Penname: Miss lima [Contact] Real name: Anastasia Ace
Member Since: Nov 02, 2013
Membership status: Member
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Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27228
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: Miss lima Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Still here!

Hey you have actually inspired me to write a story dedicated to your story it's name is "Fight For MJ" check it out!



Author's Response:

Heyyyy Miss Lima (love your name :)) I will DEFINITELY check it out. I feel honored that you took the time to write a story dedicated to mine. I'm sure it's GREAT! :D

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Date: Jan 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Episode 12c part 2

What is Sasha's name in real if it is her real name what's her whole name

 



Author's Response:

Her name is Bipasha Basu :) 

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Date: Jan 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Episode #1 Part a

Ijust realized  that Sasha is like an impressionasion of my fav person New York (Tiffany Pollard) and my favorite girls are Marisela and Sasha.

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Date: Dec 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Episode 8d ELIMINATIONS

wait a minute what I never got was why did Michael tell Miyoko that she was hogging but she really never spent time with him at all!?!!!!

 

Jasmine by FireFliesForMJ Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

There's Three Sides To Every Story;

Theres One Side,

Then There's The Other,

And Then There's The Truth.

new one

 

 

10/6 - ***THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR 2000+ READS!!! I love you all so much! You al wil never understand how happy that makes me! Much Love~ XoXo

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10297 Read Count: 3122
[Report This] Published: Sep 06, 2013 Updated: Oct 06, 2014
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Date: Dec 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Postponed!

OKAY favoriatly I would say Rihanna. But, DAMN  Keily Williams sing better on this, okay! But if it was older Rihanna (now) it would have her.



Author's Response:

Okay! 1 for Rihanna, 2 for Kiely!

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Date: Dec 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Yo! I never got to tell u but I absolutely LOOOOVE your video for this story especially since u used Trey Songz song Pain. Tell me, how do you make videos or even put this together?



Author's Response:

Thank you! <333 Well, there's a website called Stupeflix, but you can only use it once for free. I'm looking for other free websites, but when I do, I'll tell you!

Summary:

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Diana is your everyday woman. Except for one MINOR problem. She is as beautiful as a rose in the spring time. But her soul can be as dirty as the bottom of farmer's shoe. She can be so malicious that she makes the Devil appear like Mary Poppins. When she demands her way, she will get it,no matter who or what she harms. From the very first time she meets Michael,she knows she wants him, for Diana will not rest till her wish is fulfilled.

Michael has the world in the palm of his hands right now. His Thriller album is at an all-time high, he has just won 8 grammys, knocked down so many records, its criminal, and he is on his way to recording another best-selling album. But most importantly,he has somebody special to share this glorious time of his life with. Annie. She has been his rock for the past 5 years. Their relationship is a match made in heaven. But all that may come crashing down the moment Diana slithers into the perfect picture.

 

*I know many stories hae been made with "Dirty Diana" because of the compelling song, however, each unique and creative in their own special way, mine is no different. This a twisted, dark, complex story about Diana and if she actually came to life. Fair warning. Please understand that this story is strictly inspired by Dirty Diana, which some real events; I just manifested it into a story. Reader's discretion is strongly advised. On a brighter note, Please ENJOY!!!!!!!

(Graphic video made by an awesome designer)

This story takes place over a period of years. We shall begin in late 1985. Post-Thriller Era;Pre-Bad Era


UPDATE: The ORIGINAL PROLOGUE is now been posted as of 10/07/2013!! This will help to understand the story better!

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146911 Read Count: 34461
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2013 Updated: Aug 21, 2014
Reviewer: Miss lima Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - We're Talkin' Danger

OMG! Why that was a real teaser of a chapter; now I really want to read more than ever. Oh, one more thing!!!!! May I PLEASE  HELP YOU PLAN CHAPTERS OF YOU WONDERFUL STORY!!!!?

Author's Response:

Lol, you know I have to have the cliffhangers lol. A story is not a story without some. I will update soon. And I am honored you want to help me out. Well, I have quite a few chapter outlined, do you think you can send me an email or something with your ideas:) Would love to hear what you got:)

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Date: Jan 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Toxic Passion

Of course it's the lyrics to one of my favorite songs by him (Threatened)



Author's Response:

You guessed it!!!!!! Lol.

