Penname: jazii [Contact] Real name: Jazelle
Member Since: Dec 21, 2010
Membership status: Member
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Age: 21+
Gender: Undisclosed
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Fever by pixiedust Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 413]
Summary:





Tatiana/MJ: "I feel your fever from miles around."


He grins, that glint in his eyes teasing, leans in and kisses her like that, in his bed, with her wearing nothing but his bedsheets, her hair like a tornado around her, "You’re what keeps me bad," he whispers.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83383 Read Count: 67414
[Report This] Published: Feb 04, 2010 Updated: Oct 20, 2013
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Nov 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've never really had a chance to comment even though I;ve been reading this story since Ch.4. Your writing is exquisite. Brief but poigant, wistful, and passionate. You pack every chapter with so much emotion in just a few words and I feel taken away with your metaphorical descriptions. I have my thoughts about the real Tatiana and in this story you make it work, almost like you went back in time to those moments and altered their universe, but then you altered everything. I can't say how much I love this story of yours and I can tell that you've been putting a lot into it.

Truly one of the best stories I've ever read on MJFiction, and one of the best MJFFs I've ever read.

Thank you so much for sharing!

Jazz

Author's Response: Thank you! :) xxx

Summary:

Rocked Worlds from another perspective.  Michael and Keisha have a history....a very long and extensive history...but will the past affect the present, and more importantly, the future?


Categories: Romance, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119136 Read Count: 20585
[Report This] Published: Aug 24, 2010 Updated: Nov 09, 2011
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Girl, I know I've got nerve having never really commented, but I've finally decided to come out of my whole. I can't say how much I love this story and all of the passion you put into it. It's like the flow of an ocean with how you'll tense up their relationship and then let it go or how you'll have them submerged in the water when they're together while the madness that is their lives surges above.

The characters you write are real and tangible, like you could write a whole other with just them and no MJ (but you could never get rid of our Mikey, now could ya! ;]). Roxy, Aubrey, Kenny, and Zafir. I have to say Z and Roxy are my favorite and could have me giggling on my computer day and night. Rocked Worlds is my favorite story on here and without a doubt the Best story on this website and I love how you've chosen to explore the possibilities of the characters with an AU. With this being MJFiction it's like an AU in an AU, because I feel the MJ fictions that really capture Michael's life and his essence are almost like AUs of his own real life.

What I love more than anything else about this story is your writing and how rich it is. It's wistful in someplace but heavy in others, all the while with that same undercurrent of wistful, heady passion running through it. I love the culture of the Creole people you've chosen to add as well. I'm not some who's in love with modern America and the way life is today and it's always refreshing to come into contact with people who are different - old souls you could say - even if it's just in story format.

Ahh!! Your writing always has me eager for more, not just of this story but whatever you're willing to share with us on here. I remember this story was dwindling on chapter 4 for months and you've just recently started updating regularly again. My guess is that you spent that time writing out most of the story?

Whatever it is you're doing please don't stop - It's breathtaking. amazing. Phenomenal. Passionate. Real. Life. Breathtaking.

Thank you.

Jazz

L.O.V.E.



Author's Response:

your post made me cry!!!  Thank you, Thank you so much!

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You deserve it

 

 

Of course

 

 

<3333

Summary:

Olivia Sultan started out as a small time girl desperately trying to make it. She got into the papparazzi business when her bills were rinning high and her pockets were running low. Once she's desperate enough she finds herself in the business full time. But what happenes when her next assignment is Michael Jackson? 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30959 Read Count: 8869
[Report This] Published: Feb 22, 2012 Updated: Dec 18, 2014
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, you started this one again!! I was really looking forward to this story and what was going to happen :)

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134095
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This Michael is so scary, I just don't know what to feel anymore than Skyler. And this drug of his... I'm starting to wonder if it's not as powerful as it appears. I think Sky really does want him, I mean there is a strange draw to him. He's sick and twisted but fascinating and a genius. He has a sweet side hidden deep down that she must know is there.

