Penname: MichaelJacksonLoverForever [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Jan 16, 2011
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Hi!! I'm Sam! :D I'm 21 and I've loved Michael Jackson for as long as I can remember. I started liking him when I was about 7 and my parents bought me the Thriller album! :D He was a wonderful human being and if you love him then I already love you!! :D MJ fans are one big happy family!!!  That is how I've always looked at it and I think Michael would definitely want it to be that way. :) He helped me become the person I am today in so many ways. He's opened my eyes to gifts I didn't know I had. :D I always try and follow in Michael's ways. I feel like a better person when I do that. ^_^


I can't even begin to describe how I felt the day Michael left. It tore me apart, he took half my heart with him and everyday, there's this void in it's place. It feels weird not having him here, I often think of him as if he never left.



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Summary: Past Featured Story

Arianna and Michael meet and right away they have a spark but what Arianna doesn't know is that Michael has been watching her for a long time and in a way waiting for her. Were they meant to be just friends or something more? Join me in a journey to find out.... 

I LOVE TO READ YOUR COMMENTS AND REVIEWS ON EACH CHAPTER OF MY STORY. IT MOTIVATES ME TO WRITE THE FOLLOWING CHAPTERS SO PLEASE FEEL FREE TO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. THANK YOU FOR READING! 

WOW!!! over 1500 Reviews! I never thought I would see that day!. Thank you so much. I am humbled and honored by your love. Thank you for making this story so popular in this website. 

** "WAITING FOR YOU" IS ONLY BEING POSTED BY ME ON MJFICTION IF YOU SEE THIS STORY ANYWHERE ELSE, IS NOT ME THEN IT HAS BEEN STOLEN. THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT!! 

 

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Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 178 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 850299 Read Count: 266429
[Report This] Published: Mar 10, 2011 Updated: Feb 09, 2017
Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Xscape....

NO! NO! NO! NO! First of all....FUCK YOU LISA-MARIE! I HATE YOUR GUTS, YOU LYING, MANIPULATIVE, DISGUSTING ****!!! (We're sorry, this word has been censored out. Me: *Glares at the censor*)

I can't stand Lisa, I knew the second she walked in she was gonna cause problems for Michael and Arianna. It wasn't intentional....SURE IT WASN'T!!!!!! You evil devil who never deserved Michael EVER! Man she pisses me off!! And Arianna!!!!!! Don't even get me STARTED with Arianna! -_- I CAN'T BELIEVE she'd assume Michael did anything with her. Let alone will still be pissed at him for having her in the house. My god...he did NOTHING. He may have hidden that whole prescription drug shit but he WOULD NEVER cheat on his wife, ever! Arianna needs to give him more credit then that. They seriously need to talk. I mean, really, really, talk. NOT BREAK UP! I wish Arianna would stop trying to quit on Michael, it's seriously breaking my heart and in more way then one...pissing me off (Which makes the story INCREDIBLY interesting. :D). AND MICHAEL!!!!!! He had better put his FOOT DOWN against these employees and confront them about WHY they didn't let him know about his phone calls. Renee just stated that Arianna had called. Therefore something funny is going on. They need to heal, so badly I want them to go with what Ari just stated. But she REALLY needs to listen to him and he REALLY needs to listen to her. No hang ups, no interruptions, none of that. Talk, heal, and reconnect then move forward in their marriage. If they break up, I will seriously cry and I mean CRY A LOT. Please don't do that...wonderful chapter as always. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward to your next update!! :D

Message reply to your review reply: Thanks, I'm glad you love my reviews. I try and give writers an overall thought because I feel that's what a review really SHOULD be, you know? I know it's highly helpful for writers, I've had reviews like that myself and loved them. Love you too, girl! xoxo I want to find more ways to chat with you. :)



Author's Response:

LOL at the first two lines. You are very angry haha I love it but at the same time I didn't mean to cause you so much anger...sorry *blushes* There is more to come.

P.S. I know what you mean. Your reviews are very helpful so thank you. aww, I would love to chat with you. I have twitter, facebook, bbm, haha just let me know...love ya more xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Happy Birthday, Michael...