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Date: Dec 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Characters

Girl i really am hating the negative reviews about Diana she should win. Plus, Michael and Diana are sharing some chemistry probably more than him and Annie. I really hate Annie, sorry I just do. As my opinion Diana is a better lover not cause I love her, but she brings out diffrent sides to Michael and he's really never sad with her that's lust turning into love. So, maybe Michael and Diana could play a little game of Boss and Secretary. Like...a secret love game but Diana could push all of the gold diging buisness away and start to love Michael more than she thought she could ever love a human. And Annie (ugh) Michael could probably tell her and finally man up about how her feels around Diana and how Annie wants her way too much and nags (we all know she does *clearly*). So, Michael and Diana's love rendezvous could turn into a lovely relationship on the side. 

Author's Response:

Diana does seem to bring out a side we are not used to seeing. We will see how everything works out between Michael, Annie and Diana! Thanks for reading luv:)

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Date: Dec 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Sweet Nirvana:Part 1

OH MY GOD!!! Jessica Simpson- Sweetest Sin is one of my favorite songs thanks girl the bet story on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!stories/4221/images/mike_49.jpgstories/4221/images/mike_40.jpgAdriana



Author's Response:

Thanks girl!!!!!!!!!!! And yes, I used to jam to that too when it came out lol!!! Great pics!!!!!!

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Date: Dec 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch

OMG I literally just reread chapters 33&34 all over. Hey, why don't you make a video of Adriana Lima (Diana) and Michael using the son "Desire" by Vassy or "Man Eater" by Nelly Fertado. Then a video of all three, Diana, Michael, and Annie using the song "I Love You More" by En Vogue! Please think about it the respond to me quickly!



Author's Response:

I would soooooo love too!!!!! You are reading my mind. However, I don't know how to do it:/ lol. Otherwise, I sooooo would have done that. Is it hard to do? Let me know!

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Date: Dec 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Not a chapter: Just some more love!!!!

Thanks Cute. Chapters 33&34 were amazing; I need more!



Author's Response:

I promise!! I'm updating soon luv:)

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Date: Dec 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch

TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Annie messed up with that slap my girl, Diana, showed her!I really know why I want her to win only because Diana's character is Adriana Lima and I hte good girls always winning. You made this more exciting!

 



Author's Response:

Yea, I know what you mean. Even in chick flicks they do that in the movies. I think a more realistic approach is what makes a movie and what I mean is not always doing that Disney and Tyler Perry ending. And I understand, why u think I love your penname lol. And thank you, I am glad you find it exciting!!!!

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Date: Dec 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?

I'm loving this but man, my girl Diana (Adriana Lima) needs to try something like set up Annie so Michael thinks she's cheat (Because she's a bad girl/dangerous). Now I think you see I want Diana to win. Pleeeeaase! see since in all storie the good girl always wins (it totally gets old when the good side always win in stories/movies both) so to bring excitment I beg you to take my advice to let the bad girl win (Diana). Only cause I pesonally and really think people like Diana better. Only because she brings excitment and badness to the story. So, PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSE!!!! think about this. Let Diana win (like u say Diana always gets what she wants, it's like in the end she expresses a good side and show love for Michael). Michael can suddenly realize when Diana came it was a dangerous call, but then again telling him his five year relationship with Annie was not working like he saw/thought (he sees his attraction to Annie faded over years and a voice is trying to say Diana is a replacment sent to him for Annie)! So if take it mind and like it please try it. But, if you don't like it tell me what is wrong with it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! I love feedback. I like to hear what the readers are thinking. I am surprised people like Diana like that lol. When I first wrote this, I thought people would all revolt against her, which some people do lol. But at the same time I am not surprised, Diana brings I agree, excitement and thrill to the story. That is why the story is about her! lol. Now I love to hear suggestions and truly appreciate your input. Well, I can tell you what is going to happen, but then there won't be a story, hun! lol. But we are just at the surface :)

P.S. I love your penname (go figure)

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Date: Dec 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Not a Chapter; Just a Thanks to Readers

OMG I LOVE POPCORN WITH CHOCOLATE IT'S MY FAVORITE TYPE!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey there:) I think I tried that and I used to eat that. It wasnt bad  at all lol.