way shit won't pop off. But great chapter Bri. And I hope you do start a new story. I'll be waiting if you do. 



Author's Response:

lol your the only one that thinks Liyah should forgive Erica lol , Trey girrrl lol exactly all these lies and secrets they got going on is not good for their relationship thats why they are the way they are now. Rollercoaster ride at its best lol girl go be with your family hell tell them to read with you lol -muah- have fun boo

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 26

 Aww, she had a miscarriage. And I knew the truth would come out but not like that tho. But damn Mike, you're erasing her out of your life for good. Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So now you gone go back to Kamille now. He better not. His light skin ass better go back and get his woman before someone else does. He know he loves liyah with all his heart. He's just got bad news and reacted towards it in a way he felt was right, I guess. But please don't let it be the end of them. They need to sit down and talk. But Mike really don't have no right to go off anyway, cause his ass got Kamille preggos and STILL didn't tell Liyah about it. So it's like a what and what thing going on. I swear, this is some B.A.N.S. fr fr.


But fantastic chapter, Bri :) 



Author's Response:

lmao Breeeee!!!! giiirrrrllll stuff is about to hit the fan real soon stay tuned -muah-

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 27

OMG!!!! Michael, really? You go back and fuck Kamille? But still he have no fucking right to be mad when his lying ass still haven't told Aliyah about ol' girl's pregnancy. Calling himself getting mad at somebody. Nigga plz. And I'm glad liyah forgave Erica but she still a lil ho tho. And as for Trey he ain't no better himself.

Great chapter girl. I been missing ya lol. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 28

Awww I think I was wrong about trey. He trying ig. He so sweet and whatnot. But I wanna know how long that's gone last. And kamille with her new dude walking in chipotle like married couples this Kendrick dude is no doubt the baby's pappy. Ik he has to be. Cause she was just all up on Mike five secs ago and a second later she with.....Kendrick whoever he is. Thottie fr bruhh!! Kml.
Great chapter. Can't wait for you to continue.

Author's Response:

girl yes Trey is a little slickster and Kendrick is the guy wemet in the earlier in the story ring a bell?

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 29

Uhhhh, I could just fuck Kamille's ass up like fr fr. She think she slick with her thotting lying ass. And Mike, man idek where to fucking begin with him. He really is cutting up something serious. He needs to get his shit together. And I can just fuck his ass up too. I think he possessed now cause the old Mike wasn't anything like this. Maybe a lil bad but THIS is just ridiculous. Let us pray, shall we?!?!? Lol. Btw, I remember who Kendrick is. Old dirty ass bastard. 

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next update. It's been 3 years Bri, lol.  And I also updated my story if you haven't read it yet. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 30

Girl, I was almost in tears over here. Mike know he still wants and love Liyah. He just frontin. But now he knows that she knows he knocked muskrat Kamille up. Smdh! I guess liyah ain't the only one who is poison.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 33

Oh shit nah!! Mike and trey is about to tear it down again. I hope Q make it through.