Penname: MJSmile [Contact] Real name: Kia
Member Since: Sep 12, 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Just a girl, living life the best she can. :)


Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
Real Name: Kia
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Summary: Past Featured Story
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It's been almost a year since Jessie and Michael's two-year relationship fell apart, and since she walked out of his life. Yet after Michael publicly releases new songs from his Invincible album, blatantly trashing her for thier break-up, she finds herself back at the one place she fled in tears, and back to the one man who broke her heart.

Michael still loves Jessie, wants her back, and will do anything in his power to bring her back home to Neverland. But will thier love be enough? To last through anything?

Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 143 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848855 Read Count: 395360
[Report This] Published: Aug 31, 2010 Updated: Oct 01, 2012
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Dec 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 79

Just imagine Michael sitting in the hotel and turning on the TV and seeing pictures of Daniel and Jess together! Or his people bringing the pictures to him, he's gonna be so P.O'd!

I think its nice of Daniel to try to right the wrongs he did to Jessie all those years ago, and neither one of them mean any harm but Michael hates Daniel and he's not going to see it that way.

All hell is about to break loose lol

Summary:

MJ is in an on/off relationship with Grace when a mysterious girl enters his life. He soon will have to make decisions...

 

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Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97308 Read Count: 48386
[Report This] Published: Oct 15, 2010 Updated: May 24, 2011
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Feb 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel like I'm the only one rooting for Grace and Michael, lol.

He and Val are getting closer though, so I wonder what will happen when Grace comes back around.

Summary:

What if Michael lived in Colonial America?

 

A slave to a family in Virginia, something happens, that no one ever thought was possible...

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Categories: Adult, Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8276 Read Count: 4622
[Report This] Published: Oct 16, 2010 Updated: Dec 31, 2010
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, this a really good story...sad but good please continue :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's kind of angsty, but the concept popped into my head, and I just had to use it. :) I'm glad you like it.

Summary:

In my opinion, there are far too many romance MJ fics...

So, for a change, here is an action thriller fic, with werewolves and vampires(no, not Twilight sparkly ones. Real ones)

This takes place during This Is It, and Michael gets kidnapped in the middle of the night, after rehearsals, and after one of his bodyguards mysteriously disappears.

I don't like to reveal too much... So read it to find out:)


Categories: Angst, Adventure, Horror, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Fantasy, Mystery
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5032 Read Count: 1321
[Report This] Published: Dec 06, 2010 Updated: Jan 03, 2011
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really good, and I agree with you on that one, most of the stories on here are romance fics and thats nice and all but sometimes you want something more...exciting lol.

I hope you update soon and poor Michael, he doesn't know how to deal with all of this, but then again who would.

Summary:

PrincexMJ

I don't know what to write to make you want to read this, so you'll just have to trust me:)


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5021 Read Count: 6211
[Report This] Published: Jan 01, 2011 Updated: Sep 24, 2011
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, I'm so happy that you updated this. So it seems that a hungover Prince admitted his feelings to a very confused MJ, huh?

I hope you keep updating and I can't wait to see whats coming next.

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Don't give up on this now... :)

Summary:

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For no mere woman can resist the beauty of the thriller...

Ola Ray once said that she fell in love with him during the making of "Thriller." That she wishes now that she had told him so. That their relationship was close and intimate, but never romantic.

This is my version of a what-if, if MAYBE things had gone a little differently. If she had the courage to tell him how she felt. 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Angst, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24087 Read Count: 10996
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: May 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time

This was wonderful, and the first fiction I've seen involving Ola and Michael. I like how you introduced us to them, and their conversation being one of depth, beyond the playfulness of their roles in Thriller, even though it's still there.

I'd love to see where this story is heading.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words! I had noticed that Ola Ray was never featured, at least on this site, as a possible love interest for Michael, and I thought: "Hey! She coulda been it!" In regards to thier conversation, I had a conversation with a friend about religion and what God may mean to people, and it inspired me to bring up this alternate idea of God in Ola's point of view. I couldn't do Michael because he was so devout to his religion, otherwise the disclaimer wouldn't be in the start of Thriller. :) Thanks for being my first reviewer!

Surrogate by KariLeon Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

They werent supposed to fall in love. No, she was supposed to be his surrogate. Thats the way it should have went. But it didnt.......


Categories: Romance, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 97769 Read Count: 22461
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2011 Updated: Aug 02, 2011
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a pretty nice story so far, and lol at Angela not wanting the fruit salad and eating gumbo instead. She's in for a long lecture if Michael finds out. :P

Summary:

We want to thank everybody so much for all the support and everything you guys do for us and this story. We’re so thankful and honored. Thank you all sooo much. All the readers and reviews, 1900+ OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH, WE LOVE YOU ALL!!!!!

A house full of 23 girls are trying to win over Michael. He must date and choose the right girl and test their so called ‘Love' for him. Taking the girls out one by one. Hopefully, he'll find the right girl for him to be with for the rest of his life.

Be ready for some Drama, Romance, Drama, Romance, and more Drama

Now tell me, Who has Love For Michael?!

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 160591 Read Count: 48425
[Report This] Published: Sep 30, 2011 Updated: May 04, 2013
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Don't Go

Aww this chapter was pretty sad, poor Michael and poor Logan. I guess I can respect her side of it and if she feels that she just can't take M being with the other girls it may be best if she goes. But I can see Michael's perspective too, this is a DATING show/contest thingie and Logan knew that when she came here.

