Penname: tinker13 [Contact] Real name: dawn
Member Since: Dec 24, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I have never written a story before but decided to jot down some thoughts recently.  I have found it very fun coming up with plotlines and taking you down the road of a romance involving Michael Jackson. 


 


I tried to weave in some logistial information from places i have been to in my life. 


 


I grew up my entire life loving Michael jackson.  I've always had all of his music and loved to watch his short films.  When he died a part of my childhood died with him.  I am happiest when I listen to his music.  Not a day goes by when I dont think of what an incredible hole has been left in the world's heart when he passed.  Hopefully in my writing he can continue to live in the words on the screen for many.


Gender: female
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Reviews by tinker13
Summary:

This will not be your typical fluffy happily ever after sequel and will span over the next 10 years of their life. Can Michael really provide a 'normal' life for Nina and the children? How long will it last? 

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151856 Read Count: 20857
[Report This] Published: Oct 13, 2014 Updated: Jan 19, 2016
Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 43: The Working Man

it may be a filler but I loved it.  It's nice to see them getting along.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's always nice when they're getting along.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Let's Break this Pattern

Finally they are getting along.  Hopefully they can move on and learn to live peacefully with each other.  with the baby coming they need to focus on creating a loving home and stop with the drama.  thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

Finally! Yes, but in order to move forward peacefully they've got to make a change and not just keep following the same routines.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: So Done

I swear the two of them are impossibly stubborn. Both need to be smacked.



Author's Response:

Agreed! lol

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2014 Title: From Surrogate to Housewife

I've been waiting for the sequel.  Can't wait

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The First Date

Great chapter.  I'm so happy you're writing this story.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Feb 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Back to Routine

It may be a filler in your opinion but I loved it.  They were a loving healthy family and getting along.  Thanks for the update 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you loved it! Finally some loving happy family time!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Mar 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Dining with the Devil

Ok Marcus you came you saw now get the hell out!  I like the new cover.  I almost missed it not seeing the crazy eyes michael...thank god.



Author's Response:

Right, the longer he lingers the bigger problems Michael and Nina will have. Thanks!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Marcus's Revenge

Marcus is a tool that needs to be taken care of.  



Author's Response:

He really is. Karma will come around.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Can't Let Go

Marcus is trouble.  I see big trouble ahead.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Apr 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Avoidance

I swear can these two get along for more than two days?  The bickersons.  She's a nag and he's a damn fool but I love them both...



Author's Response:

LOL! I love this couple too. Someone needs to nag Michael... he's doing too much right now.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Blowing out the Old Flame

Can we just have some smooth sailing for a little while.  Like more happy family time?  Please?



Author's Response:

Hopefully soon

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Impossible

when will they just find peace and get along?

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2015 Title: Chapter 45: The Prince has Arrived

Great job writing the birth.  I hate writing birth scenes.   Will they hold it together for very long this time?



Author's Response:

Birth scenese are tough. It's hard to make them different and unique from those already out there. We'll see how long they hold it together

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Oct 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Unsolved Problems

Damn Nina is one cold woman.  I'm beginning to dislike her more and more.  She cant seem to stay happy.  Mike's no angel but she's such a nag.  Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

She is being pretty cold, but she's bit her tongue alot with Michael. Now that the baby is out, she's letting all of her pent up resentment out too.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 49: A Love like This

"Michael pranced around in front of everyone with rainbows flowing out of his ass as if everything was perfectly okay"

 

that line was great.  I'm thrilled you're keeping this going.



Author's Response:

LOL thanks.