OMG!! Wonderful chapters!! I loved them!! I'm glad Michael and Arianna are married now, I thought how he surprised her was SO cute!! Michael is such a romantic, wow! :) I am still concerned about Michael's continuous lies about the pills though, he's only human and he makes mistakes, I just hope they can make it through if and when she finds out. I'm glad I make you smile, I love making people happy! It makes me happy! And Michael made me laugh yet again!! That part where he tickled Arianna 'till she called him the sexiest man in the world was great! I love these two together!! Very nice work, I can't wait to read more!! :D



Author's Response:

Michael loves to make people laugh. I'm glad one of them is you.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Anytime, Anyplace...

WOW! Those two are so BAD! They're really, really BAD! ;) Lol! That was a good mix! On the plane! Damn! Must've been quite a thrill for them! They both seemed to enjoy it! Lol! But on the other hand, I noticed how Michael looked down, something tells me he's starting to feel guilty about lying even though he has for awhile but it was intensified there by what Arianna said. I hope they can make it through that as well. It's not minor but I still pray they make it through. Keep up the great work, girl! I loved this and I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

O_o How weird is that! I read your first line and I'm listening to BAD. LOL. That's funny. Yeah, these two are crazy in love. Thanks hun.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Never can say goodbye...

Holy crap I fell really behind!!! See, school gave me this annoying project which had me pretty busy, amongst other school related things, so I hadn't had time to really read your updates. Man did I come back to some pretty heavy stuff! The accident, the miscarriage, they both had me in tears. The eerie distance, the doubt, wondering if they should stay married, Arianna wanting to be apart, wanting Bradley, her dream of Bradley had me fuming! I was like "Girl, you are married to Michael Jackson, an amazing and wonderful man and you're thinking about some stupid reporter!? What!?" He's human he makes mistakes, yes she was mad, but I was seriously afraid they'd never make up. And then Michael came back to Neverland after a few months and they made up. I was so ecstatic when they made up. Man was I happy. I think I was grinning. Lol. But when Tony started saying all that crap about Arianna and taunting Michael, I got so pissed!! I was so glad Michael punched him, he freaking deserved it! And I had a feeling that letter was written by Frank. I could tell by the way it was written as well as the way he'd talked to Michael. Poor hurt Michael. :( I can understand why he fired them...especially Tony. I'm so happy Michael finally managed to help Arianna get rolling in her music career. I thought the way he handled it was so sweet and so romantic! My gosh! That is certainly a really good way to get rid of stage fright! :D And now THIS chapter! The most recent one! Holy...crap...I am SO glad Michael and Arianna are on good terms again!! But that fangirl was both creepy and WAY too desperate! He's freaking married for heaven's sake! She should've know Michael wouldn't cheat on his wife and even if she didn't know about his marriage, she should know that Michael would never cheat on his girlfriend!  And then...that...that...shower....scene. At the end. Holy crap. I was like "Oh. My. God. Michael." See THAT'S why Arianna CANNOT stay home. I couldn't believe he did that, I was so shocked. I mean he IS a man but...wow. His thoughts were so vivid and his feelings were so strong. Man...if you hadn't known any better, you'd have thought she was there with him! WOW! Steamy, very steamy. But anyways! Wonderful chapters, I enjoyed all of them! Very well written, keep up the wonderful work, I can't wait to read your next update! :D

P.S. Michael looks very sexy in that black shirt at the end! That is a wonderful picture of him! I think I almost melted into a puddle at the sight of that photo!! Wow! It's getting hot in here!



Author's Response: haha you are back!! "....and you're thinking about some stupid reporter!? What!?" <------ that line had me laughing and this line ----> "...THAT'S why Arianna CANNOT stay home" I love it!! I enjoy reading your reviews! ...and that scene of Mike in the shower. I was so nervous on how ppl would react to it. I'm glad people liked it :D

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Watch me shine/The Things I do for you...

Oooo! Another good chapter! I wonder why Michael still isn't happy...maybe it's from how much he misses Arianna, I hope they stay on good terms. Ooo BAD Michael though, he was all asking what Arianna was wearing, DAYUM! I love these two so much though. Glad Arianna's been working so much but I feel so bad for Mikey, he's got swollen vocal chords. :( I'm glad you like my reviews! :D I felt bad about missing so much last time :( But anyway, wonderful chapter, I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up girl! :D

P.S. Thanks for the videos. It's all for love, L.O.V.E. <3



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. Don't feel bad, I understand.

