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Aliyah and Michael have a troubled relationship. They both grew up in a little town by the name of Gary , Indiana. Michael promised Aliyah that they would get married after college. But Michael becomes this big time Hip-Hop artist and changed for the worst. Will Michael be able to uphold his promise? Who will Stay
Chapter 13 is posted , Im sorry to any new readers this accidently got deleted so bare with me. Much love
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51175 Read Count: 7360
Date: Aug 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 29
Uhhhh, I could just fuck Kamille's ass up like fr fr. She think she slick with her thotting lying ass. And Mike, man idek where to fucking begin with him. He really is cutting up something serious. He needs to get his shit together. And I can just fuck his ass up too. I think he possessed now cause the old Mike wasn't anything like this. Maybe a lil bad but THIS is just ridiculous. Let us pray, shall we?!?!? Lol. Btw, I remember who Kendrick is. Old dirty ass bastard.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next update. It's been 3 years Bri, lol. And I also updated my story if you haven't read it yet.
Date: Aug 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 28
Awww I think I was wrong about trey. He trying ig. He so sweet and whatnot. But I wanna know how long that's gone last. And kamille with her new dude walking in chipotle like married couples this Kendrick dude is no doubt the baby's pappy. Ik he has to be. Cause she was just all up on Mike five secs ago and a second later she with.....Kendrick whoever he is. Thottie fr bruhh!! Kml.
Great chapter. Can't wait for you to continue.
Author's Response:
girl yes Trey is a little slickster and Kendrick is the guy wemet in the earlier in the story ring a bell?
Date: Jul 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 27
OMG!!!! Michael, really? You go back and fuck Kamille? But still he have no fucking right to be mad when his lying ass still haven't told Aliyah about ol' girl's pregnancy. Calling himself getting mad at somebody. Nigga plz. And I'm glad liyah forgave Erica but she still a lil ho tho. And as for Trey he ain't no better himself.
Great chapter girl. I been missing ya lol.
Date: Jul 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 26
Aww, she had a miscarriage. And I knew the truth would come out but not like that tho. But damn Mike, you're erasing her out of your life for good. Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So now you gone go back to Kamille now. He better not. His light skin ass better go back and get his woman before someone else does. He know he loves liyah with all his heart. He's just got bad news and reacted towards it in a way he felt was right, I guess. But please don't let it be the end of them. They need to sit down and talk. But Mike really don't have no right to go off anyway, cause his ass got Kamille preggos and STILL didn't tell Liyah about it. So it's like a what and what thing going on. I swear, this is some B.A.N.S. fr fr.
But fantastic chapter, Bri :)
Author's Response:
lmao Breeeee!!!! giiirrrrllll stuff is about to hit the fan real soon stay tuned -muah-
Date: Jul 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 22
I'm not even suppose to be on here but your story was calling my name for me to read the new chapter you updated. Lol. But imo, I really think Liyah should forgive Erica......in due time and Mike. And she really do need to cut all ties with Trey too and work on her and Mikey. But these secrets that her and Mike are holding from each other....they need to come to the light. They should at least sit each other down and let it all out that way shit won't pop off. But great chapter Bri. And I hope you do start a new story. I'll be waiting if you do.
Author's Response:
lol your the only one that thinks Liyah should forgive Erica lol , Trey girrrl lol exactly all these lies and secrets they got going on is not good for their relationship thats why they are the way they are now. Rollercoaster ride at its best lol girl go be with your family hell tell them to read with you lol -muah- have fun boo
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 14
Awww, Liyah was going to tell him, but didn't want to ruin the excitement about him getting signed to that record deal. But she still should have told him tho. He had a right to know cause he was the father. And now let me get to Kamille's ass. The thot said she's whet? Pregnant? Oh Lord save me now from this. And what the hell she talking about they can't go their separate ways. Like bitch, do you really need to be with Mike that bad all because you're preggos? I KNOW alot of girls who have broken up with their fucking boyfriends or vice versa, and found out about their pregnancies sometimes after or sometimes before the break up but they don't say to the boy that they can't go their separate ways. They just tell em so the daddy can know about their child and be in their child's life then they skiddaddle. She is just one I can't be without you Michael-we can't go our separate ways-clingy ass bitch/hoe. Like get the fuck girl. Lol. Please update soon. Love this story.
