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Reviewer: teo4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2011 12:12 pm Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

No problem :*. Why would you upset me?/:)



Author's Response:

:)) :D

I don't know...what I wanted to say is that I don't want to intrude you...

MUCH L-O-V-E!

Reviewer: teo4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2011 09:53 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

  Yeah, it was me on facebook :)). There were many Alina Tudor, but only one with Michael as a profile photo, so I figured out it was you :). Then I saw that the profile was private. No problem that you declined, beacause I do that alot. I kinda' only have friends on facebook that I know :).

   I don't mind you asking; yeah, I'm in highschool, and I'm 16.

   I can't wait for the update :X:X:X

   All the LOVE! :X:X

 

 



Author's Response:

SWEETIE...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR RESPONDING AND YOU'RE RIGHT WITH my name....I'm the one with Michael's profile photo...I don't like to post pictures with me :)) ....can you give me the invitation because I can't find you :))

 MUCH L-O-V-E!

Reviewer: teo4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2011 07:36 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

  When I was younger, I wanted a house on beach too, but I really have a pale skin and I get burned by the sun very easly so now it's not quite a good idea; I'm Pisces, so I ADORE water and I want to make a pool at my house. :X:X

  The inspection went good, that's what my teacher said, I felt like a feather when it was all over. My face was as red as a tomato beacause I had to speak in front of many people and I hate that....

   I really wanna see your drawings, I bet you are amazing! :*:*

   Thank you for all, you're too kind! and when will you update?:D 'cause I can't wait!!!

   All the LOVE in the world!:*:X>:D<



Author's Response:

Awwww......my darling.....I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE YOU!

 

When it comes to tanning....I AM the LAST person on earth who gets tanned...really :)) ....my skin gets very VERY hard tanned by the sun...

You so sweet... I'm glad that the inspection went GREAT...don't worry...we'RE ALL HUMANS! It ,,Human Nature" ! :))

I don't LIKE too to speak in front of people...

Well as I said,you can enter on the Facebook and find me...oh God!

I REMEMBERED!

Today I've saw THAT A PERSON wanted my friendship!

It was you????????

Oh...I'M SO SORRY THAT i'VE DECLINED!

SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOOOOOORRRRRYYYY SWEETIE!

YOU KNOW WHAT?

I'll go right now and make you my friend!

and to answer your question : I think I'll update on this evening...right now I'm drawing my highscool because my music teacher asked me too :))

Can I sak you something....IF you don't MIND....:

you are in highschool?

how old are you?

MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!

 

Reviewer: Meganjackson Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2011 12:21 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

That was breathtaking... This is a magical and spantangeous chapter. Your a talented writer. Im not saying it cos a nice person. I know in my heart its true. Love you M.u.c.h l.o.v.e

Author's Response:

ok....this is.....um.....I have NO words...really.....

I AM SO GLAD that you liked it.....AMAZED by your comment...

I am a ,,talented writer" ?.....oh.....I don't know what to say to this...NOBODY had ever said such BEAUTIFUL thing to me before....but talented? I don't know....I just discovered that I absolutely LOVE to write!

And I believe you!

A BILLION THANK YOU!

MUCH MUCH MUCH MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCHHHHHHHHHH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-O-....-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!

Reviewer: teo4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2011 09:35 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

  I love the new update! You're doing an amazing job and I love how you're portraying Michael and Ariel's relationship :X. It's so funny with the ,,word's contest" :)). I also forgot to tell in the last review that I LOVE the pictures that you put on each chapter. The city at night and the beaches are speechless.

  No problem about puting the chapter late; I had a hectic week at school too, and I had an inspection at roumanian yesterday where I had to present a project and yeah...I'm so shy in public too...I was so embarassed..

  I also love drawing sooo much, and I was wondering if you did a portrait of Michael. I begun to do some studies of him. I also intend on doing a fanfiction with MJ myself, I have to see how it will be going.

  Sooo, great chapter again !:X

  Kisses and muuuch love!:*



Author's Response:

HI! :)) :-*

A BILLION THANK YOU!

Awww......I'm doing an amazing job? WOW......yeah...about the word contest....it just came into my mind....I don't know from where but it just CAME....

You LOVE the pictures?

Oh yeahhhhhh! I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE THE BEACH! I WANT A HOUSE THEREEEEEEEEEEEEE!

What can I say? I try to give my best and to make people HAPPY!

OH...MAN.....YOU had an inspection? well...how did it work?...I'm GLAD that you understand me so well....

HEY!...you love to draw too? GREAT! AND YES...I did a portrait of Michael too......and many others drawings....um...here's something : if you want to see them ,you can find me on ,,Facebook" with the name ,,Alina Tudor" and at ,,pictures " you will find the section named ,,my drwaings" (you know the translation in Romanian) 

If you intend on doing an Mj fic too then....I'LL BE REALLY HAPPY! YOU'LL HAVE MY SUPPORT!

tHANK YOU AGAIN AND 

MUCH L-O-V-E!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2011 08:13 am Title: Hmmmmmmm.........

It was a cute chapter...Michael is so in love with her...Always saying or mouthering "I love you" to her...He's so cute.

I thought that something was about to happen in this hotel room but no lol...Can we expect something soon? lol

I think that Franck probably catched something we'll see...

You know about reviewing, I don't ask people to review just for having a lot of reviews...It's just I think it's important for a writer to know what people think about your story...

We put a lot of time and of us into our stories and to not have feedbacks can be demotivating, even if writing is a passion for me now.



Author's Response:

Awwww....A BILLION THANK YOU!

YEP....Michael's so IN LOVE WITH HER....,,I LOVE YOU" OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND AGAIN! :))

(sighing) YES.....Frank knows ,,something"-but not precisely....just suspects...

I totally understand you...I feel the SAME!

I'm on your part sweetheart!

MUCH L-O-O-O-O-O-O-V-E!

AGAIN : THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :-*

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