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - The End of the BAD Tour

Girl! You always pull through with such wonderful chapters and keep us readers wanting more!! That chapter was wonderful, I liked all of it! I found the moments between Jimmy and Michael so adorable! I loved them! I'm glad he's bonded so much with Jimmy. But poor Mike he's so afraid of losing Arianna that he's reacting badly so often. I mean the easy jealousy, the angry sex he almost pulled. I didn't like that, I'm glad she slapped him and knocked him out of that angry state. Did I like reading Arianna slapping Michael? No. But like I stated it was certainly necessary. Though I feel so much sympathy for him when  he starts thinking of himself as Joseph and thinking he's like him. Michael is about as far Joseph as an offspring can be from their parent, maybe farther. He is nothing like Joseph and thank god he isn't! I loved that they made up though. When Michael told Arianna of what he did, I was SO shocked. Lol. I was like daaaamn. Lol. I'm happy they made up and opened up like that. It was good for them to make up. That whole ending though, with the BAD tour finally coming to an end was so sweet. What with Michael including everyone in on his cheer and them all screaming "WHO'S BAD" was so awesome, I loved it. I think one of my favorite parts was when Michael gave Jimmy his original "Smooth Criminal" fedora. I was like "OH MY GOSH MICHAEL!!" Lol I also loved that little romantic bit between Michael and Arianna before he went out on stage. :D It was so cute. I love when Michael says "I love you more" it's so cute. Anyways girl, wonderful chapter! You never cease to impress me! I love this story so much, I can't wait to read more! :D Keep up the amazing work!! :D

P.S. LOVED the bonus video, it was very enjoyable. The cute moments at the end were great! I loved it. Thank you so much girl!!



Author's Response:

you are an amzing reviewer ((HUGS)). Thanks hun.

I'm loving that every one is fond of Jimmy and yes Michael has his own insecurities to deal with.

LOL at you being shocked. I think Michael really had an animal inside of him who knows what he said in real life in the bedroom.

I had to end the tour with the bang and in a way I'm also glad it's done so I could move on to the dangerous era. My fave era. Don't get me wrong, I love him in all eras but the dangerous era makes me weak. :D

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 - Louder than love...

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm freaking crying!!!!!!! No, no, no, no! Not again! They were so happy and doing so well! They were gonna adopt Jimmy, she'd met the family, they were themselves again! And now they've gone back to this separation crap! Personally, I feel both are in the wrong but with good points. I don't think Michael should be pressuring Arianna into things, he's very wrong there. Just cause Arianna says no, doesn't mean she doesn't love him. He's just been hurt so much by so many people, it's sometimes hard for him to see the differences. Ariannna pointed out a lot of good things. However, Michael had some good points as well. Whenever they fight, she's automatically trying to run away and this isn't something she can just keep running from. Michael's right there, they need to fix it. I don't think a separation is smart. There's too many people out there waiting for them. Too much temptation, we saw that already a few chapters back with Bradley when they separated, in a way, the first time. They need to stay together and fix it with civil conversation and focus on what each has made clear. Mike needs to stop thinking of having children for a second and realize that she's right, now isn't the time but...at the same time...Michael's right too. There will never really be a good time to have a child because of their lifestyle. I personally think Arianna is too afraid of losing the baby again, she kinda said so herself. I feel they really need to discuss the miscarriage, cause they never really did. They need closure and another child certainly isn't the way to get it. As for Jimmy, I do think they should adopt him once they heal. So putting it on hold for a bit is probably smart, but they definitely need to do so. That poor child needs a good home. I also think Michael does need to talk to her more when it comes to business, he can't hide things from her. He should always consider Arianna's feelings and stop assuming things, or he WILL lose her. The hateful words need to stop as well. They can't keep saying things like that to each other, it only makes a situation worse. I'm kinda glad Arianna slapped Michael, he needed it there. Like I said the hateful words need to end. Both need to really listen to each other and fix it. And Arianna, like I said before, really needs to stop running from Michael, running away doesn't solve anything! Beautiful chapters girl, this story is so wonderful and so real. I love it and I can't wait to read more. Like I said, they need closure and healing. They need to really talk to each other and stop jumping to such ridiculous conclusions and solutions. A marriage is never perfect and love is never easy. If they separate...I feel it'll only hurt them both more and make things worse. Keep up the great work girl! :D



Author's Response:

Are you crying? I'm sorry hunnie :( I didn't mean to break your heart. I always enjoy reading what you have to say because you give me an overall thought on the whole chapter which is amazing to me as a writer. You are right about both of them and I, too hope they could overcome this. They both need to learn how to deal with eachother. love ya girl xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 - Goodbye to the 80s....

