Penname: KaraBeloved [Contact] Real name: Kara
Member Since: Jul 27, 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:
An avid Michael Jackson fan since 1992!
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
Real Name: Kara
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Summary:

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For no mere woman can resist the beauty of the thriller...

Ola Ray once said that she fell in love with him during the making of "Thriller." That she wishes now that she had told him so. That their relationship was close and intimate, but never romantic.

This is my version of a what-if, if MAYBE things had gone a little differently. If she had the courage to tell him how she felt. 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Angst, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24087 Read Count: 10996
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time

I'm an avid fan of Thriller era! I'm glad you have work on here! I look forward to getting more into this story, and the others you have posted!

Author's Response:

Hey there fellow thriller lover!! I'm so glad you like my story, and I hope you like the other stories I've written as well. There's more to come, so stay tuned! Thank you so much for reviewing!:))

Summary: Past Featured Story

Masks, feathers, corsets and fishnet stockings; Welcome to the sinfully beautiful world of Burlesque.
When the Titanic set sail in April 1912, little did anyone know that there were gorgeous beauties on board, ready to lure the wealthy and the privileged in to their webs of sin.
They were the best kept secret aboard the Titanic.
But how badly can you desire one man? So badly that it would make you defy all rules and norms that bound you to this world and the one you own? So badly that it would leave yourself give in to deception of all those around you? How long can one girl battle against an all-consuming desire, greed, a passion and lust?

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Categories: Adult, Adventure, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Challenges: Titanic - Michael' s Story
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83728 Read Count: 12535
[Report This] Published: Jul 04, 2012 Updated: Apr 12, 2013
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Greatest Show On Earth

Great story! I love romantic stories! I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for being a reader! Your reviews motivate me to do even more! Stay tuned. Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

Everybody doesn't believe in the whole ‘Friends with Benefits' thing but what if your friend took that to a whole other level?

Michael is always being teased as the virgin in the family because he's saving himself for marriage. But, he gets fed up with the tormenting and bullying from his siblings including his dad that he turns to his best friend, Lola, for help. He's always had a crush on her but never knew if she felt the same. He asked her to take his virginity that turns into a blissful moment for the both of them. But that blissful moment can turn into a tragedy in a quick second. After bliss come pain, heartache, and possessiveness. Can Lola handle Michael's irrational behavior or should she leave before it's too late?

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are MY PROPERTY.  I do not know any of these celebs nor am I associated with them. No copyright infringement is intended. If you do not like strong language or violence please do not read.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28172 Read Count: 16776
[Report This] Published: Feb 22, 2013 Updated: Apr 07, 2013
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

New reader! This seems like this will be a thrill ride!

Author's Response:

Well Hello new reader

Summary:

 

title


" I know that his music touched me. And that's all I know."


Of course, it's not all she knows, but those fibs are irrelevant.

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, This Is It: 2006-2009, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11026 Read Count: 6331
[Report This] Published: Feb 26, 2013 Updated: Feb 26, 2013
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 23, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: When, When, When

Wow! Best One Shot I read in along time!

Summary:

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Girl, close your eyes, let that rhythm get into you....


Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5977 Read Count: 978
[Report This] Published: Mar 23, 2013 Updated: Mar 23, 2013
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Feel That Heat

Hey hun!

I love the visualization and illustration in the story! I do the same in my stories! Anyhoo, love this story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your words! I try to give the reader as much of a visual idea as I can, cuz trees always some specific thing that I see in my head haha! All love girl!:)

Speak. by BrownSugarBabe Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

 

Silence had been her only friend since she was born.

It wasn't until she met him was the moment she really 

wanted to speak...

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This story contains strong sexual content, violence and disturbing content.

Reader's discretion is advised.

xo


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Kidnapping, Physical Abuse, Racism, Rape, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31301 Read Count: 4238
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2014 Updated: Oct 18, 2015
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 10, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue.

Rave reviews led me to this story! The title and banner is very catch as well!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

award winner   award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: May 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Finally Found Out

I love how you dissected Kenny's personality and psyche! He has some serious issues! Jealousy has taken over him, and I am terrified! Jesus! It's so sad how insanely jealous someone can be. They really have underlying issues with themselves. Rhoda is another who is insanely jealous. I have a hunch that both of them will suffer greatly! I just hate that she told Kenny where Ria is.

