Penname: brandyandMJ [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Mar 13, 2014
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Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Summary:

PART III

 

 

« Be brave when the journey is rough, it's not easy when you're in love. Don't be ashamed when the going gets tough, it's not easy. Don't give up. »

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Lovers Rock
Chapters: 87 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286385 Read Count: 35205
[Report This] Published: Sep 28, 2013 Updated: Mar 10, 2015
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

My heart hurts for Michael! I swear it doesn't matter how many times I hear about the 1993 accusations I always get the feels and feel terribly bad for what Michael had to endure. No one should've went through that. You captured every single emotion to have me thinking about this chapter for the next two weeks and feeling my heart drop to the pit of my stomach. Damn! 

I'm ready for the sequel of the story! I love Kay and Michael. One of my favorite couples on this site and thanks for the shout out. I'm going to be a more consistent reviewer now. Can't wait for War of the Hearts! 



Author's Response:

Hey Brandy. I wish I could erase the year 1993 too. But yeah, it's part of history and part of why Michael came up with the masterpiece that HIStory is.

Thank you for your sweet review and rate! The new story is online :D I've just updated a new chapter :D

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 14, 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Grammy night part. III

Lmfao! Boy these two are too much for me! But I love me some Kay and Michael. I can't wait for daddy Michael to reappear and his ass better stop taking those pills because we all know when Kay finds out its gon be ass kicking time and she gon make him pay ...... sexually that is lol. 



Author's Response:

Hey Brandy! I need to read your stories!! And I'm glad you're still reading this one :D And yes, Kalli will make him pay!

The new chapter is online ;)

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

EGGGGGYYYYYPPPTTTT is here! Aww those pictures are ADORABLE. I love it girl. This chapter was so funny. Kay and her screaming but at least Michael stuck around and stayed strong. I am very so proud. Lol at him fainting. I knew it was coming though. Gaaahhhhh, so cute! I love it girl. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. usually when you update I'm either at school, work, or somewhere where i'm in capable of leaving a review and i HATE leaving them on my phone but today you updated at the right time. Loving it girly! Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Hello Brandy :) Yes, Egypt is here! And he is so cute :) Thank you for the review and the rate girl :D

Summary:

The year is 1980 and the place University of California in Los Angeles (UCLA). A place ruled by fraternities and sororities. Two people who won't fit in. Two different stories. One possible outcome...

Michael                                                                                                      Lena

NOTE: At the beginning of this story Michael is not famous.


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74516 Read Count: 8987
[Report This] Published: Dec 20, 2013 Updated: May 25, 2018
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's backwards but hey Michael's shy so I take that lol. 

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Diana irks my soul already and she hasn't said one word in this story. 

Poor Michael. 

Lena is so carefree, I love it. 

 

Summary:

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"The day you came inside, I felt band new."
"So what am I to do now?"

We all know 1993 wasn't the best year for Michael, and the same could be said for Lena. When the love of her life, and father of her twins, walks out on her with no excues, she's left to pick up the pieces of her shattered world alone. That is, until she befriends Michael.

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Thank you guys for the 2000+ views & 50+ review I know it's not much but I do appreciate the love, even from you silent readers, thank you :)


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42408 Read Count: 7470
[Report This] Published: Dec 27, 2013 Updated: Jan 16, 2016
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed
Date: May 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Characters

This is truly the cutest story ever! I love Michael and Lena so much that i know as a couple they'd dominate the game. i give her props for raising two kids especially twins and Michael is so good with them. I read this story a little bit ago but i had forgotten the name and who it was by but luckily its here now! Keep up the good work. I love it!



Author's Response:

Well welcome back !!! I'm glad you think it's cute right now. Lena and Mke would be a force together, you know, if they could manage to get themselves together.



Author's Response:

Well welcome back !!! I'm glad you think it's cute right now. Lena and Mke would be a force together, you know, if they could manage to get themselves together.

Summary:

Cherell (Sher-el) is the secret wife of Michael Jackson. That is, until she and Michael decide to announce to the world their fourteen year hidden love affair via an exclusive interview hosted by Oprah Winfrey. During this interview, Cherell and Michael travel back in time, as early as the late seventies, and revisit the birth and growth of their love. However, as they recap on the magic that brought them together, they also ponder over the fame, insecurity, and jealousy that almost tore them apart forever.

A special thank you to all my kind readers for making my story one of the top ten most favorite stories on the site. This says a lot and I am truly honored by this. Please continue to enjoy and never feel shy to tell me what you think. You all are amazing!

I want to give a big thanks and a lot of love to Lorry for doing this amazing banner for my story! You rock!

Disclaimer: All unoriginal characters and settings belong strictly to their respective owner while all original characters are full property of the author. No money is being earned from work of fiction and no copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 303315 Read Count: 79343
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2014 Updated: Nov 01, 2017
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I am debating starting this story from the beginning. I know I was readying a while back but idk where I stopped. I just know if I start reading i won't be able to stop and before I know it it's going to be 7 in the morning and I have a class at 10! but i hope i will be able to read soon because i like your writing!   



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I enjoy reading your stories as well. You're pretty famous on this site lol. Please take your time and read whenever you can. No rush at all. Just thrilled to have you as a reader. Hope to get more feedback from you soon. God Bless!

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I've been following this story for a while and I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed. It seems every time I catch up, I end up falling right behind lol. Anyway, I really enjoy your story and I hope you continue it and update soon. I loved this last chapter! 