Ryan White!!!!!!!! :( Oh my gosh, I feel so bad for that child, his story breaks my heart so much!! :( Michael was so sweet to spend time with him like that. :) I loved the summary of the 80's at the beginning it was absolutely perfect! I enjoyed it so much! :D River still seems to be alright...but like I said I'm watching him, lol! Jimmy is like the most adorable thing ever! I love him so much!! :D As for their date...really Mike! Really!? Really!? In the damn car! Really Michael!! Lol that man is always up for a little dare, such a troublemaker! Lol  As for this hiding business, I again understand where both Michael and Arianna are coming from with their relationship. It's eventually going to be time to reveal though. >.> I wanna see Jimmy spend time with Grandma Katherine too! :D He has such great grandmothers. :D I'm curious as to what Michael and Arianna's plans for New Years are and if they'll be celebrating Christmas since...Mike's a Jehovah Witness and Arianna isn't. I mean they celebrated his birthday... guess I'll find out. Lol. Ah the 90s....I have mixed feelings on those. They were both good and bad and I'm worried. I hope Arianna and Michael will be able to overcome any problem they may have. I wonder when Michael and Arianna will have another child too. :) I'm curious. Lol if they even do. ;) Ooo that magazine shoot...ooo!!!!!!!! Michael looked so amazing there, my goodness, I couldn't stop staring at that pic! Thank you for sharing! :D Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work!!!

P.S. I had to stop in Victoria's Secret today with a friend today and they had pictures of the angels everywhere and I saw some pictures of Adriana Lima and I instantly though of your story. Lol It was funny. :D



Author's Response:

yeah Ryan was so yung when he passed away, it's very heartbreaking. LOl, I see that you are keeping your eyes very close to River haha and yes, I love Jimmy and I enjoy writing him. He is so full of innocense and Mike is not so innocent LOl he is very daring ;) 

Grandma Katherine will have a lot of time to hang out with her grandson, don't worry. The 90s are good and bad and they will bring a lot of surprises. As for another child? hmm...we will have to wait and see.

Yes, that photo shoot is so dreamy. Yummy!!

Thank you very much, hun. I'm glad you are still with me xoxo

LOL at your story. Now you know how I feel. They still have that huge billboard in front of my job so she's always staring at me lol

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 - I'll be more than a woman....

GIRL! You got me craving more!! This was a wonderful chapter! Michael gets jealous way too easily. It's cute in a way. Lol but I think Mike needs to agree with Arianna about letting people know about their marriage. Arianna's right, they can't hide a baby if she does become pregnant. I know he's scared and he doesn't trust the media, but they can't hide it forever, especially now that they each have made quite a big name for each other and are very famous. I mean I can understand where Michael's coming from in every way but I also understand Arianna's. You never do know how the paparazzi will be and Mike is a very private person, as he has every right to be. When Mike got that song idea after what Arianna said to him, I knew EXACTLY what song he got ideas for, read closely and you can figure it out. I wonder if that song will pop up somewhere. Guess I'll have to wait and see. :P What worries me is we're heading into the 90's and both are pretty famous and Michael has another tour coming up so...what about Arianna? Her career has takin off and it's JUST starting. What if their schedules conflict. :( Just a thought, I know that's WAY too far ahead but still. Lol One of my favorite lines in this chapter had to be "On the bright side, at least my husband and I got to have the house all to ourselves. So you know what that means...there was not one peaceful night in this house....figure it out!" LOL Arianna. Those two crack me up. :D I'm glad Arianna's trying to repair things with Julie too. No one likes to fight with their best friend. Hopefully they CAN go back to the way things were before. As for Arianna's album cover. GEEZ! Showy much? Lol Betcha Mike LOVED that album cover. >.> I can't wait for him to hear her album too! He'll love it! The video at the end was again a nice touch as well as the pics. I love being able to see what the characters see, it makes it all the more real. :D Nice work girl! I'm sure Michael loved that video though too. ;) He may be jealous though because people are getting to see a little of what he can see anytime. LOL! Mike doesn't really like to share his women! He's so possessive. Lol It's like "MINE!" LOL And the ongoing bickering about Jon Bon Jovi is hilarious, I have always loved that. "And you are never meeting Jon Bon Jovi by the way. You already drive me crazy with his music” Lol Michael! I enjoyed that line a lot too. :D Man, I want her to meet Jon in front of Michael so badly! Ha! That'd be hilarious, I'd laugh my butt off at something like that. Lol. I love Mike's nickname "Applehead" that's always a great nickname, cracks me up whenever it's used on him. Lol. Michael and Arianna are so cute together, I love this couple so much! Keep up the amazing work girl! You rock! xoxo



