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Summary:

Aliyah and Michael have a troubled relationship. They both grew up in a little town by the name of Gary , Indiana. Michael promised Aliyah that they would get married after college. But Michael becomes this big time Hip-Hop artist and changed for the worst. Will Michael be able to uphold his promise? Who will Stay

Chapter 13 is posted , Im sorry to any new readers this accidently got deleted so bare with me. Much love


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51175 Read Count: 7360
[Report This] Published: Jun 15, 2014 Updated: Jun 09, 2015
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Date: Feb 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 38

Fight Michael!!! Fight for your bb girl!! If she is his. I wonder if Kamille legit doesn't know Kendrick is a monster and is just using him to make Liyah jealous like 'look I got both your men type shit' or she know which is very callous especially the fact that Kendrick wants to hurt Michael. He could just hurt the baby and that would be enough for Michael to fall apart!! 

Im glad Liyah had Mrs Kat to fall on. If she's right about Kamille then Fit is hitting the Shan sooner than later. That baby is about to be born. 

More soon!! <333

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Date: Jan 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 37

So Kendrick is a lunatic... Yeah...

Liya is giving him no chances at all Huh but I can almost guarantee her 'safe place' is in Michael's arms. This is his last chance to prove himself. And I know Trey is tiptoeing in his Jordan's. Why he ain't called or nothin? Smh. 

More soon. <333

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Date: Jun 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 39

Hey you're back!! I missed this story. I love how Michael is being so sincere. They're little moment was cute. 

Where the hell is Trey?

Michael needs to get that baby tested for DNA too damn it. 

More soon! <333

Summary:

Boy Meets Girl.  Man meets Girl.  What happens when battle lines are drawn in the quest for the affections of a mysterious woman from New Orleans?

 

*I suck at summaries. Dah well.


Categories: Angst, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 149061 Read Count: 12854
[Report This] Published: Jul 04, 2014 Updated: Feb 04, 2022
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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Lmaoo. Ok I stopped when I realized it is TAJ!!! Michael's nephew. I laughed hysterically for a minute....O.O!!!!

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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Awkward

OMG my emotions where all up in my throat. When I read a story that pulls me in like this I tend to romanticize so I will be a gushy reviewer. Lmao.

Lawd they're teetering on dangerous ground. I'm glad she didn't drink the wine when offered, it makes you stay grounded in the fact that she is only 18. 

Keisha is an incredible person and she resonates with be because I'm also an artist, painting drawing etc and portraits are my speciality too. She's a smart girl one after my own heart!

Oh oh here comes the completion!! ( * whispers softly*At first I thought it was going to be Michael's nephew Taj lmao)

On we go!!!

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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Since Feeling is First

The scents in this story are so deliciously culinary!! Lmao!

Wow the talk about her eyes was the very same as with Michael. I'm glad she drew the parralells. However discreet. 

Taj is sweet and her age and God help for saying this but I don't think in the long run he could handle Keisha's intensity. Like you said he's a slow simmer. 

I do see her getting devoured by Michael's hot fast burning flames easier than the simmer. The simmer while warm and cuddly could become stale and monotonous for Keisha's sensibilities. She an old soul. I may be wrong in my analogies but it's how I feel in my gut for this. It's consuming.(Michael's feelings and expressions there of I mean)

We'll see tho...Triangles are my favorite shape after all. 

I'm vegan I LOVE Nasty Gal for shopping!! Girl I'm you biggest fan. Im here to creep you out with my adulation. Lmaoooo.  Im kidding in the biggest way but seriously can't wait for more!!

<333

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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Poor Zaf. Michael using his prowess to topple his guard was funny. I like that Zaf took care to think of his girl tho. He's a true friend. I could imagine someone else taking advantage of that situation with ease. 

Taj listen to your brother and head your mothers words because they're facts. Start with a lie end with a terrible lie and resentment. I understand why he did lie and here in enters the intrigue but it might be disastrous if he doesn't fess up soon knowing Keisha it will be a bridge burning offense. 

Lets see! <333

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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

You see Gemini's are awesome. I'm convinced we are of the same mind after reading this!!! My Gawd. Lmaoooo. I swear for life this is the first time I've laid eyes on this story and it's like you're in my head!!! You would have to read one of my stories to get what I mean. (You don't have to btw.) I'm just enamored at how alike in our writing we are. 

Anywho. This chapter I was clutching my pearls the whole time!!! I can't believe Michael gave her his Warhol. It's an amazing painting and he just...gave it away. Like he is really into her. It shows from how panic striken he was with her announcing she had a date. He's almost to the point of obsession. 