But damn, It's just so depressing either way. As for Ciara, she's just having a fit and being jealous because she sees how much Michael cares for Logan in my book.

If they come back, it's the question of whether Michael will accept them back after the hurt.

Great update btw

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 73: A Man Has Needs

I could have sworn I read, like several chapters back that Logan was the first girl to "be" with Michael. I remember readng a chapter about that...but it was never brought up again so is it just me imagining things?

Ugh, somebody needs to get Mya's two faced self OUT of that house. Manipulative little witch that she is. :P



Author's Response:

I know exactly what you're talking about. It was a dream lol she was dreaming about having sex with Michael remember. It was all just a wet dream she said lol Mike and Logan never had sex yet and Mya is about to start more drama

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Jan 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 44: OMG

0____0 I'm scared.



Author's Response:

Lol, stay tuned. Thanks for reviewing <3 <3

Summary:

Join Michael and Valerie on their next journey through time after they got married. But be prepared... life isn't always kind.

This is the sequel to my stories "Sugar Daddy" and "Stronger". To get the full impact and connections of events please make sure to read them first. And please leave me your highly appreciated comments, reviews and thoughts.

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Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51692 Read Count: 4991
[Report This] Published: Dec 05, 2011 Updated: Apr 09, 2012
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Oh my gosh Michael...At least Grace was there for him and Paris too, and he realizes that he still wants to be alive. Hopefully he'll start to come back around.

Summary:

And that’s when it hit Katherine. “Joe! Joe, gee-whiz! It’s Michael! Michael is the missing piece of the boys’ group!” Joe wasn’t at all convinced. “Katherine, really. Don’t get the boy’s hopes all up in the sky when you know it won’t proceed to his expectations.”           “Joe, you really need to see your boy over there swing and belt out a tune or two. You’d certainly be surprised at how mesmerizing that boy is.”

                  That’s how the prologue of my life would be as a book in second person POV. Of course it would be an extremely long prologue, probably taking up a few pages. Anyway, hi. My name is Michael Jackson. Maybe you’ve never heard of me…but I don’t care. This is how my story really begins.

  1. Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Family
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4216 Read Count: 8094
[Report This] Published: Dec 18, 2011 Updated: Dec 20, 2011
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Family...Ch 1: The Beat[ings]

I have to tell you, I really enjoyed reading this first chapter here. Your writing style is really something unique and the narrator (Michaels) voice is very fresh and engaging. And it did make me giggle on those certain bits, I like this story very much and I'd love to see you continue it!

(But...You do know that Jackie is the oldest boy right? Or is that one of the things you altered for story purposes?)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I knew that I was gonna mess up the order of birth or whatever, but I tried to get as close as possible haha:) and thank you! I decided yesterday that I should start a new story, my other one was confusing. It's really nice to hear positive feedback:)

Toy Soldiers by Dr Jinx Rated: T Round robin starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Michael Jackson. King of Pop. Music Legend. Even with all his fame, he was visibly timid, and utterly and painfully lonely. No matter how bright his smile was, there was heartbreaking pain in his eyes.

The eyes that he hid behind dark glasses, not really allowing anyone to see. The eyes that held the dark secrets of his horrific past.

Against his will and all his moral standards, the NWOE forced, tortured, and trained him to be something he was not. To carry out and fight a cause he didnt believe in.

For centuries, a powerful and enormous demonic clique known as the NWOE (New World Order Elite) sought to rule the earth. However their plans have been thwarted from time to time by Light-bearing people who fought for the freedom of all from this evil oppression. People like Michael.

They tried to mold him. To break his spirit. To make him one of their own.

But his light continued to shine through all the pain and suffering they heaped on him.

 

Being almost entirely on his own, he will fight on no matter what. He's stubborn, but brave and noble. A true soldier. For humanity.

Going against such an unbelievably powerful evil institution isnt going to be easy. But he has his faith and his integrity to fight with.

Armed for an epic battle, this soldier fights on till the end...

A Toy Soldier.

 

 

Toy Soldier

* Dear Readers: Please understand that I will not be able to update this story as much as I would like to, due to my busy schedule, but I will update it as much as I can. :)

Peace.


Categories: Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, Romance, Horror, Suspense, Humor, Song Fics, Fantasy, Mystery
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17946 Read Count: 14307
[Report This] Published: Dec 22, 2011 Updated: Sep 07, 2012
Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Dec 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: August 29th, 1958

I've been waiting for something like this, and I've got to thank you for being the first one on this site to do it, I love it so far. ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Its the same reason why I wrote it in the first place. :)

Reviewer: MJSmile Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Creation of Fame

...Now Joseph knows he is not in any position to go messing around with those Shadow People. He should be focusing on what is and not what will be and how he's gonna handle everything that comes with it.

So this is where it all starts?

 

Appreciate the update, Dr. Jinx! :D Your descriptions of them are vague but compelling enough to keep the reader hooked. Thank you again for the update ^^



Author's Response:

Yup. This is where it all starts.

 

I appreciate the comments very much, MJSmile!  Thank You. I'll try and update as much as I can, but I can assure you it'll only get better. :)