Author's Response:
lmmfao aye yo Bre you are hilarious I think I just died girl you crazy , exactly Kamille believes that just because she pregnant her and Michael have to be together she needs to grow up quick like Michael dont want you girl. Exactly girl me too thats why I want my story to touch on real life events because Im sure everyone knows a Kamille , a Michael and a Aliyah I live for your reviews lol thanks boo
Date: Jul 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 21
Whoo, chile. Shit just got really real just now. Michael brought up the situation that happened between him and Erica. She just....ugh!!! Bitch you can't talk about a nigga not being good for nobody when your ass ain't no good for friendship. And I didn't even know you updated a chapter. Lol.
Oh, I almost forgot, I followed you back on IG and you're GORG too sweetie. :)
Author's Response:
Exactly its like the pot calling the kettle black like little shawty cool it now lol she just cant stand Michael for his lying and cheating ways but she did have a crush on him back in the day when they all was growing up. Should I do a random flashback? I might bless yall with some random flashbacks when the story ends. BTW Chris is her cousin.
Thank you so much pretty girl , I was like yesss she is beautiful
Date: Jun 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 39
Awwww for you to shout me out like that!!! 😍😍😍 but Liyah and Mike are still ugh!!!!! I wish she could have told mike about Kendrick but ig ima have to wait until then. And mike wanna be "friends". Mhmm friends my behind. But at least he was sincere this time.
More soon girl. 😘
Date: Feb 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 38
Oh, glory!! Kamille's ass better not had plot that shot on Liyah, cause I bust up in here in a million second over Liyah, kml. And I'm actually proud of Mike for trying to be civilized with Kamille and be in his child's life. There are so many dead beat daddy's we all couldn't keep count. But good for you Mike for making that change.
Date: Jul 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 24
Chiiiiile I knew it. I knew Teddy was Mike's father. See I'm smart like that. Girl yes indeed. Shit really just got real. Fr fr!!!!! But even tho Mike is upset which I understand, he still needs to tell Liyah the truth about Kamille' s baby and Liyah needs to tell him about the abortion. Girl you and these secrets. But you getting on me about my torturous chapters in my story. Lol. Anyway I love the banner your sister made for you. It's great. And the chapter was great too. Full of drama. Keep up the good work Bri :)
Author's Response:
lol girl you did say that and when you said it I already had the chapter typed up and I was like damn she figured me oout lol. didnt it though? girl Michael dont know what the truth means and ALiyah dont either lol. Thank you I love that banner too she just popped up and was like here lol thank you Bre. And you stay teasing though
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 25
Whoo, girl, Mike is PISSED! And he is so loving and caring towards Liyah. But still, he is PISSED. That's all can say for right now. Lol.
Date: Jun 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 13
Awww, you accidentally deleted your story. I'm still gonna read it girl. And I'll definitely check out your new story as long as you check out mine. Deal? Lol. Please don't give up on this story. I still love it.
Author's Response:
iknow like i was at the brink of tears & ofcourse deal boo 😘😘
Date: Jun 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 19
I'm glad Mike is stepping up and being a real man for once in a lifetime......even if the baby may not be his. Like I said, they need to go take a DNA test to make sure tho. And Mike is ready to kick some Trey ass for kissing his woman. Aliyah was right to tell him cause he needed to know but he also needs to know about her abortion just like Liyah needs to know about this thot's pregnancy. Great chapter girl.
Author's Response:
Breeeee 😩😩😂😂😂😭😭 you really hate Kamille lol i think i like her hardcore character she is hard eventhough she is a bitch but yeah i like her attitude i know call me crazy but Aliyah is soft when it comes down to Michael Kamille lets him know straight up but then again kamille is a hoe we dont love these hoes 😂😂😩 thanks love 😘😘 stay tuned hehe
Date: Jun 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 18
Erica is missing me off. Like bitch, if Liyah's happy then you should too. And trey ass trying to "talk" nigga skiddadle. All ik is, Kamille ho-ing ass better not try any funny business with Mike. And Mike better not fall for her ratchet ass tricks either. They need to go get a DNA test done to clarify shit. And one more thing, when Mike said that his mother doesn't like teddy and he don't know why. Why do I feel like that Teddy is possibly Mike's father. Idk why, but if he is. Ima faint. Lol. Great chapter Bri. And have fun in Montreal.
Author's Response:
Erica lol I dont really know what to say about her yet she is just trying to be a "friend" lmmfao my lips are zipped , and thank you Im loving it already
Date: Jun 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 17
For once in a motherfuckin' lifetime Michael's being honest. But they still have some important things they need to both tell each other. And I knew Trey "oh I'll treat you better than he ever could. I'll never hurt you" ass was with some thotting ass hussy. I knew it. Smdh. Now a nigga mad cause she chose Mikey. Ha haaaaaaa!!!! Great job :)
Author's Response:
Exactllyyyy lol and thank you soo much Bre -muah-