I mean he offered himself up to her after all. On a gold platter. A gold Andy Warhal painted platter. Literally!!!

"I'm yours" I mean heart rending!!

next chapter...

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Date: Oct 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6--Remember The Time

Wow I had to stop reading to comment. This story is spectacular. I'm not surprised tho. I read your story Rocked Worlds on another site eons ago. Back in late 2010 early 2011. I think. I remember talking to you a bit because I mentioned that I too was a Gemini and I loved your writing. I had two stories I was writing then. You were an inspiration. I can't remember the name of the site but yeah. I thank you for the intro in to this intriguing story. I'm in love with this Michael Character.  He's very much like the ones I write because I love a dark brooding cocky Michael. Lol. 

Back to reading. <333

Summary:

Min Ae Yeong has graduated college only to find out that her big girl office job turn out to be a lot like high school. After getting promoted to a new department, she meets a strange man named Michael Jackson who seems to have quite the list of unflattering rumors following him around and is tormented on a daily basis by their immature coworkers. 

 

When he gets accused of the unthinkable not only do their coworkers turn viciously against him, the entire city seems to have it out for him. Will Min Ae stand by him and help to prove his innocence or will she turn her back on him like the rest of the world has seemed to?

 

WARNINGS: Violence 

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Categories: Romance, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Angst, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108148 Read Count: 15028
[Report This] Published: Jul 23, 2014 Updated: Jan 31, 2015
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Date: Sep 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Date Night Desires

OMG they finally hit the sheets...RAW LOL I hope that is his lawyer he's talking too.  Friends house my ass.



Author's Response:

RAW lmao

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Date: Oct 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 29: All Used Up

Nooooooooooooooooo Michael!!! No just no!! I can't believe the indifferent dick he's being.  I know he loves Nae but still dude that was foul!!! as for Lauren she switched teams real quick what's up with that.  She was always cheering Michael on when it came to him and Nae.  She encouraged her a lot in getting with him now all of a sudden she thinks he's shady?  Hmmmmm weird.  It doesn't even matter what Michael did to Lisa nothing would warrent the foul business she had him accused of.  As revenge? no matter how neuclar her bomb is what she did was beyond abhorrent.  Gawwwwdddd girl the suspense tho Michael please don't let me down :(((((...I cry.

Great chapter hun!!



Author's Response:

It's been a long time and he still hasn't come out with his past with Lisa? That's where Lauren's sudden feelings of shade have come from. And yea, Michael's got a terrible defense mechanism when it comes to dealing with emotional distress...

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Date: Sep 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Staying Strong

I hope to god that he clears things up.  I really don't want him to settle either. :(( Poor sweetheart.  I admire Nae's strenght so much even if she goes back and forth in her mind to stick around I know her action speak louder becasue she's always there.  She's his "Woman"  So cute!!

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Date: Oct 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Parental Control

Oh my gawd the look on her parents face.  I'm dying!!!! LMAO  They are going to blowuptuate on Nae's poor little ass.  Either that or their going to turn their backs without a word.  I hope i'ts the first one and they get over it.  I can't even imagine when they find out who planted the seed. *bites nails!!

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Date: Nov 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Good Impressions

LOLLLLL I'm so glad that her friends ended up liking him.  I think his little herbal aid helped with that.  I was dying at all his reactions to everything going on around him while he had his buzz.  An you're so right.  RX anxiety meds are absoloutly no good.  Herb is way better. I love how they kept mentioning how good he smelled.  Michael loved him some "smells" LMAO 

Oh gawd Lisa what has your crazy ass been up to now?!?!?!?!

Please give these two a happy ending.  Out of all the couples these two deserve it. The amount of trama and sensitive issues they had to deal with?  Man there happiness should be written in the cards.  I'm on bended knee here.

<333



Author's Response:

Awww... well my lips are sealed on the ending! But I'll take that into consideration lol

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Date: Jan 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 39: A White Christmas Eve

Phew!!! *wipes brow Lmfao.  It would have been aweful if he had just left.

I'm glad he's taking the step to making them a family and Nae isn't second guessing the whole thing.

The two families at dinner?!?!?!  It will be a messsssssssss. Joe and Nae's Dad in one room?

Michael and Nae's dad in one room is going to be explosive enough.  I hope new Michael mans up and asserts his innosence with her parents.

The next chapter will be very interesting indeed.  Bring it on!

More soon <333



Author's Response:

Yeah! That would be pretty intense and explosive. Hint about Joseph, he may have been hard on his kids growing up, but he backs Michael's innocence 100%.