 

Excellent story, J, and thanks so much for the love for S&&S!



Author's Response: No problem! Thats story is one of my absolute favs and i just want people to recognize for what it is. A classic on this site. I really strive to create stories like the ones that used to be on the site. Yours is definitely one of them.

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Looovin' It!!!



Author's Response:

Lovin' the fact that you're lovin' it lol. thanks for the review hun.

Summary:

I decided to come out of retirement for a little while, and write a sequel to the previous Mike/Keisha story Rocked Worlds.

Michael Jackson and Keisha Devin-Jackson have everything they've always wanted, but what does change mean for a couple who thrives on consistency?  What happens after marriage and kids?


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131032 Read Count: 44017
[Report This] Published: Nov 04, 2012 Updated: Jul 04, 2014
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND

So, you've done an amazzzing job with the three stories of yours that I've already read. I think that your characters and your work are beautiful, among the best I've seen of any mj fanfictions.

Obviously, I'm in love with your characters. But I would like to see you expand by writing different characters than these. They're special and I believe that they have their place. What was it that Michael always said? As an artist he lived to become more and to create new things, be innovative. Michael and Keisha will always be, but maybe Keisha isn't the only woman that was perfect for him.

To wrap this up, I vote new story with new characters [However, I would love to see you finish I Was Made to Love Her, too!!!!]

Wow, it always seems funny to me that mjfanfiction has been around for as long as it has. My impression of it has always been post June '09. But I see now that some of you more experienced fans were already well-delved into Mike's fictional world :)

Thank you for these stories, girl. I wish I had a name to respond to other than Geminis_Gift. I feel at this point like we could be close friends, I've followed your stories for so long. :)

Love to see what you throw us next!

Jazz



Author's Response:

Hey Jazz!

Thank you so much for your words! I was toying with the idea of another female heroine, but people seem to love Ki so much, and I have so much fun writing for her that I don't know if another character would be quite as great (lol).

But you're absolutely right, and you've made my decision harder! LOL.

Yes, fan fiction has been around for a LONG LONG time. There are some REALLY old and FABULOUS stories floating around on the net from the old KOP board and there might still be a ton up on MJEOL if that still exists. I used to post fan fiction on those boards and have been posting since 1998 with long breaks here or there. Post June '09 was when a resurgence of sorts happened.  But the older fans have always been around, and their stories should still be around on Google.

Btw, you can call me Des!

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jul 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER!!!!

Des, I can't believe this. My poor Keisha and Mike!!

Love, the ending was beautiful. Though, a part of me may wonder about the in between years, you do an amazing job of quieting it and letting them rest peacefully. I've told you time and again that your writing is so passionate; it has a way of making the characters and each moment they endure timeless. That is how I know this story and its characters will always live on. Beautifull

 

I noticed that you published a new story. I happened to take your advice and found SD. Judging from the summary, I'm really hoping that this will be a continuation of Michael and Ebony. What I've already read of that story is breathtaking and I can't wait to see what you do with it. But lol if it's not, I know that I will love whatever you write just as much.

 

I am so excited for what's to come from you in future. Please do keep writing! We need writers like you in the mjfanfiction community. In my opinion, you're the ones who truly keep Michael's image and legacy alive for the following generations.

 

Again - Beautiful.

 

Jazz <3

Burn by PeaceShanice Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

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This passion burns inside of me.

Burn is loosely based on the songs ‘In the Closet’ and ‘She Drives Me Wild’, true stories and my very active imagination.
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A love story that takes place after a few months after the Bad Tour has ended. 

On her way home from a boring day at work Kayden runs into Dorien, a criminal from her past. John, an old acquaintance, comes to her rescue and is forced to remove his disguise revealing himself as Michael Jackson. Michael has an obvious attraction to Kayden and can barely control himself around her. At first all she wants is friendship, but when a friendly trip to Las Vegas turns sinful, she finds herself in a steamy secret relationship filled with adventures in love and lust.

