Penname: KaraBeloved [Contact] Real name: Kara
Member Since: Jul 27, 2012
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An avid Michael Jackson fan since 1992!
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Age: 21+
Real Name: Kara
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Summary:

"Friendship may and often does grow into love, but love never subsides into friendship."

-       By Lord Bryon.

Can two friends see how much they care for each other?. Wanting to be more than Friends?.

 

Michael and Amber have been friends since the tender age of ten, spending time together but as they grew and are in High school, can Michael finally admit his feelings for his best friend and can Amber finally see it and care for him as he does for her?

 

Find out in..

   'I Found that Girl'


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38558 Read Count: 122367
[Report This] Published: Oct 12, 2015 Updated: Mar 01, 2016
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2016 Title: Chapter 32: The End.

This review well overdue lol!

Excellent chapter! It's been awhile since I read a PG story!

Amber and Michael made a great couple, especially going through all the trial and tribulations. At one point, I did not like how messy Amber was being lol! Her hooking up Marlon, which I believe to make him jealous and his personality had her swoon and vacillating back and forward. Michael not knowing what to do with himself when he fell madly in love with her. I'm glad he had Chris to add comic relief!

In the end, I'm glad they found it in their hearts that they love each other and going to run off towards! I'm also glad they picked a time where Mean Papa Joe wouldn't catch him!

Great story, Lorry! It was so good I nominated it for the site's Mj fanfiction awards. I hope I can tell you that! If not, oops lol! Anyways, off to read the sequel!

Author's Response:

It has been long over due but we here at last! Lmao. Yes Amber is seriously messy I agree putting Mj though all the emotional turmoils with Marlon and then Chris's crazy cousin involved smh but they stood it all no matter what! Yea the runway they chose a time when Joseph wouldn't find em which was a blessing in disguise and there's more in the sequel to be read lol. Aww thank you so much for the nomination! Never thought one of my stories would be nominated <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Ch.9

Great chapter again, hun! I'm just going to read the rest of the chapters, and make a big review at the very end! I don't want to look too messy, giving a review to each chapter. Hope that's okay with you!

Author's Response:

Heyo darling! It's no biggie I'll be waiting for your long review 😉

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Ch.8

Marlon needs his ass whoop for that! He knows Joe's only aim

Author's Response:

Smh Ikr but Marlon sometimes only does it to keep his own ass out of line with Joe's view which isn't fair on Michael who only trusted him but we shall see 😖

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Ch.7

Man I was hoping Amber wouldnt fall for Marlon's charm and wittiness! This could be just a farce,a and she could be doing this to make Michael jealous. Creating sibling rivalry!

Author's Response:

Well who wouldn't fall for Marlon's charms but Amber she won't for long and we'll she might be doing it to make mj jealous or not who knows you'll just have to read on to find out 😏

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Ch.4

Lovers always start off as friends--well most of them. It's cute how these argue and fight then make up!

Author's Response:

yep your right lol, they are just too cute for words sometimes~ 

Summary: Past Featured Story


On June 27, 1999, Michael Jackson was performing in a charity benefit concert in Munich Germany. Towards the end of his performance tragedy struck when there was a malfunction with a cable snapped causing him to fall 50 feet. After sustaining serious injuries, he was stabilized then transferred to the States where he had multiple surgeries to mend his battered and broken body.  In his depressed state he has become the patient no one can handle.


Jo Quinn is a traveling, tough as nails, Physical Therapist who has been assigned the hardest cases across the country because of her take no prisoners attitude. She jumped at the opportunity to return to where her roots are, move back to New England and take on the special case that no one in the agency wanted. 


Will she be the one to finally fight back and help him help himself? Will he finally heal his physical and mental wounds? Can she be the one to finally see him for who he really is and allow him to be himself and get the care he needs? Afterall, he's only human and has his faults just like everyone else. Join them on their emotional journey and find out.


Categories: Award Winning, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386644 Read Count: 36582
[Report This] Published: Oct 20, 2015 Updated: Oct 28, 2016
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

After seeing all the nominations and then evidently awards, I had to check this story out and it's amazing! Love Michael's out of character, character lol! Off to binge read!

Author's Response:

thanks for checking it out.  i hope you like it.



Author's Response:

thanks for checking it out.  i hope you like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A 19th century twisted love story and mystery. Also a dark tale of corruption and  perversion of justice by the pillars of society and their secret rituals and practices.