Author's Response:

Yup. Kenny has a lot of issues. A lot if it caused by his twisted upbringing. I think he would have been worse off if he didn't have Ria and Michael in his life when he was younger. Rhoda grew up just like Kenny so that's why they share a similar psychosis. <333 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: May 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Nervous Wreck

Wow! So Rhoda really was pregnant! Why do I have doubts that the baby probably wasn't his in the first place! Just an excuse to keep Michael in her life! I sure hope Rhoda is out of the picture because she was on my last nerve with her childishness!

Author's Response:

Yup she was really pregnant. She put a hole in the condom to assure that she was. Thinking a baby would get Michael to stay with her was just ridiculous. <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: May 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: The Give That Takes

I was waiting on spins and needles to see what would unfold between Rhoda and Michael with Ria wedged into the equation. She pregnant? Yea, right! These crazy heifers always pull that game when desperately want a man! She is lying! Sorry I don't believe that! I would be shocked if she is! I now Ria will be there, but that will make Ria and Mike's new found relationship complicated! Believe, I have been there.

Author's Response:

Lol you'll see what comes of it. She did try very hard to make that pregnancy happen. It might just be for real. Read on love you'll get it!! <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Through The Windows

I've wondering where you been! Glad to see you back, girl! I totally understand that life gets in the way so you take your time. We'll still be here waiting!

On the other hand, great chapter! Trouble is hovering in the air, but I believe Marley and Michael can make the best of it! They just need to will themselves into thinking all this trouble will end. Love is very powerful, and it can conquer any evil. Lol sorry if that was cheesy, but you know what I'm saying. I also think Teddy will make it through the night even thought I had a strange inkling.

Cant wait for the next chapter! And congratulations on your nominations for the Remember MJficiton awards! This story deserves it!

Author's Response:

Girl I've been buried with work and family life. It's crazy and balance is very unpredictable under my circumstances. Thank you do much for reading!!!

the clinax to it all is at hand for sure  So I gave them a little calm before the storm. 

Thank you so much for the vote of confidence. And congrats on your Noms as well!!  Much love!!<333

 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: May 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love

Great chapter! I'm glad these two were able to put that shocking incident on the back burner and get on with their budding relationship!

Author's Response:

It was a long time coming and they were not going to let anything stop them. Especilly since it was out of their hands anyway. <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: May 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Divinity In Motion

So these two finally did the do! It was very magical! THey seem very in sync with one another. Hope in the near future, they will be able to tell Baylee about their new relationship. I don't think it'll be tough as she already loves Marley like mother.

Author's Response:

They love for made finally. No little Baylee to step in. Lol. They are very in sync. They will eventually tell Bylee about them. So much is at play right now. <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Out In The Open

I'm finally all caught up! Yay! What a gentleman Michael is! I kind of predicted his reaction, but I didnt think it'll be this sincere. I do believe that God will work a miracle, and they can end up having children. I've seen it happened. And this Captain dude, wtf lol! Love your illustrations, Menen!

Author's Response:

Yayyyyyyy. I'm so glad you're finally caught up. It's getting down to the wire intense and a few more bombs will fall. The connection with the captain will come to light in the next episode!! Miracles can always happen!! :)) <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 35: I Know You

Detective Canton is Kenny??? Dear God!

This story is so suspenseful! I know in my heart we would get taken down and sent straight to the bowels of jail, and then Mar, Michael, and Baylee can live happily ever!

I cant wait to the next chapter, but I'm a little sad the story is about to end :(

Author's Response:

Yup he is. He changed his identity and face to insert himself back into Michael's life and to eventually get what he wanted. Michael Mar and Baylee are not out of the hot water yet. Stay tuned!! <333

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)

My oh my! Wasnt this chapter suspenseful! Part of it was heart warming seeing her and Michael happily married, and hoping to start a family soon! I had a strong feeling that was Kenny she bumped into, and whom she met in the room. I cant believe he drugged and possibly raped her? I hope not! Oh Lord! I just know that the tragedy is near! Good job, Menen! I love the way you use your paint brush and create these chapters! You're a true artist! And I know a true artist when I spot one being an actual artist myself lol! Sorry I've been M.I.A. with this story! It's been a crazy several months!

Author's Response:

It's ok Hun. Glad you're back to reading annnndddd writing. I'm so loving your story. 

Unfortunaltly he did tape her and he taped the whole thing. Smh. Kenny is a lunatic yesss the tragedy is near so hang on to your tissues. <333