Author's Response:

LOL yes MJ is a bit jealous but when you have a looker as your wife you have to be careful but the again Michael is so hot she needs to be careful as well LOL

You are a smart cookie figuring out the song MJ had in mind. I love that song....and yeah the 90s will for sure be different than the 80s and Michael and Arianna will have to be strong to keep their marriage going but we'll just have to wait and see right?

LOL yes that line made me smile too. Arianna is a naughty girl ;o) Julie has come a long way, those two will be friends, don't worry. As for Arianna's cover LOL, Michael must be enjoying it right now......The Bon Jovi thing LOL, it actually reminds me of me and my boyfriend but with Michael instead of Bon Jovi (even though I really do love their music but I'm not as big as a fan as Arianna haha)....but you actually made a good suggestion about her meeting Jon Bon Jovi...I might add that in. Thanks, girl. You rock so much more xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 - Happy Birthday, Arianna....

I LOVED this chapter! Nothing planned, huh? Lol What a wonderful surprise. :D I'm so glad Joseph approves of Arianna now! How wonderful! I thought Jimmy "making" Arianna breakfast was adorable!! I'm glad Arianna trusts Michael. ^_^ As for the woman, she still seriously needs to get over her self. Michael is NOT interested! I LOVED how Arianna reacted when Bon Jovi came out. Lol! I highly enjoyed that! Michael got SO jealous!!! Arianna's right, Michael is SO cute when he gets jealous. Lol. Don't worry Mike, Arianna will always love you more then anyone else, even if you're not her top favourite artist. Lol Mike has nothin to worry about! :D You're welcome again, glad I could be helpful. Thanks for the personal thank you, I appreciate it. :D



Author's Response:

LOL thanks yes Michael is very sweet and sneaky with his surprises.

I meant it when I said I loved your suggestion. At the end, you guys are the ones who read this story so you have to like it, that's why I love reading the reviews because then I know where I want to go with the story. As for Michael being jealous, I could imagine how he really was and how he looked when he was jealous in real life haha. LMAO at "Don't worry Mike, Arianna will always love you more then anyone else, even if you're not her top favourite artist. Lol" <---- That line made me laugh.

Your welcome on the shout out, it's all for love :D

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - Welcome to the Summer Bomshell Tour...

Love it! :) Look at how well Arianna's music is doing! I'm happy for her. :) Smart move Michael, finally getting rid of all those horrible, unloyal employees. The nerve of John! To sit there and take Michael's money and hide things from him! Unbelievable! I'm glad he fired em all. -_- I'm so happy Jimmy's come home! That's absolutely wonderful! As for your writing, it's still wonderful, as always. :) I enjoyed this chapter. Important things happened. :D We're always happy to answer your questions. :) And I'm happy you loved my suggestions. I'm glad to know I could be very helpful! :D I am never bored with this story, I love it and I can't wait to hear more!!



Author's Response:

yes you are very helpful. I love "listening" to my readers, after all I am writing this for your enjoyment :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 - You Were There....

