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Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave. Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life. He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart. When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet. Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day. How will Michael cope. Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.
This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story. No copyright infringment intended.
Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
Date: Jan 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Bye Bye Love Hello
Very difficult reading this chapter! It was beautifully written, and the way you depicted Ria's death made it less difficult. I am disgusted with Kenny. What disgusted me most of all is that fact that he sat next to her dead body enjoying his deed. Sick and disturbing! Well at least we know why he is after Baylee, he thinks she's his. I just hope he doesn't have a chance to take out his revenge on Michael and his new love, Marley.
On the other hand, I'm glad he was able to discuss Ria's death with Marley, and I wasnt surprised how understanding she was with him still loving her. You never forget your first love. However, it appears that he is able to move on and give the rest of his heart to Marley.
Author's Response:
Ria's death was hard to write. I didn't want it to be too graphic but at the same time I wanted you guys to feel the atmosphere Kenny created. It was dark and painful. Michael and Bay suffered from it to this day. So telling Mar about it was really hard. <333
Date: Jan 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Secrets So Untold...
Boy, was I in for a surprise? Kenny is Canton? Sneaky some of a bitch! I hope he gets his!
Author's Response:
Yup finally we know. He's made him self central to their lives now. Only this time he as the upper hand. <333
Date: Jan 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Watching Eyes...Sinister Ties (Deux)
Girl! I'm mad I've been M.I.A.! This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! I should have known Kenny's crazy ass was up to something! He really went through lengths to get her! This girl is really a price! I cannot believe he drugged and raped Ria! The thirst is real! On top of that, giving her an ultimatum. Leave Michael or else. On top of that, she's pregnant? I pray to God the baby is Michael's and not Kenny's That'll break my little heart! Deep down, I think it is Michael's.
Author's Response:
It's all good love. I'm glad you're catching up. Kenny is crazy and he would do anything to be with Ria and unfortunate he stopped to the lowest level to do it. <333
Date: May 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: The Give That Takes
I was waiting on spins and needles to see what would unfold between Rhoda and Michael with Ria wedged into the equation. She pregnant? Yea, right! These crazy heifers always pull that game when desperately want a man! She is lying! Sorry I don't believe that! I would be shocked if she is! I now Ria will be there, but that will make Ria and Mike's new found relationship complicated! Believe, I have been there.
Author's Response:
Lol you'll see what comes of it. She did try very hard to make that pregnancy happen. It might just be for real. Read on love you'll get it!! <333
Date: Jun 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Through The Windows
I've wondering where you been! Glad to see you back, girl! I totally understand that life gets in the way so you take your time. We'll still be here waiting!
On the other hand, great chapter! Trouble is hovering in the air, but I believe Marley and Michael can make the best of it! They just need to will themselves into thinking all this trouble will end. Love is very powerful, and it can conquer any evil. Lol sorry if that was cheesy, but you know what I'm saying. I also think Teddy will make it through the night even thought I had a strange inkling.
Cant wait for the next chapter! And congratulations on your nominations for the Remember MJficiton awards! This story deserves it!
Author's Response:
Girl I've been buried with work and family life. It's crazy and balance is very unpredictable under my circumstances. Thank you do much for reading!!!
the clinax to it all is at hand for sure So I gave them a little calm before the storm.
Thank you so much for the vote of confidence. And congrats on your Noms as well!! Much love!!<333
Date: May 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Great chapter! I'm glad these two were able to put that shocking incident on the back burner and get on with their budding relationship!
Author's Response:
It was a long time coming and they were not going to let anything stop them. Especilly since it was out of their hands anyway. <333
Date: May 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Divinity In Motion
So these two finally did the do! It was very magical! THey seem very in sync with one another. Hope in the near future, they will be able to tell Baylee about their new relationship. I don't think it'll be tough as she already loves Marley like mother.
