Penname: tinker13 [Contact] Real name: dawn
Member Since: Dec 24, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I have never written a story before but decided to jot down some thoughts recently.  I have found it very fun coming up with plotlines and taking you down the road of a romance involving Michael Jackson. 


 


I tried to weave in some logistial information from places i have been to in my life. 


 


I grew up my entire life loving Michael jackson.  I've always had all of his music and loved to watch his short films.  When he died a part of my childhood died with him.  I am happiest when I listen to his music.  Not a day goes by when I dont think of what an incredible hole has been left in the world's heart when he passed.  Hopefully in my writing he can continue to live in the words on the screen for many.


Gender: female
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Summary:

 

Chivonn's a girl in her mid-twenties working a mediocre job struggling just to get by. Her brother Bryan is a father of two young children is also struggling after his baby mama kicked him out and sliced his paychecks up with child support. The two siblings realize they are better off living together than struggling on their own. Chivonn feels safe with her brother and the living arrangement is working out perfectly....

....until the day Bryan's childhood friend Michael Jackson, gets released from prison and becomes the roommate from hell you just can't get rid of. He's bad, he's dangerous, and often lets his pride get in the way of doing what's right. There are a few good things about him, though. He's got a secret soft spot for children and just so happens to have one of the rawest talents the world will ever see.

 

But will the world get to see it? Or will his talent be wasted... Forever lost to the streets...

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142404 Read Count: 36878
[Report This] Published: Sep 09, 2014 Updated: Sep 20, 2015
Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Stop yo Judgin'

I just read this entire story (so far) and it's great.   I love it



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot!! I'm glad you like it!!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Jan 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Case of the Ex II

Geesh. Is there anyone byan didn't get pregnant except his sister 

 

poor michael is trying so hard to change. 



Author's Response:

LOL right and Risa. He hasn't touched her.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions and Plans of a Dangerous Event

She's got it bad for Michael.  Things are about to happen when the show finally happens

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: And it Just got a lil more Dangerous

I can't wait for the show.  He's finally going to really impress her



Author's Response:

He's going to impress the town!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Love me Harder

They are such a great couple.  She is so good for him.  Thanks for updating



Author's Response:

She is really good for Michael. He's come so far. 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 49: History of the Jacksons

NOOOO you cant break them up



Author's Response:

:-(

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: May 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 47: A Complete Missunderstandin'

Yea..They are back together!!!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Layin' Down the Law

Every chapter gets better and better.  This is great

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: The File

Oh dang it.  Why can't they just be normal for a little?  Can't michael just be good and loving for a bit?



Author's Response:

I know right.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

Ok I gotta say something...who the hell cares the timeframe of the therapy...the point is he's getting help...have we lost sight of the story and not the "facts"?  It's fiction for Cripes sake and a damn good one by a talented author.  Keep up the amazing writing. It's your story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great compliment!!! I like to try and stay as factual as possible so I don't mind the help at all, but you're right its all fictional.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: You is all talk

Poor michael, he waited forever for that moment and couldn't control himself.



Author's Response:

there will be more moments to come for him to redeem himself. Eventually.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 18, 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Men...

Ohh michael get your head out of your ass.   Can't you see the light at the end of the tunnel by staying on the right path?  Isn't it good enough for you?



Author's Response:

LOL apparently its no. Hopefully he learns fast.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Mar 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Dodging Bullets

Finally Mike gets a break from someone.  Hopefully he won't blow it.



Author's Response:

Hopefully! Because that's his last break with Kim. 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Mar 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 39: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

Will someone shut Risa up with her I told you so?  Oh Mike what have you done?  Just when things were going great.  That family moment was special.  She got to se the real man she loves.



Author's Response:

LOL Risa... and yeah, Michael would make a great family man. Let's hope he's not in any serious trouble.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

Every time I read a chapter all I can think of the song bills bills bills from destiny's child...just saying ..lol :)



Author's Response:

LMAO!! well hopefully one day Michael will be paying all of Chivonn's bills.