Author's Response:

Hey, no worries girl! Please take your time and enjoy it. I'm just thrilled to have you as a reader. I'm trying to update a little more regularly now. Expect another chapter in about a week or so. Thanks again for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

L I T T L E        W H I T E       L I E S

 

 

 

L O V E        I S        B L I N D,        T H E Y        S A Y

 


Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 279803 Read Count: 40131
[Report This] Published: Feb 18, 2014 Updated: May 06, 2021
Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed
Date: May 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awww Damn! *faceplam*



Author's Response:

Michael won't be able to take a nap loool

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I guess for Tegan sex is going to be an outlet for her to get away from Michael but it isn't going to work. It's like... it's like a cut. When you cut yourself, cleaning it up and wiping the blood may make it better but afterwards you're still going to feel some pain. This is how Tegan is acting to me. For right now she can clean up and wipe the blood (have sex with TJ) but after she wraps it with a band aid (finishes having sex) the pain of the cut will still be there (her thoughts of Michael will be there. I can tell that she loves Michael and its obvious he's trying his best to convince her for them to become one but Tegan is not having it. Which I can't blame her for. She needs breathing room. She needs to focus on TJ and not hurt TJ and i can't lie Michael is sort of getting on my nerves... he should just give her time. He doesn't know if the relationship with TJ will work out or not. If he wants her that bad then he needs to STOP telling her and START proving it. No one wants someone who is just sitting on their ass and talking words. People want actions. I know I would want some actions. Michael's feeling the wrath on being the outside looking in like Tegan did with Mya and him. Can't say he doesn't deserve it because he damn straight does. He needs to start working for Tegan.. W-O-R-K-I-N-G. Not talking.

Anywho.. awesome chapter as always and the people you pick for characters are always so gorgeous. Very gorgeous. Update soon Annie girl. 



Author's Response:

You are absolute right. This whole review was nothing but the truth! Let's hope Michael hears you!

Thank you lol! The new chapter is here!

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

May I add to my last review...

TEAR HER UP TJ! Dick her down until she's convulsing on the floor! Let her know who big daddy is! Okay Im not going to lie Michael does deserve this but 10 percent of me feels terrible! God that is such a shame... Hm... anyway.. DICK HER DOWN TJ in every damn place! Kitchen, floor, bathroom, couch!! PLAY ALL AROUND THE WORLD. Michael fucked Mya so Tegan needs a chance to fuck TJ and might I add he's doing a wonderful job. Okay Im done, lmao. 



Author's Response:

LOOOOOLLL! You know he will! He waited for so long it's going to be the longest bust ever lol

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH SHIT! OH SHIT! OH SHIT! Did I say oh shit? HOLY SHIT! 

TJ AND TEGAN ARE 'BOUTA STRAIGHT FUCK AND MICHAEL HEARD A GLIPSE OF IT. Laaawwwddd.. I can't say I'm though I just dislike the fact that TJ sort of pressured Tegan into it but if she's okay then Im okay. She's about to get DICKED DOWN... Lord have mercy I can't--- I can't deal Annie girl. When I clicked on this chapter i wasn't expecting tegan and tj to... yanno and i damn sure wasn't expecting Michael to hear. God, I feel bad for him.. I really really feel bad for him.. He wanted a chance but he lost it but then again it was his fault too. I'm not going to put it all on Mya because she was stupid because he was blind too. Tegan and TJ are adorable together but i can't deny that part of me wants Michael and Tegan Migan -my ship name- to have a chance.



Author's Response:

Yes you said it loool! They are to get their freak one and everybody will here, including Michael lol! Poor him! I'm here to write unexpected things lol! Michael will be ok lol! You know it won't stop him!

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm Team Michael. I can't help it. He deserves a chance even if he was blinded. TJ and Teagan are like a little high school crush phase. I don't feel any chemistry between Te and TJ like I feel with Michael and Te. Damn it I still don't know! Ugh. I don't want TJ to get hurt. Damn. Damn. Damn. ! Oh and btw i meant to let you know I did read the prequels of your series before reading part 3 and i love them. I'm hoping to get caught up with your other stories too. 



Author's Response:

LOOOOL! TJ is cute tho but I guess everybody wants Tegan with a real man like Michael ;) One of them will be hurt, let's hope not too much :(

THANK YOU! You're so nice! :))

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Damn. I'm torn. I don't know. 

Michael was wrong for being so blind.

Te was wrong for lying.

Michael should have a chance at true love.

Te shouldn't hurt TJ!

Damn, I don't know. Gosh, Annie.. Update soon please. 



Author's Response:

I knooow, it seems like they cannot all be happy. But maybe they can... You'll have to keep reading to know :)

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is seriously angering me but i love it! 

Mya..no words.

Michael... He can tell when a guy is hitting on Te but yet he can't see that she likes him? I mean come on now *insert correct emoji here*

I love Te and I'm glad she's moving out. Although i hate that she isn't being honest. She should grow some grown lady balls and honestly get mya so they BOTH can tell the truth. 

Anyhoo... LOVE IT.



Author's Response:

HAHA! Sorry x) but you'll love it more, I promise :D

IKR! Michael is oblivious to the fact that Tegan has a crush on him but when a guy does it, it's clear LOL! I think he doesn't want to see it, simple as that.

I'm glad Tegan left too! Now she needs to read Mya with the truth! Thank you for the review :))