I didn't feel this was rushed at all!! :) It was nice to see where everything was at currently and to see just how Mike and Arianna were handing everything. I find it kind of funny that the situation is switched. Now Arianna's the one performing and rehearsing and Mike's the one watching. I don't think Mike and Arianna will have much alone time while Ari's on tour. Jimmy will be so close. Lol, hope they'll be ok. Lol As of right now I don't mind the relationship between River and Arianna. He seems alright but if he ever starts making moves on Ari, I will be pissed. Lol Yay to Frank Sinatra's appearence!! :D Jimmy's so adorable! Thank you for the videos girl, they were absolutely wonderful!!! :D Keep up the wonderful work! As for the Dangerous Era, don't worry, you're gonna get there soon and we'll be with you the entire time. Don't stress over getting there, though I know it's your favorite era. :)

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my story by the way. I appreciate it. :D



Author's Response:

you didn't? that's good then. Yeah right now they have totally switched roles haha and LOl about the alone time, I guess parents find their ways to have their time when they have kids...I don't even want to know when my parents found time after little me came ewww...and LOL at River, everyone is so paranoid about River, it cracks me up. You guys are worse than Michael and I mean that in a good way, I love it. I'm glad you enjoyed the videos btw. I love Adriana Lima and Michael, they are so cute. But of course, Michael is my obsession. Yes, the dangerous era is my fave but it was also a hard time for Michael and this story will have something that would happen that I'm trying to delay writing.

Your welcome. I really did enjoy your story. xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Royal Couple...

Aww how sweet!! I'm so glad Vincent came back to apologize and fix things with Arianna!! I'm so glad things are going so well!! I'm so happy for those two!! You know technically, just like Prince Charles and Princess Diana, Michael and Arianna are a royal couple, after all Michael is the King of Pop! Lol! I remember that part about "Dirty Diana" I found that really funny that, that song was her favorite and Michael took it out of the show! Lol! And girl, that line from Michael, “Hallelujah!! Thank God for us being so horny”, that had me laughing so much!!! I was like "Michael!!" Lol! He cracks me up!! Anyways, keep up the wonderful work, girl! I love it and I can't wait for more!!

P.S. About the lying, I know Michael's only human and he makes mistakes, I'm just worried that's all. Can't help it really. :D



Author's Response:

Aawww thank you....and you are right about Arianna and Michael being a royal couple as well. The King of Pop and the Princess of Hollywood. I love the story too of Diana and Michael, he talked so in awe of her. And that line that Michael says LOL, Michael is a funny guy! I'm glad it made you laugh! I love reading your reviews. You put a smile on my face. :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 - Killing Me Softly...

THEY LISTENED, THEY TALKED, THEY HEALED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arianna and Michael are back! Finally!!!!! Girl this chapter was amazing! I love that they're all better! And that sexy, steamy scene was amazing! Favorite line "He was sex on legs" LOL! I really enjoyed that!! Arianna you're so sneaky. You were supposed to wait! Lol. I loved this chapter so much! I always enjoy hearing Michael sing "Killing Me Softly" what a wonderful voice! My goodness, thank you for sharing! :D Lovely girl, lovely. Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait for more!! :D



Author's Response:

haha yeah Arianna and Michael are back!! and LOL "sex on legs" well what can I say except he is!! and agreed isn't his voice just so soothing in that song? I love it xoxo

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 - Shout....

Girl, you are in NO WAY losing your touch! That ending makes me crave more! MICHAEL'S IN NY NOT ON THE PHONE!!!!!!!! They can finally talk and fix them! No interruptions, no employees hiding phone calls, no phone tag, no business, no anything! Just the two of them in the same place, finally able to find closure!! Though I do really hope they can do just that, they need to let eachother talk and get on the same page, I really the can work it out. As for Julie going to that private investigator, thank goodness! Michael is finally going to figure out just what kind of employees he has, he's FINALLY listening to Arianna! Smart move, Michael! I'm so glad he figured out that he has leeches like that working for him, I was hoping he would. I loved this chapter, it was great, And giiiiiirrrrrllllll the way you had Arianna describe Michael in that last bit, ooo! I almost FAINTED. O.O I don't like River though, I feel like I can't trust him, especially the way Arianna described him. I feel like he's gonna end up trying something on Arianna and screw things up more for her and Michael, which I really hope she doesn't. It wouldn't be cool and I'd be angry at him. Just like Lisa-Marie. Thank goodness Michael is away from her! Keep up the amazing work girl!! I can't wait to read more!! :D



Author's Response:

I know right...Michael is one smart cookie. This is the beginning of a fresh start for them...and LOL yeah that image in my head of him dripping wet while I was writing also made almost faint. Luckily, I survived long enough to post the chapter haha and about River...he might be a nice guy who knows...we just have to wait and see :)