Penname: tnoelle [Contact] Real name:
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Summary:

Set in the era of Thriller / Bad Era, Michael has just moved out of Hayvenhurst and meets an unlikely friend in Jade Riley, an employee at the Beverly Hills Hilton. Even though, they get off to a rocky start, Michael starts to learn about friendship, love, and committment with some major hiccups along the way. 


Categories: Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196922 Read Count: 369306
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2013 Updated: Aug 23, 2015
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is my first time reading a fanfiction that legitematley made me tear up and got me all in my feelings. I just wanted to tell you that I love the way you portrayed michael and joseph's relationship towards the later chapters just because he's painted to seem like such a heartless man but at the end of the day that's still the jackson's father and original manager and it's nice to read a story with a refreshing take on their relationship-- even if it wasn't 100 percent true in real life. I'd like to think that they still had love between them and you just magnified that. Great story, can't wait for an update! xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks tnoelle :) you are a sweet heart. I appreciate the time you've spent replying and reading. 

I'll post another update really soon x

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

award winner   award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 18, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make

This is my first time reading this story, and I have to tell you, it's got me all kinds of messed up in my feelings. Best one I've read in a long time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I appreciate your words!!! Welcome to the story. There is so much more in store. I hope you stick around to watch it all unfold. <333

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Secrets So Untold...

YOU'RE KLLIN' ME (sorry bad pun for this story) BUT GEEZ. You really got me messed up, like for real. I thought there was another chapter after this but then I kept looking for the next button on the bottom of the page and just UGH. I think it was a good idea for them to leave town just for their mental sanity, but the way Kenny digs up information on these two he'll probably figure out their whereabouts sooner or later. At the same time it's good they didn't tell the police because of this new stalker steven dude he would've gotten wind of their whereabouts and that could've been bad too. INDOENDIOEJ can't wait for an update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I just updated actually.  Hope you see it lol. So much more is coming up you will see where Steven is actually Kenny.  All will be revealed how that comes about in the next chapter after this one.  I'm so glad youre enjoying it!! <333

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Bye Bye Love Hello

You know I really wished this was one of those stories that would lighten everything back up and would just be like SIKE Ria is alive; just in hiding! But that's not what life is, and you made this so realistic. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I wanted it to be as real as possible but don't give up hope on love just yet.  Michael and Marley have a ways to go.  I don't want to give too much away but stick with me it will lighten up soon. <333

The Accused by SkyWriter Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary:

 

award winner

The centre of Michael's world crumples when Diane Hargrove discovers that her four year old child has been molested. Exhausted from the Bad Tour and the emotional highs and lows of dealing with his favourite little girl's complicated medical history, Michael finds everyone pointing the finger at him; accusing him of the unthinkable. With the weight of the world upon his shoulders, he struggles through grief and depression and the stress of being the someone that the world perceives him to be.

Scared of being alone, Michael enlists the company of number one fan, Malania Nakamura, who he feels like could just be the only other person on earth who understands his wounded heart. 

What will the future hold for Michael's freedom and for Malania's own troubled state of mind?


Categories: Award Winning, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Attempted Suicide, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 336374 Read Count: 167531
[Report This] Published: Jan 31, 2015 Updated: May 12, 2020
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 08, 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66

Why your end chapter notes gotta play with me like that? Lawd have mercy.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha, well... what do you think?

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

I am! Lol love your story keep up the great work:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks :) 

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 01, 2016 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 65

FINALLY! This was just great, like really, so great. I love the way you depicted this scene it's not like they're two pornstars that do this for a living, you didn't even specify if she came and it's just so-- normal. Ugh loved it.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha. I hate unrealistic sex in not only fan fic but also any fiction. Once I read a book that referred to someone's penis as a train going thru a tunnel. WHAT THE HELL?!?! lol. And no, my characters are always human.  THanks :) Hope you'll be ready for part 2. :)

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

Geez, this story is phenomenal. 



Author's Response:

Thanks :) <3 

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53

Ugh, you wrote your ass off in this chapter. Bravo.

