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Amber and Michael free from the clutches of Gary, head off to the sunny side of L.A hoping to follow their dreams but amongst the mix of finding where they belong...
they are blessed with a child and unknown shores of drama drop into their life which wasn't expected..
How will they cope?
Can they sustain their relationship though it all juggling with a child and their own dreams?
Find out in..
in the sequel to 'I Found that Girl'...
'California Dreaming'
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adventure, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83200 Read Count: 112945
Date: Jun 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: ::Ch. 4::
Joe's old mean ass needs to get out of here! Why does he have to be such a brute! Searching Gray for his runaway son! Man, let your kids live their life, and him beating Marlon! It was so hard to read!
Author's Response:
I agree with you completely he needs to leave his them alone it's not like they will say anything to let his business be known smh.I feel you as well at the time it was hard to write for me. Thanks for reading <3
Date: Jun 05, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: ::Ch. 3::
Looks like the consummation of the marriage was a success, and seems like Michael is very romantic.
I love how you added the intro ad lib from "I Just Cant Stop Loving You" That was so romantic! I actually melted from reading it!
Author's Response:
Yes it was with no complications lol, Michael loves spoiling his girl even when she isn't interested lol. I couldn't help myself adding that part it was too adorable not to add! I'm glad you had fun reading 😘
Date: Jun 03, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: ::Ch. 2::
Vegas baby, vegas! I didnt think the vowels were cheesy. It was quiet cute, and hey, they're young! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
heck yes vegas is the place to take their vows lol. well i'm glad you don't think so with the vows and your right thye are young lol, thanks for reading hun <3
Date: May 27, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: ::Ch.1::
So I see my fave couple has escaped without being caught! I wonder what lies ahead of them.
Author's Response:
Yes they have and it's a long journey ahead for them, let's hope it goes alright with them both, welcome to the sequel Kara!.
Date: Aug 20, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Ch. 26
I dont know why this site didnt notified me that there was an update. Strange smh! Anyways!
Great chapter! I can see sparks flying between Marlon and Michaela. Also, I can see Marlon's ego being knocked down a notch. He apologized so that's a start. I wonder what else will unfold.
Author's Response:
I agree it should update you smh! Yes sparks are indeed flying lool and yes his ego is being knocked down he is too overconfident for his own head. Who knows what will unfold??? You'll find out soon 😜
Date: Nov 18, 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Ch.37
Oh no, the vitiligo. Just when Amber and Michael are sharing a great moment then this pops up! On the other hand, Fatso Frank
Author's Response:
It had to pop the vitologo again or amber wouldn't have spotted it 😖. but it will get better (hopefully) lmao fatso Frank now that is harsh Kara! Tut tut.thanks as always <33
Date: Jun 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 10: ::Ch. 10::
Stubbornness is heavy in this chapter! Mercy!
Author's Response:
I agree Amber is known for being stubborn hopefully there relationship will improve! We shall see. Lool
Date: Jun 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 9: ::Ch. 9::
I can relate to Amber and her broken relationship with her father. She has a right to be anger since he left her and her mother. I feel for her greatly! I was also cheering for Michael when he stood up to him. Calling a grown man a boy is very disrespectful!
Great chapter, Lorry! You definitely capture the emotion in this chapter! Also congratulations on your nominations for Remember MJfiction awards!
Author's Response:
I'm glad your able to relate to how Amber felt though out the whole chapter poor girl, yeeees mj jumping the gun for his woman can't blame him no wants to be seen as a boy when he clearly isn't smh. Let's hope the relationship progresses over time between them.Thanks for the nomination Kara! That was really sweet of you! And congrats to you too!
Date: Aug 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Ch. 25
Hey Lorry,
Glad to see an update! Glad we could help!
I see Michael is trying to balance his career and the child he got on the way. Incorporating Quincy into the story is excellent. I like their interaction. On the other hand, Marlon needs to stop being a jerk. He knows he's feeling Michaela. That's why he's being such a jerk. Some guys do that, and some girls like it! I'm one of them!
Author's Response:
Hey Kara! Yes your advice indeed helped. Putting Quincy in I wanted someone he knew from real life to be in it so it felt more real as well Marlon he wants to deny his feelings typical Marlon lmao you like when a guy does that? To each their own lol. Don't worry those two will admit their feelings eventually. Thanks Kara!
New York City in the 70s, where young hearts long for the freedom to become one. However, obstacles stand in their way; the biggest perhaps his unforeseen destiny.
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Angst, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30753 Read Count: 1082
Date: Apr 28, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I remember this story on one of the old MJ forums, but I never got a chance to read it! Glad you posted it here! This is very well written, and I enjoy the imagery you give us!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! :D
Winners Posted!
6/25 is a day of sadness and a day of reflection. In honor of Michael's legacy and the authors who continue to bring us beautiful reminders of Michael, we bring you the Remembering Michael MJFiction Awards.
Awards: A graphic for the winning story summary + labeled as "Award Winning"
Categories: Award Winning
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1431 Read Count: 718
Date: Jun 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: And the Nominees Are
Congratulations to all the nominees!
Here's my vote:
He Wasn't Like That, but Damn! (Best OOC Michael)- Mr and Mrs. J - DLN1988
A Different Reality (Best AU)-The Judge's Daughter - Corybante
You Really Captured the Era (Best Era-
Mr and Mrs. J - DLN1988
My Stomach is in Knots (Best use of Drama)-Cradle to the Crave - TutThreeStevens
My Heart is Melting (Best use of Romance-Cradle to the Crave - TutThreeStevens
I Wish This One Shot Would Go On! (Best One-Shot)-Girls in High Places - KiyaSama
This Long Fic (100,000+ words) Must Continue! (Best Long Fic)-The Accused - Skywriter
I'd Read It Again (Best Completed Fiction)-I Found that Girl-Banner - Lorry
You Had Me at Your Banner (Best Banner- Waiting For You - MissA1485
Look at You Now! (Most Improved Author)-HoneyToTheBee
The Chemistry! (Best Couple)-The Accused - Skywriter
Most True to Reality (Best Take on Canon-Girls in High Places - KiyaSama
Author's Response:
Counted!
Date: Jun 16, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Run-Offs!
Here's my votes! Good luck to everyone!
He Wasn't Like That, but Damn! (Best OOC Michael)
Mr and Mrs. J - DLN1988
A Different Reality (Best AU)
The Judge's Daughter - Corybante
You Really Captured the Era (Best Era)
Baby Be Mine - Gabby7
My Stomach is in Knots (Best use of Drama)
Cradle to the Crave - TutThreeStevens
My Heart is Melting (Best use of Romance)
The Accused - SkyWriter
I Wish This One Shot Would Go On! (Best One-Shot)
Inside His Mind - Illusion
This Long Fic (100,000+ words) Must Continue! (Best Long Fic)
The Accused-Skywriter
I'd Read It Again (Best Completed Fiction)
Fear of Flying - Tinker13
You Had Me at Your Banner (Best Banner)
The Accused - SkyWriter
Look at You Now! (Most Improved Author)
Lorry
The Chemistry! (Best Couple)
The Accused - Skywriter
Author's Response:
Counted!
Date: Jul 06, 2016 Title: Chapter 3: The Winners Are....
Congratulations to all the winners! You guys are very talented!