Author's Response:
They love for made finally. No little Baylee to step in. Lol. They are very in sync. They will eventually tell Bylee about them. So much is at play right now. <333
Date: Jun 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Boxed In
Wow! This chapter had me on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response:
Prepare to move closer to the edge! <333
Date: Jun 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Soft Then Vile
Another dark chapter! Kenny is very sinister. He really needs to sit down and have a talk with Jesus. I really think his issues with himself causes him to act evil. He's too controlling and hates rejection. Sadly a lot of narcissistic individuals behave that way. I cannot believe he poisoned his own father. How cruel and sick to murder your own parent!
Author's Response:
There will be a lot of darkness with Kenny. He's succombed to evil for real. You have to remember his father did some heinous shit to him and allowed just as bad things to happen on his watch sho that wa his motive for killing him. Unfortunately the hate he has in him is spilling out and drowing everbody else around him too. <333
Date: Nov 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls
I understand Marley being upset with Michael for keeping what's in the box from him because she's in love and wants to know every aspect about him. However, I understand Michael was trying to protect her and leave his past in the past in order to move on.
Kenny, on the other hand, is a sick f**k! I hope he gets his. Time will tell when he gets his! Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Its only going to get worse when it comes to Kenny. He's not done just yet with his vendetta. Marley and Michael are tuff they'll make it through. <333
Date: Nov 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
My oh my! Wasnt this chapter suspenseful! Part of it was heart warming seeing her and Michael happily married, and hoping to start a family soon! I had a strong feeling that was Kenny she bumped into, and whom she met in the room. I cant believe he drugged and possibly raped her? I hope not! Oh Lord! I just know that the tragedy is near! Good job, Menen! I love the way you use your paint brush and create these chapters! You're a true artist! And I know a true artist when I spot one being an actual artist myself lol! Sorry I've been M.I.A. with this story! It's been a crazy several months!
Author's Response:
It's ok Hun. Glad you're back to reading annnndddd writing. I'm so loving your story.
Unfortunaltly he did tape her and he taped the whole thing. Smh. Kenny is a lunatic yesss the tragedy is near so hang on to your tissues. <333
Date: Apr 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 35: I Know You
Detective Canton is Kenny??? Dear God!
This story is so suspenseful! I know in my heart we would get taken down and sent straight to the bowels of jail, and then Mar, Michael, and Baylee can live happily ever!
I cant wait to the next chapter, but I'm a little sad the story is about to end :(
Author's Response:
Yup he is. He changed his identity and face to insert himself back into Michael's life and to eventually get what he wanted. Michael Mar and Baylee are not out of the hot water yet. Stay tuned!! <333
Date: Feb 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Out In The Open
I'm finally all caught up! Yay! What a gentleman Michael is! I kind of predicted his reaction, but I didnt think it'll be this sincere. I do believe that God will work a miracle, and they can end up having children. I've seen it happened. And this Captain dude, wtf lol! Love your illustrations, Menen!
Author's Response:
Yayyyyyyy. I'm so glad you're finally caught up. It's getting down to the wire intense and a few more bombs will fall. The connection with the captain will come to light in the next episode!! Miracles can always happen!! :)) <333
Date: Aug 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Unintentional Lies
Sorry I'm late, honey. Been busy with work and starting a new business. I dont think it was bad that Michael didnt tell Marley right off about the box. It's kind of personal and I feel that Michael trusts her, but it seems more like he doesnt want to cross the bridge fully with her for her own safety and the line of trust. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
It's all good my love. And congrats with the business. Don't forget I'm for real when I say if you need any works to display you can call on me. That's if the Gallery is what you went with.
As for Michael not telling Marley kind of made her vulnerable. Her apartment keys where in the box and you know her place got broken into and trashed so she's in this. Michael just has to let her know what's going on so she knows what she has to look out for. Safety and Trust are a must. <333
Date: May 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Nervous Wreck
Wow! So Rhoda really was pregnant! Why do I have doubts that the baby probably wasn't his in the first place! Just an excuse to keep Michael in her life! I sure hope Rhoda is out of the picture because she was on my last nerve with her childishness!
Author's Response:
Yup she was really pregnant. She put a hole in the condom to assure that she was. Thinking a baby would get Michael to stay with her was just ridiculous. <333