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2015 Title: The Accused

Do what you gotta do girl, life is hard and demanding as hell sometimes when you're on the work grind. Hope to hear from the story soon, but take your time! :)

Summary:

“You didn’t have to get me anything, Michael. This must have cost a fortune,” I smiled as I brought my hand up to the diamond choker around my neck, my fingertips brushing against the precious stones.

He grinned and leaned back against the headboard, aimlessly brushing my tresses off my shoulders, “I just wanted to get you something special.” His hand trailed down from my shoulder to my arm and then to my hand resting on the satin sheets. His skin was warm, but I instantly stiffened as the metal ghosted over my skin.

I ignored it and looked up at him through my eyelashes, my cheeks rosy, “You make me feel special just by the way you look at me.”  It was true, more than he’d ever know. With him, I felt like I mattered. That I wasn’t a complete failure.

 

I also could pretend that he wasn’t married.

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Attempted Suicide, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77909 Read Count: 23858
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2015 Updated: Feb 02, 2017
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Great chapter as always...LOVE the new banner by the way!



Author's Response:

thank you so much <3 

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Remember the Time

You did a really nice job with this chapter I love the flashbacks that you did it was a different look very refreshing especially because as the readers we don't know what happened in the past so it adds a lot of substance. As far as the connection she seemed a lot more into it than he did. 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it! I think the flashbacks are refreshing. plus there's more michael :D

And hmmm, interesting point, if you see this, wondering which parts it seemed that she was more into than him?

Thanks for reviewing !

As I Am by Voice Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Graphic made by me :)

Would you allow a forbidden love to blossom in the wake of one of the most life career changing moves of your life?  A move World renown award winning journalist Jenna Hall questioned as she took on the interview/documentary of a lifetime.  Choosing to revamp/reconstruct the public persona of a man going through one of the most difficult time of his life for the second time.  Fearing the worse, Jenna takes on the interview as their connection takes a turn never expected.  Only one thing stands in the way, Media presence and the risk to entirely bankrupt their careers.   The First Book in a story of lust, power, betrayal and forbidden boundaries.

“Take me as I am….” Tears as of bright crystals slipped from along his eyes racing down his cheekbones leaving a trail of pain behind as I could visibly see the trembling of his flesh.  “I’m human Jenna… I can’t change the cards life dealt…”

 Life's cruel way of pawning two people in nearly impossible circumstances.

“I… I don’t know… Michael.. I don’t know…” Tears raced along my jaw, dropping along my clothing as I too trembled.  The entirety of my entire life…everything, hung in the balance.  The scale of Love, loss, security, utter chaos was entangled within every option imaginable.  Walking away however, logically confined me.  I cannot choose… I simply cannot.

 

UPDATE: JULY 10TH 2018 :)


Categories: 2003-2005, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Attempted Suicide, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41497 Read Count: 3957
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2015 Updated: Jul 10, 2018
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Day 1

SUCH a great story!! Ugh, I honestly can't get enough. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so muh! I'm flattered!! I am glad to see a new face to this art piece! I hope you continue with us!! :) :)!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hello to all the MJFiction Authors, Readers, and Reviewers!

yay!

 

Winners announced September 5th!


Categories: Award Winning
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1186 Read Count: 24534
[Report This] Published: Aug 03, 2015 Updated: Sep 05, 2015
Reviewer: tnoelle Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: The Nominees Are

Best author: femalien

Best new writer: TutThreeSevens

Best banner artists: m0ni_89

Best completed story: Inked- TutThreeSevens

Story you most want to see finished: Fever-pixiedust

Favourite original character: Malania- The Accused

Favorite Michael: Cradle to the Grave

Favorite Couple: Malania/Michael in The Accused

Best Series: Lover's rock-Annie

Best One Shot: When, When, When -Rhythm Child

Best Long Fanfic: Teacher's Pet- MychaelaJaleesa

Favourite Reviewer: mjjlover1120

Most Creative Author: femalien

Most Improved Author: Brandyandmj



Author's Response:

Thanks!