But like any other couple, they hit a rough patch and just as things are starting to look up, secrets from Kayden’s past threaten to ruin her life and sanity.

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I hope you guys like the new banner !! I finally figured out who I originally used to represent Kayden, so I hope you like it. And thank you guys for the support and positive responses to this fic, I really appreciate it.


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70970 Read Count: 14169
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2013 Updated: Feb 22, 2016
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: May 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 | Uh Uhn Rudeness

Finally!!! Give us more soon girl!

Reviewer: jazii Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 | Guess who??

Update soon girl please, i miss this story and i wasn't to see it to the end! I know you got something for us... :)

Summary:

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Diana is your everyday woman. Except for one MINOR problem. She is as beautiful as a rose in the spring time. But her soul can be as dirty as the bottom of farmer's shoe. She can be so malicious that she makes the Devil appear like Mary Poppins. When she demands her way, she will get it,no matter who or what she harms. From the very first time she meets Michael,she knows she wants him, for Diana will not rest till her wish is fulfilled.

Michael has the world in the palm of his hands right now. His Thriller album is at an all-time high, he has just won 8 grammys, knocked down so many records, its criminal, and he is on his way to recording another best-selling album. But most importantly,he has somebody special to share this glorious time of his life with. Annie. She has been his rock for the past 5 years. Their relationship is a match made in heaven. But all that may come crashing down the moment Diana slithers into the perfect picture.

 

*I know many stories hae been made with "Dirty Diana" because of the compelling song, however, each unique and creative in their own special way, mine is no different. This a twisted, dark, complex story about Diana and if she actually came to life. Fair warning. Please understand that this story is strictly inspired by Dirty Diana, which some real events; I just manifested it into a story. Reader's discretion is strongly advised. On a brighter note, Please ENJOY!!!!!!!

(Graphic video made by an awesome designer)

This story takes place over a period of years. We shall begin in late 1985. Post-Thriller Era;Pre-Bad Era


UPDATE: The ORIGINAL PROLOGUE is now been posted as of 10/07/2013!! This will help to understand the story better!

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146911 Read Count: 34461
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2013 Updated: Aug 21, 2014
Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45- Anni(e)hilation

Lovelyyy, as always. I remember when this was on mjjboard and crazyovermj :) So glad u brought it back!



Author's Response:

Thank you girl! Always nice to remember a mjjboard fan. *Ahhh, memories*. Those were the days. I need to finsh posting on crazyovermj but I just get busy and only post on this website smh. Need to fix that lol. Thanks for reading though!

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58- Update for Diana

I wonder if, at the very end of this, Michael will have imagined it all. We'll return to their Studio 54 night on the balcony and in her eyes he'll have foreseen it all. ;)

Update soon, please, Love. Its been a long time coming to get to the end of this story. I've been a passionate fan since MJJB and COMJ

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Toxic Passion

Ahhh!!!!!!!! Threatened! It's been a minute since I've heard this song, but I recognized it from the first lyrics. I love how you tie in all the fatasy with the reality, it takes the story to a whole other level that few other fanfics have achieved.

Beautiful, beautiful, beatiful!



Author's Response:

Thank you luv!!!!! Trying to just make it a little different from the norm. I am glad you like the chapter. Man, that song is my jam! But of course, I love Thriller also lol. Thanks for the feedback and thanks for reading:)

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46- Hidden Truth (Bonus Chapter)

Wow, Michael really let out some heavy stuff there. Dr. Donahue was at a total loss for a moment, like ..."wtf?!?!"

 

Awesome Bonus, girl.

 

Update soon!



Author's Response:

Michael was tripping wasn't he? lol. Dr. Donahue was, well, speechless lol. Thanks for reading girl!!!!!!

Reviewer: jazii Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58- Update for Diana

I wonder if, at the very end of this, Michael will have imagined it all. We'll return to their Studio 54 night on the balcony and in her eyes he'll have foreseen it all. ;)

Update soon, please, Love. Its been a long time coming to get to the end of this story. I've been a passionate fan since MJJB and COMJ