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Michael Jackson came to London with the African Choir in the 1900s where he was given his Christian name and a full university scholarship. He makes his way in the world with his brilliance, talent and looks, until the corrupt Judge Sneddon condemns him and has him thrown into the insane asylum because of a personal grudge. Years later, Michael returns and the beautiful Annabelle Lee Sneddon, daughter of the pious vulture of the law, stumbles into Michael's life. She falls helplessly in love with the beautiful, mysterious man, but Michael’s once warm heart is now frozen from the cold treatment society has wrought upon it. Out of sheer abhorrence for the judge himself, Michael maliciously plans to use this opportunity to get revenge on him by seducing and conceiving a child with his precious daughter. Will Annabelle Lee be a victim of Michael’s devious scheme, or will she rekindle the warmth and love within his once kind and gentle soul? And what will happen when the judge and his forces of evil catch wind of their forbidden love?


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36849 Read Count: 4848
[Report This] Published: Oct 29, 2015 Updated: Nov 01, 2016
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

Wow! This chapter scared the mess out of me! Utterly chilling, but I'm not too scared to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you! This is kind of a morbid story, lol

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: White Dove and Blank Eyes

Wow! This story is so intriguing. I love how it has all my favorite genres: horror, romance, and mystery! Some of the elements are disturbingly brilliant and I love Annabelle and Michael has a couple, and I am smitten with Michael's charming chapter!

Great story, Cory! And congrats on your nomination! This story definitely deserves it!

Author's Response:

'Disturbingly brilliant' - that is the most amazing compliment ever! Especially from a brilliant writer such as yourself. You have made my whole night! Thank you! <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 02, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Truth and Ritual Sacrafice

Hi, Corybante!

I haven't forgotten about this story. I got some catching up to do. Apologies for the delay.

Author's Response:

Perfectly fine <3 Thank you for reading! Always nice to see you :)

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Thunder and Lightening

Michael is such a sensitive soul! Make our hearts melt! Great chapter, hun!

Author's Response:

Ineed he is :) Thank you  <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Jun 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Sex and Fear

Gorgeous Liz makes appearance so story has just gotten even better!

Author's Response:

TThank you! Liz is a wild card in this one :)

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: White Dove and Blank Eyes

This is creepy! Nice! I love creepy! Please continue. Michael, a queer gentleman, sounds sexy!

Author's Response:

Thank you :) Michael, sexy? You think so? Lol

Summary:

 

To the Intelligence community he was a international criminal turned company man.  An asset.
To her he was just a kid, a partner, a friend.  But was she willing to cross the line for love?
To him she was the answer he never knew he was looking for.
Will their love Liv or will circumstance beyond their control let it die?


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Crime, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Kidnapping
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18286 Read Count: 517
[Report This] Published: Jan 25, 2016 Updated: Mar 26, 2016
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed
Date: Jan 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Episode 1: The Catch & Release Case

You done it again, Menen! Another great story! I can definitely see the artist in you. Another artist can always spot another artist!

Author's Response:

Awe thank you sweetheart. I'm hoping it will live up to the expectations I have of it. The format is kind of unusual but hopefully entertaining enough to keep you guys riveted. thanks so much for reading love!! <333

Summary:

Amber and Michael free from the clutches of Gary, head off to the sunny side of L.A hoping to follow their dreams but amongst the mix of finding where they belong...

they are blessed with a child and unknown shores of drama drop into their life which wasn't expected..

How will they cope?

Can they sustain their relationship though it all juggling with a child and their own dreams?
Find out in..

in the sequel to 'I Found that Girl'...

'California Dreaming'


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adventure, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83200 Read Count: 112919
[Report This] Published: Mar 04, 2016 Updated: Aug 22, 2017
Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 11, 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Ch.18

I'm finally all caught up!

Michael and Amber's life is really getting interesting! I'm glad their family bond is getting strong with Andy warming up to Michael and Marlon reuniting with Michael. He does need some comic relief with all the chaos. I'm just glad they are save from Joe for the time being.

I cant wait to find out what happens next! This is an awesome story, Lorry!

Author's Response:

Yay your caught up lol, yes I agree with all the Chaos a little peace is needed in it all as well mj and Andy slowly getting closer hopefully amber will as well. Who knows if Joe's past will catch up with them? Hehe we shall see. More to come soon Kara! 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Ch. 22

So Michael is going to pursue a music career? Mmh! That's going to be pretty tough on Amber and the baby! As an entertainer, I think he should hide them so they won't get caught up in the media. Although it's in 70's, it won't be as bad, but as the years progress, it might be. My heart is going in different directions!

Great chapter, Lorry! Sorry I'm late reading and reviewing.

Author's Response:

I agree it is going to be tough trail but they will grow together the media won't be so hectic but what will happen when he truly blows up? Eek! Don't worry my heart is tied on how I'm going to progress as well lol. No problem on the late comment Kara I love reading your comments no matter the time it takes 😏